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  • Is it the usage of pencils will be reduced after we recycle the used pencil become 'pencil pot'??

  • Hey Lee Tek Loong! No one else can acts better than you because it's really suit you. Haha. You memang like this. Haha. Great Message. But too bad the guy at 2.34 thrown a paper. Papers from trees too. Haha. Go Green!

  • Creative ;)

    NIce effort!

  • i think the video is nice and sends out the message as well as crack up the viewer.

    Well the video could use a bit more work though,especially animations. Other than that i think you guys stand a chance.

    Tek Loong please stop throwing pencils eh.

  • LOLS!! The guy litters at the end! XD

  • Its great!

    The idea is really creative.

  • 1. Like silentalltheseyear has mentioned, this might actually prove to cause further damage than mitigate it. Do put some thought into that.

    2. I feel that the corny music, drawn effects (eg: sparking pot) & Manglish is anti-constructive to the depth of the message delivered. I'm sorry but I can't take it seriously with those in the background.

    Sorry to be part of the "-ve" but i feel that the video should generate some sense of awareness while demonstrating a solution. But it didn't.

  • erhh.... actually i dnt able to get the storyline of  it..

  • GO NOTTINGHAM!! =D

  • hey cool, sumtimes its not the editing tat really matters its the message... i like it... if the message gets through then its good...

  • Lolx.. The girls are too pretty not to throw pencils at. =)

    Thanks mybiznetwork, shadztube and many others for the encouraging words. Thanks to those who gave good opinion and advice.

    Will indeed do better next time. =)

  • why dont u throw the pencil to her

  • Great job... How you guys get such many comments in such a short time? Hope to know how you guys market...

  • From what I see, this is a pretty good effort that is done within a very very short period of time. The video editing can improve though, but still better than my video editing skills! LOL...

    Keep it up guys.. and never let any negative feedback here bring you down. Keep believing in yourself, and your work, and in time, it will prove its worth.

    Gambate! God Bless you guys!

  • It was a good effort no doubt but I think the video needs a major face lift. Right now it comes off as an extremely amateur attempt. If you made it a bit more solid in structure and got some facts in it will give the presentation a more serious feel and more people will take you seriously.

  • good effort!!

  • Hi friends,

    It's quite surprising to receive this many comments in 3days. Of course there are positives comments and negatives one as well. Just like the theory of the golden bag. Is simply impossible to please everyone and live up to everyone standard. But we proud of our achievement. More so that this is the first time we ever did video editing and stuff like that. We did have fun (Thx Shadztube) doing this video. But again, thanks for all the comments. When we go global we do better. Promise!

  • its a good effort, at least i get the idea... well done..

  • rating : 2/10.

    I personally feel this is a lousy concept of creatin d video.video should show variety of usage 2 IMPRESS ppl. I'm not impressed. mayB your friends would feel fantastic.the music background music doesn't sound pleasing but rather irritating.the video's quite fake cuz i dont c pencils flying round in uni. I oni c mechanical pencils in pencil box!the pot's so dangerous 2 me tat if sbody trips n fall,either d hand's poked bloodily n Sone'll start cursing.sorry 4 being critical.

  • pro: good idea for recycling project. the last part shows we'll have more greens in the future for our children. maybe u can get more actors or kids for that part . but the video is not good. too childish. its quite obvious the beginning is not ur work and just to fill in the time. please show a better standard of english from our uni. dun use slides. i believe u can do a better video that this. all the best!

  • Great effort!! I really liked watching it... :)

    There's room for improvement.... Do well.. ;)

  • Great effort! Don't b upset wit -ve feedback. Yes, ther is room 4 improvmt but at least u guys r doin sumtin good & u had fun. That's wat counts most. :)

  • two thumbs up...way to go UNMC!!

  • no bad! ^^

  • Agree with rvin61. On first look it was one of those watch first 10 seconds and then skip to the next video. The idea is ok, the cast was like 5 year olds, video was ok (ending was terrible). In other words speechless and worthless.

  • Soil pollution by heavy metals is an environmental problem.

    Do you know that the surface of the pencils include heavy metals which will pollute the soil.

    I don't think that the plants will thrive after 10 years.

    :)

  • your idea and message is good..but the video is just pathetic. besides being low in quality, it's also kinda childish. And PLEASE NO MANGLISH here..(i'm a malaysian btw)

  • agree with catatoniaunlimited....

    the concept, idea & message to be delivered are very nice.

    just the way of presenting... need to be improved..

    in my point of view.. humorous is gud, juz.. it was being overly done in this video.. looks like kind of jokes video clip...

    anyway, looking forward for more products to be produced, de real intention of de video is gud.

    de world need ya guys, so dun give up yeah!

  • Seriously guys, you're from nottingham university, not some two bit twinning program!

    It's a first try, now try better. here some tips.

    a) Don't use slide transitions on a video. It's a video, not a presentaiton

    b) Don't use fancy childish fonts.

    c) Emphasize on the seriousness of the matter. Not everything is a joke.

    d) If the 3d intro was all yours i'd extend on that. Now that's impressive!

    e) Try multi camera shots, it's harder to edit with one cam, but the post prod quality will be better

  • :D Well done.

  • good job!!

  • love the actress ^^, by the way, i could hardly find any pencils in campus. How can i collect so many of it and recycle into a pot?

    Anyway nice work !

  • Good Job!!! :)

  • yeng lo??

  • great video..

    nice job!

  • great effort ....

  • Sorry for not clarifying. =) Sorry bout the thumbs down. One of my partner gave one i guess. Cause he was chatting with me =) So yea. Thanks for your support rexyke.

  • hi rexyke. we created this video for awareness purpose with accordance to the Theme "Pencil"

  • Ah, cool. You did not clarify, so the sudden thumbs down is unjustified. : )

  • Use mechanical pencils. Nottingham doesn't have art courses.

  • thx! i'll do that..

  • awesome video...keep it up ^^

  • Wow.. within a day, you guys have 15 comments... Not bad. Congrats.

  • Hit the point wer... not bad~

  • i really like the pencil pots.

    awesome way to make use of them.

    i think im gonna try to do it one day =D

    thanks for the idea =D

  • simple yet productive ! nice work! =D

  • very simple and boring try to have ideas people

  • Inspiring. Should at least do something like this to safe the earth.

  • great idea man!

    must ask my mum to collect the old pencils and make into pots she sure feel very happy

  • nice video guys... well done =) thanks for creating such awareness

  • Well done!

  • nice vid. Save tree save us and the future...

    anyway, the guy that threw the pencils on the floor, is very funny... haha...

  • Hi, think this is a good video :)

    but perhaps you all could improve your language (and not include terms like "aiya" and "la") so that when the video is viewed by nationals from other countries they will understand the video fully.

    Another idea is also to expand on this video and create a spin-off where you have a tutorial on how to make the pots :)

    Cheers and good luck!

  • simple, clear, to the point!

  • haha.. very interesting use of unused pencils!

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  • You guys got the POINT clear..

    the pot looks cute~ :p

  • Good job... Easy understand...

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