17 year old rapper spits on Can't Tell Me Nothing by Kanye West

[taylabieber6]

pick up the pace and you will be alot better, the bars are good though

[Lilflippy100]

Shit man that was f-cking good.

[daddy1209]

you r a good raper but u off rhythm a lil u got to get it together

[4368jkoch]

I <3'ed it! Keep doing ur thing!

[omgidonthave1]

i think this is really good, i must check out your new stuff im sure its brillant :)

[manderhardy96]

This is good! But how come you say to rate it or what ever, but we can't even rate it!!??

[mike23lee]

ur really good and keep rapping

[ricfl10137]

o never mind i didn't see these positive feedbacks under me now, so don't fuck all of them but most of em. later

[OrangeOrangeOrange5]

Youre starting off good *_*

[gta864]

Is really good man keep up da good work

[xoxbabiixox123]

reallyy gooodd!!

and dammmmn u hott.

haha

[southside40688]

2.15 tru 2.30 MURDERED THAT SHIT

[TheRuthy14]

i like buh i think ya can do better (:

[pkgermay]

@TheRuthy14 thanks, check out my newest videos. I guarantee you'll see the improvement!!

[whiteknight1470]

better than justn bieber

[Mr2010JAMS]

the lyrics are sick but ur delivery needs work ;)

[pkgermay]

@Mr2010JAMS yea, this was a while back haha. You can watch my newest videos and you'll see the improvement! thanks for watching tho

[david3142king]

i really like it

[Kevin323gaw]

Yeah G good shit.

[lilF2d]

hey this pretty sweet, i can bump to this

[Bee22553]

good, but i bet you can spit it harder.

[pkgermay]

@Bee22553 haha yea i can, check out my latest vids

[savagenumber15]

I'm diggin on the lyrics, only thing i'd suggest... change up your tone, it's the same delivery on every line. it gets old. emphasize on the real deep lines, etc.

[pkgermay]

@savagenumber15 yea, this was a while back, check the latest vids to see improvement!

[0734434553]

Good lyrics. Work on ur delivery. Seems like ur reading ur rhymes frm sumthin. U shud try memorizing them after writing. Sounds better when u rap from ur head. Keep it up.

[pkgermay]

@0734434553 yea, check out my latest stuff...i think i've improved significantly and you'll like it!

[Loso24100]

I like this he can rap

[TaMichaelB]

yo nice job. just bring a lil more energy, i felt it a bit at around 2:00, Turn ya swag on brah!! :)

[XxCODgodsxX13]

Dude ur great!

[ALEX1010321]

....... is this a joke?

[TexasRanger936]

yo i like this shit kid

thats nice fool

[mzstarly]

you did good:D

[playersball23]

was it sunny in your house that day?

[MrDangerous1993]

You doing your thing but check me Im dope 2!!!

[gabejon951]

u need to add more feeling when you rap. u dont add any emphasis

[brandonbadass7]

you should stop while your a head!!! thats some gay bitch shit... you a lil rich kid trying to rap

[przbklyngurl]

i luv yhu muahzz

[Levitatingman]

nice start i just started also, and im 17 also. check out my track "dreams." gimme some feedback

[nvdubs250]

Awesome... Sounds better than the original song. Please make more there great!

[BlackwatchSoccerNY]

pretty good pretty good. you should try making your own beats and throwin it down, cause its hard to flow with kanye

[pkgermay]

start at 2:00

-and regarding those lyrics, I'm talking about what distracts me and other rappers and how certain issues are taken out of context...please don't take everything literally without understanding the meaning, thank you

[inabear3]

@pkgermay My B, My B

[blockaburna]

@pkgermay wow sum ppl r stupid bro u were really spittin like sum real ish no lie...u werent tlkn bout guns u were tlkn bout how gun lyrics attract listeners and we a victim of the rap game 2day etc. dat wuz deep real tlk str8 poetry. i can respect this right here *nods*...im readin these comments on here and ppl obviously dnt actually LISTEN 2 lyrics nemore 2 undastand em, itz sad

[pkgermay]

@blockaburna I really appreciate that man, really. Stay Up.

