Hey Lee Tek Loong! No one else can acts better than you because it's really suit you. Haha. You memang like this. Haha. Great Message. But too bad the guy at 2.34 thrown a paper. Papers from trees too. Haha. Go Green!
1. Like silentalltheseyear has mentioned, this might actually prove to cause further damage than mitigate it. Do put some thought into that.
2. I feel that the corny music, drawn effects (eg: sparking pot) & Manglish is anti-constructive to the depth of the message delivered. I'm sorry but I can't take it seriously with those in the background.
Sorry to be part of the "-ve" but i feel that the video should generate some sense of awareness while demonstrating a solution. But it didn't.
From what I see, this is a pretty good effort that is done within a very very short period of time. The video editing can improve though, but still better than my video editing skills! LOL...
Keep it up guys.. and never let any negative feedback here bring you down. Keep believing in yourself, and your work, and in time, it will prove its worth.
It was a good effort no doubt but I think the video needs a major face lift. Right now it comes off as an extremely amateur attempt. If you made it a bit more solid in structure and got some facts in it will give the presentation a more serious feel and more people will take you seriously.
It's quite surprising to receive this many comments in 3days. Of course there are positives comments and negatives one as well. Just like the theory of the golden bag. Is simply impossible to please everyone and live up to everyone standard. But we proud of our achievement. More so that this is the first time we ever did video editing and stuff like that. We did have fun (Thx Shadztube) doing this video. But again, thanks for all the comments. When we go global we do better. Promise!
I personally feel this is a lousy concept of creatin d video.video should show variety of usage 2 IMPRESS ppl. I'm not impressed. mayB your friends would feel fantastic.the music background music doesn't sound pleasing but rather irritating.the video's quite fake cuz i dont c pencils flying round in uni. I oni c mechanical pencils in pencil box!the pot's so dangerous 2 me tat if sbody trips n fall,either d hand's poked bloodily n Sone'll start cursing.sorry 4 being critical.
pro: good idea for recycling project. the last part shows we'll have more greens in the future for our children. maybe u can get more actors or kids for that part . but the video is not good. too childish. its quite obvious the beginning is not ur work and just to fill in the time. please show a better standard of english from our uni. dun use slides. i believe u can do a better video that this. all the best!
Great effort! Don't b upset wit -ve feedback. Yes, ther is room 4 improvmt but at least u guys r doin sumtin good & u had fun. That's wat counts most. :)
Great effort! Don't b upset wit -ve feedback. Yes, ther is room 4 improvmt but at least u guys r doin sumtin good & u had fun. That's wat counts most. :)
Agree with rvin61. On first look it was one of those watch first 10 seconds and then skip to the next video. The idea is ok, the cast was like 5 year olds, video was ok (ending was terrible). In other words speechless and worthless.
your idea and message is good..but the video is just pathetic. besides being low in quality, it's also kinda childish. And PLEASE NO MANGLISH here..(i'm a malaysian btw)
Sorry for not clarifying. =) Sorry bout the thumbs down. One of my partner gave one i guess. Cause he was chatting with me =) So yea. Thanks for your support rexyke.
but perhaps you all could improve your language (and not include terms like "aiya" and "la") so that when the video is viewed by nationals from other countries they will understand the video fully.
Another idea is also to expand on this video and create a spin-off where you have a tutorial on how to make the pots :)
Is it the usage of pencils will be reduced after we recycle the used pencil become 'pencil pot'??
thader88 2 years ago
Hey Lee Tek Loong! No one else can acts better than you because it's really suit you. Haha. You memang like this. Haha. Great Message. But too bad the guy at 2.34 thrown a paper. Papers from trees too. Haha. Go Green!
ivanahboon 2 years ago
Creative ;)
NIce effort!
xs2hell1990 2 years ago
i think the video is nice and sends out the message as well as crack up the viewer.
Well the video could use a bit more work though,especially animations. Other than that i think you guys stand a chance.
Tek Loong please stop throwing pencils eh.
unitedstar24 2 years ago
LOLS!! The guy litters at the end! XD
zinrue 2 years ago
Its great!
