Not Your Enemy {Nick Jonas Love Story} Chapter 15 "That's...Embarrassing" Des. Box

[lilsweety110]

this girl has some serious issues

[ChriemyProductions]

WHAT'S THE SONG?!

[bennyboy9012]

Better in time - Leona Lewis :)

[ChriemyProductions]

Who sang this??

[caitlincuti]

liked it a lot hate the girl though whats her problem!?

[MaebellaStar]

Alyssa is so stupid! She keeps lying to Nick and hurting him. Thus just making everything worse! She could at least explain to him why she's acting so mean.

Great story though I'm hooked : ) lol sorry Alyssa ticks me off : )

[iiPandah]

PLEASE AD chapted 24!!!!

i want Alyssa to tell Nick about the plane crash in Chep24

[321JonasGirl123]

OMJ OMJ

i love ur series haha

will u read mine?

[avrilrocks111]

cur-what?

[vivianlovesnickjonas]

you dickhead. his hair is so good. so leave them alone.

[memyselfandi1O1]

good for you. too bad nobody cares.

[IloveNickJonas111]

DAYUM! GOOD BURN!

[321JonasGirl123]

then why the hell are you reading a NICK JONAS FANFIC?!

u r so stupid...

[x0teamdemiselena0x]

wtf?! look at your screen name...and yeahh shes not stupidd..what the hell id your problem?

[themaddieshowgirl]

You know that guy Aylssa is sitting by must be pretty hot because you know Nick is freakishly hot. Anyway good story

[rawkstarprincess101]

omj soooo good!

loved it

please return a comment on a vid of mine

;)

[thejobrosfan]

awesome thnx i subscribed

[BlueEyedValerie]

ok how do we get the next one exactly??

[DaisyFlap]

AAAAH, I NEED MOREEE!

I love it when Alyssa stared at Nick, and she's really mystirious that she keeps lying.

It's such a beautiful story, it gave me goosebumps :D

[hsm2fan08]

Chapter 16 is up! :) Go comment to get the next one! :)

[BlueEyedValerie]

OMG PLZ POST MORE SOON!! im begging you!!!?!! this is like the best story i've ever read !!!=]

[hsm2fan08]

Chapter 16 is up! :) Go comment to get the next one! :)

[JoBrosLuvaa]

Ahhhh...

This story rocks!

Haha my fave part was when Nick was like "Oh, ok. That's...embarrassing."

And ooo, new cute guy? Who is he!?

[GeorgieLovesJonasxo]

dude, make a new one! your so good at writingg :)

i hope that nick and her fall in love. well, basically they kind of are, but you know what i mean pshhh ahah.

[jbjbjb4evr]

OMG NO WAY! dude this is addicting! theres already 45 comments post next one!

[oliviarom3]

omg want the next 1!!!!!!!!!

[babexxxxxx]

omg

lovee it cnt wait 4 nxt 1 :)

[LittleMizzGawjuz]

im not sure if ive commented this one!

so just in case ill comment again :)

oh and i made a series too, can u chek it out?

[ZSrox]

you got the comments & ratings YAY!!! new chapter soon!!!

[x0Jonasxfan0x]

heyyyy i love your series!

PS: check out my series guys!

[NICKJIZHOTT12]

aww!! again! she seriously needs to tell him!! and if she goes near any other guy besides Nick ill punch her!! lol Nick wouldnt like that! but he also ouldnt like her not trusting him but some random guy on fricken plane!! lol

[bbgood21]

i just want alyssa to tell nick her secret that would make it soooo much better.plz make the next chapter soon plz. also. who is cuter than nick jonas. ha nobody

[JonasBrothersLover73]

Awesome! I can't wait for the next one! But just to tell you, NO one is cuter than the Jonas Brothers! I would still sit with Nick, even if, (even though it's impossible to me) if there was someone cuter than him sitting next to me. Nick is better! :)

[gigi78965]

ONE MORE RATING AND SIX MORE COMMENTS! WE CAN DO THIS! (this is a reminder comment, this one doesnt count) COME ON!