-K

[inabear3]

you should rap about Real Problems: world hunger, poverty, prisons, debt, slavery, war, and the government.

That'd be some real ****

[pkgermay]

is this a joke? please actually listen to the lyrics

[selig7]

@inabear3 you cant tell somebody what ta rap about, everybody has a style, its cool, he aint talkin bout money and shit.

[DefStarMuzik01]

@inabear3 but the thing u have to remember that aint gone get u the the money

[lilmam961]

i am not trin to be mean o nuthing but are u cock eyed? i just wanted to know bc u got those big sun glassese on but you can rap good for this to be your first start

keep doin good

[CatalystThaSaint]

is this a Freestyle??

[nook2289]

work on your voice and overall flow keep workin

[elmioestuyo]

your rap is fucking tight Ascer lousy jump and that fallout 14 years and not know how good hip hop is conosco Prinsipiantes that give ua lesson

[duptygupty]

dont enunciate your r's so much. just a little work on ur flow, maybe we've got something.

no hate bro, im just bein real, straight up.

[GuardadoMusic]

Nice house there ;)

[AtavisticOffical]

dude this is pimp keep it up btw your should show all the fresh man your rap because all of them suck and i bet they would be better with your help

[pkgermay]

@AtavisticOffical haha, i don't think they suck i mean, you gotta start somewhere so i respect them for the effort but yea, i'm helping them out already haha

[luke7279]

yeah your rite, nobody likes me, i have no girlfriend or clothes. im sorry.

[YoungTizzyOSG]

I like that

keep going bruv good stuff

[pkgermay]

thanks man!

[luke7279]

sounds like a robot

[pkgermay]

lmao, hating makes you cool

Plus 5 popularity points..joke

[naomiforeal]

lyrically that was great

its nice to hear something thats not making the black race look like a bunch of feeble-minded ignorant people now you could use a little work on your flow, but whatever

god bless

keep it up

[pkgermay]

thanks for the comment but that's a stereotype you're stating there

also, i am half black and white

[Fgermay]

I don't think the black race looks like a bunch of feeble-minded ignorant people. Those are your words, maybe that's a stereotype that you're feeding into, but it doesn't mean that others agree with you on that point.

[dragongarcia789]

Yo not trying to be. Offenseve but that sucks!!!!!!

[pkgermay]

wow, you clearly don't know English since you misspelled 'offensive' and contradicted yourself in one sentence

You= the epitome of fail

[DestinyOfALie]

I am not an English speaking person so I couldn't understand everything but this sounds great! :)

[Jonnnable]

pretty good

[BPHLATTT]

Yo shit coo

but check out my shit bro freestyles and

writtens and songs ill also post a video comment

[pkgermay]

@BPHLATTT did u sub?

btw, thanks man

[BPHLATTT]

naw but i will check my own but if you dont like it dont subscribe

[pkgermay]

@BPHLATTT no worries bro, i like ur stuff and i subbed

[TheKoolT]

check out my beats they're for sale

you would sound great over them

[Phazeey]

how long you been rapping.? pretty nice btw,,, maybe if you got more complex it would be sicker...ether way pretty hot

[pkgermay]

this was closer to when i started rapping so i think i've gotten better and i have several projects i'm currently working on so you'll definetly want to check those out!!

Thanks tho!!

[Phazeey]

yaaa...it aint that bad actually....i mean your newer stuff is way better but still....subscribed btw

[UnderestematedHacks]

Holy shit. I wish he had better sound );

I love this version. Great work man, keep it up.

"DAM BOI. U GUD NGA KEP DOIN DIS SHIT RITE HUR"

[pkgermay]

haha me too, i plan to re-do this with better flow and professional mastering :)

thanks!