The idea is really creative.
wkangelol 2 years ago
1. Like silentalltheseyear has mentioned, this might actually prove to cause further damage than mitigate it. Do put some thought into that.
2. I feel that the corny music, drawn effects (eg: sparking pot) & Manglish is anti-constructive to the depth of the message delivered. I'm sorry but I can't take it seriously with those in the background.
Sorry to be part of the "-ve" but i feel that the video should generate some sense of awareness while demonstrating a solution. But it didn't.
windgrace87 2 years ago
erhh.... actually i dnt able to get the storyline of it..
streetblaster 2 years ago
GO NOTTINGHAM!! =D
jhsz28121989 2 years ago
hey cool, sumtimes its not the editing tat really matters its the message... i like it... if the message gets through then its good...
xyberlj 2 years ago
Lolx.. The girls are too pretty not to throw pencils at. =)
Thanks mybiznetwork, shadztube and many others for the encouraging words. Thanks to those who gave good opinion and advice.
Will indeed do better next time. =)
alstonnga1989 2 years ago
why dont u throw the pencil to her
bce6666 2 years ago
Great job... How you guys get such many comments in such a short time? Hope to know how you guys market...
tloong1988 2 years ago
From what I see, this is a pretty good effort that is done within a very very short period of time. The video editing can improve though, but still better than my video editing skills! LOL...
Keep it up guys.. and never let any negative feedback here bring you down. Keep believing in yourself, and your work, and in time, it will prove its worth.
Gambate! God Bless you guys!
mybiznetwork 2 years ago
It was a good effort no doubt but I think the video needs a major face lift. Right now it comes off as an extremely amateur attempt. If you made it a bit more solid in structure and got some facts in it will give the presentation a more serious feel and more people will take you seriously.
Sanyajulai 2 years ago
good effort!!
stupidsyee 2 years ago
Hi friends,
It's quite surprising to receive this many comments in 3days. Of course there are positives comments and negatives one as well. Just like the theory of the golden bag. Is simply impossible to please everyone and live up to everyone standard. But we proud of our achievement. More so that this is the first time we ever did video editing and stuff like that. We did have fun (Thx Shadztube) doing this video. But again, thanks for all the comments. When we go global we do better. Promise!
alstonnga1989 2 years ago
its a good effort, at least i get the idea... well done..
kt1t 2 years ago
rating : 2/10.
I personally feel this is a lousy concept of creatin d video.video should show variety of usage 2 IMPRESS ppl. I'm not impressed. mayB your friends would feel fantastic.the music background music doesn't sound pleasing but rather irritating.the video's quite fake cuz i dont c pencils flying round in uni. I oni c mechanical pencils in pencil box!the pot's so dangerous 2 me tat if sbody trips n fall,either d hand's poked bloodily n Sone'll start cursing.sorry 4 being critical.
cmkhoo 2 years ago
pro: good idea for recycling project. the last part shows we'll have more greens in the future for our children. maybe u can get more actors or kids for that part . but the video is not good. too childish. its quite obvious the beginning is not ur work and just to fill in the time. please show a better standard of english from our uni. dun use slides. i believe u can do a better video that this. all the best!
mysviolet 2 years ago 2
Great effort!! I really liked watching it... :)
There's room for improvement.... Do well.. ;)
radicalrani4285 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Great effort! Don't b upset wit -ve feedback. Yes, ther is room 4 improvmt but at least u guys r doin sumtin good & u had fun. That's wat counts most. :)
shadztube 2 years ago
Great effort! Don't b upset wit -ve feedback. Yes, ther is room 4 improvmt but at least u guys r doin sumtin good & u had fun. That's wat counts most. :)
shadztube 2 years ago
two thumbs up...way to go UNMC!!
xPunkRockDamn 2 years ago
no bad! ^^
losttwipri 2 years ago
Agree with rvin61. On first look it was one of those watch first 10 seconds and then skip to the next video. The idea is ok, the cast was like 5 year olds, video was ok (ending was terrible). In other words speechless and worthless.
danshader 2 years ago
Soil pollution by heavy metals is an environmental problem.
