wiikid tune blud . y dont u fck the usb mic off and get a simple + cheap dynamic job? + make ur own booth ? piece ov piss jus take a corner ov ur room , build a frame from floor 2 ceiling ( nothin 2 heavy ) and staple old duvets 2 it ! ROUTE UR MIC AND HEADPHONE IN AND ...... CHEK THE DIFFERANCE . KEEP IT UP MAIN
I'm sure you'll get a better studio next time, as I agree with everyone else that I can't hear you, but great otherwise. But your rapping seems to be really good when I can hear it. I'll rate it 4 stars.
the beat is nice. i couldnt really hear te words but when i read the lyrics they were good. but you did say you didnt have a good mike to work with. but try to speak a little louder too, but i understand you dont want to lose the mood of the song. and did you choke at 2:15-2:16 lol. i think you did it on purpose though.
The beat is tight as fuck, i just can't hear what your saying. Your raps aren't loud enough, when you listen to the greats, their voice takes over the beats. And true hip hop is all in the lyrics. Your voice is getting lost in the beat
Everything on the song is great, just got a problem with that you're almost whispering on your song. Idk if you're supposed to almost whisper so i'll listen to some of your other songs too :P
This is good rap. You should just make the instrumentals lower so that you can hear the actuall rap better! Otherwise its a good rap! (Maby get a little harder and not sing about so mutch love ;) many already done that :P )
smcglynn3..i dont think this is supposed to be a hard rap track patna.More R&B if you ask me.You must be from the South cause you cant appreciate hard work and talent.Throwin out BS all day like the Southern rap artists you like is more your style.Auto -Tune Baby..cant live with it...uhhh
I like this bro.The production is very good.You sound like a true person which is good to hear these days.Alot of feeling in this bro.Keep it up.I'm subbing you for sure.Good looking out for new Hip Hop bro.Please check my channel for these underground cats from Rochester,Ny.."585,The Roc Yall" These guys are doing some good things as well.I'll keep my eyes open for new stuff from ya fella.Thanx for the hook up.
Fucking terrible. I can't believe I wasted 3 minutes of my life listening to this crap...Get some quality before sending PMs telling people to watch your shitty vids.
Dope I'm feelin it fam, Feel free to check out my Lyrical Tracks too and you can do the same if you like and have time to leave a comment. Hope you keep it up cause I like what I hear. Peace!
Yeah I feel you. I'm doing the recording on a USB mic and mixing it myself which I'm not really good at but I'm getting in a studio very soon so hopefully it'll sound a lot better.
Thanks! I'm glad people are enjoying it. I got into rapping for entertaining people and not for the money so you're always getting the truth from me, not some watered down commercial garbage.
Yeah the usb isn't the best but it's what I had to start. I'm not blaming the mic 100% for the delivery but because the mic is not professional I can't work with my voice the way I want to but I have a studio I can work at for free so I should be getting a lot of quality tracks out very soon!
Dude that is a great song! You just need to put more force in your voice like KRS-One. If you did that the song will be the bomb! It has a great hook too. You definitely have promise. :)
Thanks a lot! Yeah it was actually the first song I ever recorded so I was still figuring it all out and the mic doesn't allow me to use my voice how I want to. If I start fluctuating it pops and skips but since I've found a studio hopefully it'll all get fixed!
Tight production.. Nice lyrics, but i missed something on da mic. I can't explain it so well, you just need to speak clearer, louder and give more feeling to it. Keep at it dawg ;)
you get a A for effort,dope beat and lyrics,but be more loud and show more aggression,i need to feel the emotion,but im feelin it word up! keep it up!
Appreciate the advice a lot. Yeah this was the first song I ever recorded and I'm learning that it is 100 times better to memorize it. I'm gonna be getting into a studio hopefully sometime next week and I've got this song memorized and it's gonna be on pro equipment so hopefully I can make something real hot.
hey got ur message and i think its actually alright but i agree if u could rap louder and more attitude it would be pretty bangin. but im sure if u fix that i would listen to u cuz i like this beat u have too
Yea, im liking this but the mastering is just unprofessional. Your voice isn't loud enough and that can be fixed with good mastering. otherwise the lyrics are dope, and the beat has a nice sample. 4*
I don;t lie Warren G rapping style, quiet and all. I prefer RZA's rapping style or Raekwon's on cryminilogy - sharp, hard, loud flow. But its not bad anyway
Emcee's like LL Cool J, Common, Tupac, Slick Rick, and many others don't create a love track in Hip Hop until after they are established. A reputation must be established first. You obviously have talent but you will not succeed with this track until you have a foundation. Just some positive critism. Keep Hip Hop Alive. One, Maka
i'll be honest. im not feelin it. it would be better if u rapped louder and didnt whisper. u probly should rap loud enough to where ur voice is louder than the beat. or just as loud. i didnt like this beat either. this aint not my type of music. but keep doin ya thing bro.
i like this shit. keep it comming man! get in that studio. i know its rough. i do acoustic alternative pop shit. its hard to scoop money and shit. got two jobs and im only 17. Keep it up bro
Appreciate your honesty a lot. A lot of people have said that and the problem is that if I fluctuate my voice louder or softer to add emotion, since I'm using a USB mic, it pops and skips so I can't get the verses how I want them. I've found a studio though so hopefully the final version will be more how I envision it.
