Since we're still working on this piece, feedback would be greatly appreciated. Do take a minute or two to let us know where and how we might improve what is clearly a fairly good beginning? After all, 4 minutes and 23 seconds is a pretty slim offering -- and the story is such a powerful and neglected one. Even we "Ordinarians" can help to guide the work by asking the right questions and pointing out the weak places in the telling of it.
really nice, and sad too. Blacks raisng money like that to help the cause. And today can't even get a grocery store up and running successfull in his neighborhood.
I may have already answered this, but just in case.
I had no idea that this had been posted on YouTube until a few days ago -- so had not seen your question until now.
No, it is just a draft of the beginning of a longer piece now in process. It has been used as a conversations starter in connection with my work with the National Park Service. Glad you enjoyed it.
Since we're still working on this piece, feedback would be greatly appreciated. Do take a minute or two to let us know where and how we might improve what is clearly a fairly good beginning? After all, 4 minutes and 23 seconds is a pretty slim offering -- and the story is such a powerful and neglected one. Even we "Ordinarians" can help to guide the work by asking the right questions and pointing out the weak places in the telling of it.
Betty
cbreauxA6GC 5 years ago
really nice, and sad too. Blacks raisng money like that to help the cause. And today can't even get a grocery store up and running successfull in his neighborhood.
spacemanwalkth 5 years ago
This is great. Was this a PBS special?
SgtJoeHartsock 5 years ago
I may have already answered this, but just in case.
I had no idea that this had been posted on YouTube until a few days ago -- so had not seen your question until now.
No, it is just a draft of the beginning of a longer piece now in process. It has been used as a conversations starter in connection with my work with the National Park Service. Glad you enjoyed it.
cbreaux1A6GC 5 years ago