Kudos on the execution of your story. It is clear, and well done. Scenes need better lighting in some cases, although keeping it dim hides the mother not aging.
Those tape marks really detract from your burst of color behind the band. Instructions for removing them are in the main comments section, if you want to improve this flick.
ok, this is a really really good video. i'm not sure what the sex scene in her bedroom was all about but i think that adding my edit to your story would be something interesting to see. lol just a thought even though the contest if over.
I seriously loved this video. I believe this is the best one I saw so far. It has such a great meaning to it. The little girl is so adorable! I actually cried watching this.
This band is wayy underrated.
Blackhawk213v 1 year ago 5
oh hell yes, i prefer this over the actual version!
BlackXSouleStudios 1 year ago
this video and song=greatness....
kinda makes me wanna deck my ex in her face for lieing to me!!!haha
scarface3131983 4 years ago 2
brandon & me sitting in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g.
sesx 4 years ago 5
brandon boyd= beauty
mars0volta0 5 years ago
this is really great song
paraethnic09 5 years ago
The story is Fantastic... I really like it!,
good luck!
eurolatina 5 years ago
good job guys. especially alisha.
tenbudlights4me 5 years ago
everyones been hyping up their videos but i think this one is lovely and worthy although you'd need to get rid of those markers
jakamo 5 years ago
Kudos on the execution of your story. It is clear, and well done. Scenes need better lighting in some cases, although keeping it dim hides the mother not aging.
Those tape marks really detract from your burst of color behind the band. Instructions for removing them are in the main comments section, if you want to improve this flick.
rholland356 5 years ago
ok, this is a really really good video. i'm not sure what the sex scene in her bedroom was all about but i think that adding my edit to your story would be something interesting to see. lol just a thought even though the contest if over.
yourpantomime 5 years ago
I seriously loved this video. I believe this is the best one I saw so far. It has such a great meaning to it. The little girl is so adorable! I actually cried watching this.
emjade1217 5 years ago
omg i absolutely loved this video it was such an awesome idea to use the little girl in this. I cried watching this!
emjade1217 5 years ago
VERY NICE!!!, i think there is a winner
buff32785 5 years ago
very good idea with useing the little girl. one of the top videos in the contest so far.
vanseamen 5 years ago