Its alright, but you need a better voice to match the track, or need to fit it better to your song. It sounded like you were murmuring the entire time, I could hardly understand what you were saying.
Thanks for the advice. What would you say about my voice doesn't fit it? And yeah I agree with the energy but it's hard to get the emotion I want using a USB mic. Hopefully when I get in the studio it'll be better.
Will do. I found a studio now it's just a matter of getting it done. Make sure you subscribe to stay up on my latest tracks including when I finally get a studio version of the tracks I have up now including "Dry Your Eyes"
Nice beat.... But there is no energy in your voice while you dropping ya bar, but you saying some deep, understanding, real shit... But, other then that, it's an okay song...
Agree. Like I told another guy on here the main reason I can't get more emotion is cause the mic isn't the best. It's a great USB mic but nowhere near studio quality. When I get more emotional I tend to get louder and the recording pops so I can't get it how I want it to sound til I hit the studio. I should be in the studio soon though so hopefully it comes out nice.
yeah man this song is old school hip hop but plz put other sad music this song remember me in graffiti days and some street life peace up bro keep it up yoy
Yeah I hear you. It's mostly cause with the mic I can't change my voice up or it pops and skips so when I get in the studio I'm hoping I can give it a much better delivery
Ha ha yeah it sucks a lot. I should hopefully have a studio version up soon. I'm gonna be getting in the studio soon to work on my demo and I'll upload it then.
I dont know what u were listening to but this song is way better than Jay-z's shit man.....not to mention he did this shit on his own without studio equip....tru hip-hop will always be better than those Hip-POP fiends....
How would he get better lyrics? Its a song for a girl man, not just random rhymes with sick hooks....he doesnt have to flow or rhyme like Binary Star (they are on the top tier, prob one of the best for flows, beat, rhymes, EVERYTHING, check em out)
Just b'coz a song is about a girl doesn't mean it can't have better lyrics! What kind of lame excuse is that?? I wasn't criticizing him; was just giving my honest opinion.
Jay-Z's "Song Cry" is about a girl too, but still pretty sick.
Ether Q, keep doing you're thing. In this day and age you're brave in writing a song like this especially when most cats are promoting misogyny and polygamy. You have a lot of potential. All you need to do is practice your delivery, put more emotion and tone into your voice, and get into a professional studio or a good quality recording home studio. Other than that, you're doing good. Peace!
ur rite bout voice, but when u think of it, thers a huge difference between a voice alone and voice enhancers and sound frequencies, once he gets a studio its a lot better
I feel you there. Yeah hip hop is really being dragged down by the content that's being promoted. Like I've been telling people the main thing holding back my delivery is, first I need to practice (I just started recording 2 weeks ago) and second I can't fluctuate my voice how I want it cause with the USB mic it pops and skips when I get loud. But the producer I'm working with has a studio and pro tools so hopefully the final version will be nice.
Agree with you 110%. I'd rather drop knowledge than drop stacks. I could care less about a million dollar deal and more about getting good music out there.
its straight dude...but you could use a better instrumental and deff. hit up a studio or your friends mic. that is better cause your lyrics are hard to understand and im using $80 skullcandy headphones
Yeah I feel you. I'm trying to get into a studio and get some better quality but until I get the money and even a studio lol I'm stuck with doing this. I'm just starting so I'm doing whatever it takes to get my name out there. Hopefully soon I can get you some better quality though.
Thanks for checking it out. Yeah my big thing is always keeping it a hundred. Too many rappers out there are destroying hip hop by lying and making up lies.
Appreciate the honesty. I just started doing actual recording so I'm always messing with my voice and that to see how I sound better. I've been writing for years but I'm new at recording so any advice is helpful. Make sure if you haven't to subscribe and stay up on the latest songs.