[n0LLie47]

that was so cute and sad @ the same time...haha

[tennisprincesstash2]

next one !!

next one !!!

great job ;)

[gigi78965]

OMG. ALYSSA! HAHAHA now THAT was pretty funny, after all the nick love, she stops in her TRACKS just for some stranger, i WONDER if nick is sitting with a DROP DEAD GORGEOUS girl. THEN IT WILL BE SOO FUNNY!

[JBLover2008]

add more!!!=)

[mRsNiCkJoNaS1412]

awesome! i hope something exciting happens soon! cant wait 4 the nexxt!!

[lolrockrulez101]

nick is soooo cute :)

[biancaretro]

your so mean you know nick better than that dude and nick is

DROP DEAD GORGEOUS

whatever great chapteer make next one soon

[JennC1993]

to add to my other comment noone is cuter than the jonas brothers especially my kevy(lol)its a little creepy cause i am 14 but whatever:]

[vanessafangirl]

omg r u freakin kidding me?!?!?! ITS NICK!!!!!

no one is cuter than NICK AND JOE AND KEVIN!!!!!

AHHH!!!!!!!!!!

im so mad right now lol im thinking of so many things my head is going crazy lol =] post soon

[Dancer521oxox]

plz let the next one be longer! i NEED 2 no what happens!

[JennC1993]

amazing.

[jbluver3705]

no! she's not supposed to fall in love with him! she has to fall in love with nick! more!!

[ZSrox]

NOOOOOO...now hes going to be really mad & shes going to fall in love with that other guy & shes going to be confused

it was a bad idea for them to go to paris :(

[LittleMizzGawjuz]

hahahaha, that was awesome

stupid guy on the plane, poor nick

:)

[nbvzyt]

I loved it.... It was sooo funny with the car thing! hehe

[amjp127]

cant wait for the next one!!!

[Nileyrox209209]

GREAT EPI

love itt

[JonasTwins4eva]

omg AMAZING!!

[nickJlover43va]

haha nexttttttttttttttttttttttttttt­tt pleaseeeeeeeeeee

[KandMChanel]

rlly goood!!! dont let her fall OUT of love with nick!! lol keep riting post soon!!!

:)

[mony2468]

omj no she has to fall for NICK!!!lol i'd be pist if a guy i liked wanted to sit with a really pretty girl he didn't know!lol but i really love this story!

people post comments and rate faster!

so we can get on with the story! XD

[whoraxlaurax]

love :] ahaha. okayy i was woundering if you have like a teaser to the story cause i got myspace to work but it wont let me post long blogs but i can post the teaser if there is one. i know it sounds werid but its true :]

[amberlynne123456789]

good cant wait till next

[lalakicksass]

Post new one soon.

please please please

[SmileyMileyCyrus95]

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[pwincessdemolition]

omg i act luved it!!

every second of it was amazin!!

:)

x

[stelluar231]

awesome cant wait till next one!!!!

[xxlovexxmexxalwaysxx]

comment.

hahahaha, jk.

NOO!

you should have made her the guy butt wipe ugly!

you evil person!

she was just falling in love with nick!

your making me use a lot of exclamation points!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ugh, i am not happy with you!

[BuringUpBaby579]

Awe people hurry up and comment and rate.

This story is amazing.

:)

[randomuser098]

loved it!!!!

[xopeacelovejonas3xo]

i agree with nickJlover43va....40?!?! with that many...it will take forver for u to update!! please like 20 atleast!! i love this story!!

[nickJlover43va]

40 comments?!!!!! duuuuuuuuuuude!

[hsm2fan08]

On the last chapter, you guys got 36 comments. That's just 4 comments more.

[nickJlover43va]

haha but still! i cnt wait for that long! haha cn u read ma stories?

BTw it should of been 20 comments....haha