Do you know that the surface of the pencils include heavy metals which will pollute the soil.
I don't think that the plants will thrive after 10 years.
:)
silentalltheseyear 2 years ago
your idea and message is good..but the video is just pathetic. besides being low in quality, it's also kinda childish. And PLEASE NO MANGLISH here..(i'm a malaysian btw)
rvin61 2 years ago
agree with catatoniaunlimited....
the concept, idea & message to be delivered are very nice.
just the way of presenting... need to be improved..
in my point of view.. humorous is gud, juz.. it was being overly done in this video.. looks like kind of jokes video clip...
anyway, looking forward for more products to be produced, de real intention of de video is gud.
de world need ya guys, so dun give up yeah!
tienphin 2 years ago
Seriously guys, you're from nottingham university, not some two bit twinning program!
It's a first try, now try better. here some tips.
a) Don't use slide transitions on a video. It's a video, not a presentaiton
b) Don't use fancy childish fonts.
c) Emphasize on the seriousness of the matter. Not everything is a joke.
d) If the 3d intro was all yours i'd extend on that. Now that's impressive!
e) Try multi camera shots, it's harder to edit with one cam, but the post prod quality will be better
catatoniaunlimited 2 years ago
:D Well done.
cptfellow 2 years ago
good job!!
sgkavitha 2 years ago
love the actress ^^, by the way, i could hardly find any pencils in campus. How can i collect so many of it and recycle into a pot?
Anyway nice work !
alex4eva 2 years ago
Good Job!!! :)
likwen87 2 years ago
yeng lo??
liseechew 2 years ago
great video..
nice job!
AdieAveiro 2 years ago
great effort ....
segiperkasa 2 years ago
Sorry for not clarifying. =) Sorry bout the thumbs down. One of my partner gave one i guess. Cause he was chatting with me =) So yea. Thanks for your support rexyke.
alstonnga1989 2 years ago
hi rexyke. we created this video for awareness purpose with accordance to the Theme "Pencil"
alstonnga1989 2 years ago
Ah, cool. You did not clarify, so the sudden thumbs down is unjustified. : )
rexyke 2 years ago 2
Use mechanical pencils. Nottingham doesn't have art courses.
rexyke 2 years ago
thx! i'll do that..
0hourth 2 years ago
awesome video...keep it up ^^
cynsheng1308 2 years ago
Wow.. within a day, you guys have 15 comments... Not bad. Congrats.
tloong1988 2 years ago
Hit the point wer... not bad~
Yugi1987 2 years ago 5
i really like the pencil pots.
awesome way to make use of them.
i think im gonna try to do it one day =D
thanks for the idea =D
doddles324 2 years ago 5
simple yet productive ! nice work! =D
ftzrvd91 2 years ago 4
very simple and boring try to have ideas people
SuperDracoman 2 years ago
Inspiring. Should at least do something like this to safe the earth.
soonkim88 2 years ago 5
great idea man!
must ask my mum to collect the old pencils and make into pots she sure feel very happy
namaedake 2 years ago 5
nice video guys... well done =) thanks for creating such awareness
tchbub1 2 years ago 5
Well done!
siewkwan0108 2 years ago 5
nice vid. Save tree save us and the future...
anyway, the guy that threw the pencils on the floor, is very funny... haha...
roboticguitarist 2 years ago 5
Hi, think this is a good video :)
but perhaps you all could improve your language (and not include terms like "aiya" and "la") so that when the video is viewed by nationals from other countries they will understand the video fully.
Another idea is also to expand on this video and create a spin-off where you have a tutorial on how to make the pots :)
Cheers and good luck!
streetsavvy 2 years ago 6
simple, clear, to the point!
obleng52 2 years ago 3
haha.. very interesting use of unused pencils!
dydj90 2 years ago 6
Comment removed
ksay7cs1 2 years ago
You guys got the POINT clear..
the pot looks cute~ :p
ksay7cs1 2 years ago 5
Good job... Easy understand...
tloong1988 2 years ago 5