Maybe could have done with a filter, just to clean the image up if anything. Also try and work muzzle flashes into the gunshots and make the sound sharper if you catch my drift.
You should try making a longer movie, take your time on it, for example, put time into deciding on costumes and tweaking the script to make it seem more like it could happen (bullets from the year 2031 would go through a plastic table).
For effects you can buy some really good ones from detonationfilms . com and detfilmshd . com. Of course a lot of effects will need chroma keying and whatnot to make them fit in with the film.
The script did feature costumes etc, because we needed to know what clothes blood would look best on and how we could fill in backstory through general foreshadowing.. (ie, my blue costume and being trapped in a cupboard, scared of the world so tries to represent - 'The Other)
Agreed with image and sound quality, but the editing I had was not the best, neither is the camera.
A longer movie would be much more detailed than this, and its structure would probably be more played out because of it.
class vid, well gd
tombennett123 2 years ago
Nice
BenChowdhiry123 2 years ago 2
Fantastic stuff
Preekcrap2 2 years ago 4
AMAZING SONG! I love the day the world went away!
THEALEXBOND16 2 years ago 5
Maybe could have done with a filter, just to clean the image up if anything. Also try and work muzzle flashes into the gunshots and make the sound sharper if you catch my drift.
You should try making a longer movie, take your time on it, for example, put time into deciding on costumes and tweaking the script to make it seem more like it could happen (bullets from the year 2031 would go through a plastic table).
Dragonianfire 2 years ago 3
For effects you can buy some really good ones from detonationfilms . com and detfilmshd . com. Of course a lot of effects will need chroma keying and whatnot to make them fit in with the film.
Just something to think about.
Dragonianfire 2 years ago 2
The script did feature costumes etc, because we needed to know what clothes blood would look best on and how we could fill in backstory through general foreshadowing.. (ie, my blue costume and being trapped in a cupboard, scared of the world so tries to represent - 'The Other)
Agreed with image and sound quality, but the editing I had was not the best, neither is the camera.
A longer movie would be much more detailed than this, and its structure would probably be more played out because of it.
Tobyjenn 2 years ago
Always nice to hear your CONSTRUCTIVE criticism rather than that which is downright drogetry < sorry had to get that in :P
Tobyjenn 2 years ago
well amazin vid
sonnyjenn12345 2 years ago 3
good vid best bit is where tom
kicks over table and shots :)
liamstickland123 2 years ago 5
brilliant video
AndrewBrookes1995 2 years ago 6