[zacharyd211]

im a drummer and songwriter, and i can say that this would be a lot spicier if you used a wider variety of rhythms.

even if you write good lyrics no one will take a second look unless you deliver them in an interesting matter

[pkgermay]

@zacharyd211 I really do appreciate the advice!! When I started rapping, that was my main issue but feel free to watch the current uploads and tell me what you think. Thanks again for watching though :)

[YMInThaHouse]

better than Kanye !

[lyoko34]

it is fucking good shit

[4624you]

garbage kid ;) lmao jk

[vietxforlifex]

people he black that why he could rap lmfao!

[ksausa14]

I think hes good but i dont no why all guys like you act like something ur not like moving ur hands and act like a guy who has a problem with his head , bobble head. ya i WILL c u later man

lol

[pkgermay]

um, what do you mean?

the hand movements are sorta involuntary bro (no gang signs or whatever haha) and i just move my head like that cuz i'm vibing to the beat..that's all man

[DopieDopeMan420]

i bet all my marbles yu didnt write that. probably found the lyrics on the internet which you can tell you keep scrolling down on the computer to read em. but if im wrong, decent.

[pkgermay]

then i guess, you sir, lack any marbles haha

but i did write all of my lyrics for every one of my songs ever recorded or simply written. I will admit, however; that i do not memorize all of them..hence me scrolling as i was rapping

thank you for watching tho!!

[EsCee1]

not bad, keep working on it. this is a hard beat to flow over, but it's nice

[h00may841]

This is some pretty good shit keep it up!

5*

[TheBondjamesbond]

thats cold

[L12faderec]

WOW U GOT STRAIGHT SWAGG!

SO a gurl saw u at the mall u said

just throw it in the bagg! lol

thatz a lil sum lol!

thiz vid waz nice bro!

-L`12

[pkgermay]

hahaha lmao

[dudewhat222]

takee off theee shades :)

good thoo, & i dont listen to alot of rap

[pkgermay]

conversion?? haha, good point

thnx

[kaylaakapeanut]

niiiceeeee, ;)

[DakkOnee]

tight shit

ive been recording shit so stop by my page comment rate and subb!

[Jazza159]

you just need autotune lol XD nice rap

[pkgermay]

haha no way haha

i'm the worst singer ever

[Jazza159]

u think... u havnt hurd me XD na your awesome man

[pkgermay]

maybe next time i'll give it a try

[itzmerve]

someones gonna be famous

[pkgermay]

haha, that'd be nice

love the support!!

[j1495bmx]

damn im subscibing lmao

[FlyBalla92]

is this a freestyle?....cuz its really good !

[CoOyAhXoxO]

that's what's up!

[svendpro]

I really like ur videos..:D

5/5

[pkgermay]

thanks really, like THANKS BRO!!!!

i think this is my best rap on youtube so i really appreciate the comments :)

[svendpro]

yea i can see u have skills, keep up the good work..:D

[PHATSOUNDS8]

Hmm your rapping just goes smoothly with the song, this is good so keep it up!

[JayHypes]

good song

[pkgermay]

thanks bro, peace

[Theneighborhoodboobs]

wow your amazing!!!!! my dad works with your dad at phizer his name is shristos and he showed me this!!!!!!

[Mand3314]

ha ha this is pretty hood and i love it

...

ur pretty hot too :)

love that chocolate lol ;)

[pkgermay]

haha thanks

u should sub , thanks!

[Mand3314]

im fell really dumb ... wat the hell is sub?? lol plz rite me back!!! and ur welcome ;)

[pkgermay]

subscribe to my channel haha, that's all

[Mand3314]

o mi godd im wicked dumb lol thanks and i will deff!!

[xXVioletXx1]

kool....thats hot

[pkgermay]

thanks for the support and the comment!!

stay cool!

[mgermay]

Awesome work lil bro!!

[Fgermay]

dude this new rap of yours is madly hood dawg. keep it up my young gangsta haha

[brockilobrien137]

I'm lovin it Kabare. Best yet in my opinion. -Brock

[pkgermay]

thanks bro for the support

it's always appreciated!!