The mic doesn't seem that bad. It sounds more like the problem is mixing. Studios are expensive. I would suggest buying a good setup and learning how to mix tracks better. The song seems good btw just i cant tell too much from the quality
nice song there bud. liking the beat and yeah getting in a studio will push u over the top. it gets a bit hard to hear at times because of the usb mic
You have talent. Keep at it and best of luck making it big
Not a problem. Thanks for taking the time to check out the track. Make sure you subscribe to stay up on my latest songs and spread the word. Let's bring back some lyrics and content into hip hop
The mic is a usb mic. It's a Audio-Technica AT2020. Thanks for the support by checking out the video. Hopefully I'll get some studio time soon so I can get it mixed better.
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aftertouchbeatz 1 year ago
yo you need more...volume, but also swagger. im not talkin soulja boy, im sayin you should have morre passion and rythym.
MultiKdizzle 1 year ago
Warren G style flow, good shit keep real hip hop alive!!
stixxstixx 1 year ago
Really good, G funk flow style like Warren G, keep it up.!!!!
stixxstixx 1 year ago
wiikid tune blud . y dont u fck the usb mic off and get a simple + cheap dynamic job? + make ur own booth ? piece ov piss jus take a corner ov ur room , build a frame from floor 2 ceiling ( nothin 2 heavy ) and staple old duvets 2 it ! ROUTE UR MIC AND HEADPHONE IN AND ...... CHEK THE DIFFERANCE . KEEP IT UP MAIN
joohop 1 year ago
nice beat, but i don´t really much... but its very cool when the voice of a woman go singing!! Than i like it much!
mtiesinging 1 year ago
I'm sure you'll get a better studio next time, as I agree with everyone else that I can't hear you, but great otherwise. But your rapping seems to be really good when I can hear it. I'll rate it 4 stars.
Cooman456 1 year ago
the beat is nice. i couldnt really hear te words but when i read the lyrics they were good. but you did say you didnt have a good mike to work with. but try to speak a little louder too, but i understand you dont want to lose the mood of the song. and did you choke at 2:15-2:16 lol. i think you did it on purpose though.
cewldudette 1 year ago
yo the beat is nasty but the "LYRICS"... needs more work...so overall... ima give you a 5 outa 10.... so thats better then zero...
sirdonicus 2 years ago
The beat is tight as fuck, i just can't hear what your saying. Your raps aren't loud enough, when you listen to the greats, their voice takes over the beats. And true hip hop is all in the lyrics. Your voice is getting lost in the beat
snwboar73 2 years ago 3
you just need a better mic. your flow reminds me of warren g a little hah.
minutes2midnite 2 years ago
can't hear you the flow is childish but the Beat is tight
HipHopHead5611 2 years ago
just that hes havin a hard time findin a studio to record at
upyours537 2 years ago
This!
wearinagreenshirt 2 years ago
Everything on the song is great, just got a problem with that you're almost whispering on your song. Idk if you're supposed to almost whisper so i'll listen to some of your other songs too :P
OleSchoolRule 2 years ago
Nice beat, nice lyrics, good shit man.greatings from Poland
Wargi69 2 years ago
get a bigger feeling for the music yo.. your tone is like a normal talking voice :p rest is good
H0llaZ1990 2 years ago
cool track. lol usb mic, no1der the voice sounded kinda soft and unclear. nice lyrics.
good job.
Imco0l 2 years ago
good shit ma dude got ll cool j vibe to it naam sayin
CrunkKing232 2 years ago
This is good . A litlle quiet though but still good :):) x
stokesyybabesxox 2 years ago
bro ur not too bad, gotta admit...ur lyrics are on point no doubt.
also likin that sample...ive heard it in a different song cant think of which but i like ur mix.
Its also good u gotta studio, a USB mic isnt the best thing to use lol
good lookin
HELLxYA 2 years ago
This is good rap. You should just make the instrumentals lower so that you can hear the actuall rap better! Otherwise its a good rap! (Maby get a little harder and not sing about so mutch love ;) many already done that :P )
GTHING313 2 years ago
Yo this sht slapz my dude
ricankidd7 2 years ago
smcglynn3..i dont think this is supposed to be a hard rap track patna.More R&B if you ask me.You must be from the South cause you cant appreciate hard work and talent.Throwin out BS all day like the Southern rap artists you like is more your style.Auto -Tune Baby..cant live with it...uhhh
emdotudot 2 years ago
Damn, could i say "Bro" anymore in that last post/comment...lmao
emdotudot 2 years ago
I like this bro.The production is very good.You sound like a true person which is good to hear these days.Alot of feeling in this bro.Keep it up.I'm subbing you for sure.Good looking out for new Hip Hop bro.Please check my channel for these underground cats from Rochester,Ny.."585,The Roc Yall" These guys are doing some good things as well.I'll keep my eyes open for new stuff from ya fella.Thanx for the hook up.
emdotudot 2 years ago
yo man rap like a fcking man dude not a little girl bro next time attack the track like ur girl just fucked ur best friend
smcglynn3 2 years ago
i like it cuz it's true & you do treat me right :)<3
ADD2992 2 years ago
Not bad at all. Just a bit quiet thats all.
