Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 10: Bridge Lyrics)

[pemfd]

My two cents...... it might be interesting to try a complete drop of the instrumental at the end of the bridge. Somewhere around the "hey hey hey, crank it all the way" part.

Also, as much as I liked the breakdown you added, in its current spot is seems a little out of place, and maybe a touch awkward.

Its a good idea though. I liked the pusedo radio waves over the kick drum. Maybe there is a better spot for it though.

Cheers.

[taylor2d2]

i like the idea of the music cutting out, but i would hate to lose that drum fill at the end of the bridge... maybe it should cut out for "crank it up all the" and then drums back in on "waaaaaay"

[pemfd]

Not sure if you say it - but I made a vid submission as an example. I dont have the skills to refine it. But in the right hands it could be interesting. Maybe, maybe not.

[songsforsongs]

I am glad to see people using each others ideas. I think that will lead to success.

[lazrpo1nt3r]

The two measure pause seems like a bit much, but the lyrics work out very well.

[jackiemontembeault]

i disagree, i like the pause.

[taylor2d2]

i think rivers did it as a 1 measure pause... maybe it doesnt need to be as long as I made it.

[leyakim]

i like the "hey, hey"... this bridge is one of the best i've heard.

[taylor2d2]

the beauty of the "hey hey" is that in a final version, everyone who worked on the project could send in their "hey hey" for the crowd vocal. it's a way to involve everyone!

[bleed0range]

My name looks so cool in glowy green. Thanks LOL.

[taylor2d2]

im still not sure which version i like better, but hey... it's not up to me anyway.

[lisam805]

Love it! Thanks for the shoutout!