Sychojeff1 2 years ago
Great lyrics. but as an advice put a little bit more emotion in our voice.
Joeystl1981 2 years ago
these lyrics are awesome! but try to sing it louder.
HuMiL1At0r 2 years ago
sonf ok.but put more emotion in your voice..and make an agressive song^^with brutality lines ;)
peace from germany
Alchemist227 2 years ago
Your content and delivery is decent still.. The only thing I can criticise is the quality of the recording.. What mic and software are you using??
Scroll through my page and see what you think of my tracks..
Genesis♪
GenesisLD 2 years ago
Fucking terrible. I can't believe I wasted 3 minutes of my life listening to this crap...Get some quality before sending PMs telling people to watch your shitty vids.
arpulwon 2 years ago
It's crazy cause I'm actually working on a Love song right now as we speak for my Mixtape lol. Keep recording those hits. I'm feelin this heavy.
sypha0x 2 years ago
Dope I'm feelin it fam, Feel free to check out my Lyrical Tracks too and you can do the same if you like and have time to leave a comment. Hope you keep it up cause I like what I hear. Peace!
sypha0x 2 years ago
i had to stay close to the speakers and i had it on blast
no disrespect on some real shit u good but raise your voice up nigga i thought this was that ying yang whisper joint
besides that you kept it a 100 though
8offHeckler187 2 years ago
Yeah I feel you. I'm doing the recording on a USB mic and mixing it myself which I'm not really good at but I'm getting in a studio very soon so hopefully it'll sound a lot better.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
I like your lyrics!
Your pretty good.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Crazybeautiful636 2 years ago
Thanks! Yeah I'm making new songs all the time to get exposure so just subscribe to stay updated on my latest song!
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
nigga real talk i am impressed
hasan7196 2 years ago
Thanks a lot man. Means a lot to get real positive feed back.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
that's good!!
HAFID80 2 years ago
Thanks! I'm glad people are enjoying it. I got into rapping for entertaining people and not for the money so you're always getting the truth from me, not some watered down commercial garbage.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
your not good you dont even sound confident
lutontowntvgang 2 years ago
i had to read the lyrics throughout, good song though
i can relate to the usb mic. i gotta headset too right now.
work on your delivery. like not shout on the mic but feel your words when spittin
peace
dahrealwolfman 2 years ago
Yeah the usb isn't the best but it's what I had to start. I'm not blaming the mic 100% for the delivery but because the mic is not professional I can't work with my voice the way I want to but I have a studio I can work at for free so I should be getting a lot of quality tracks out very soon!
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
haha way better then wayne !
fukkarape 2 years ago 2
decent
EbonyScholar 2 years ago
this song is tight. good work
iceman300ify 2 years ago
DAT WAZ AIGHT
dopboi6 2 years ago
good song...but i like everyone says u gotta use ur voice more powerfully but still dope track
Rapfan020995 2 years ago
I really don't think that this is the kind of music that i hear the most but i think your song is good.Good job!
gmkdp1990 2 years ago
you can do it, but your voice neither sounds very motivated nor motivating
shimunism 2 years ago
word.
InfamousBIG 2 years ago
YOW hot head mi caa hear a ting but the riddim tough n u sound like u kno wah u do so mi ago gi u chance zeet
WHITELITE2323 2 years ago
Dude that is a great song! You just need to put more force in your voice like KRS-One. If you did that the song will be the bomb! It has a great hook too. You definitely have promise. :)
DotChannel 2 years ago
Thanks a lot! Yeah it was actually the first song I ever recorded so I was still figuring it all out and the mic doesn't allow me to use my voice how I want to. If I start fluctuating it pops and skips but since I've found a studio hopefully it'll all get fixed!
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
5 StaRz !!!!
AttentionDeficitDiss 2 years ago
Ur voice need realy more power!
But the beat is good!
Peace
Doe69iga 2 years ago
very hot beat. but u voice needs more power!!
PEACE!!
75boogaloo 2 years ago
this is very nice!!5*
NrwRapperSupport 2 years ago
Dope beat and lyrics but work on your delivery and get a better mic. But other than good shit.
Keep at it bro
Peace
awze87 2 years ago
This is pretty nice.
UltraDamaja 2 years ago
ThaT's a GooD TraCk
YouR caLm Rap RemiNds me Of SliCk Rick
The LyriCs aRe inTereStinG too By the ConText anD the ForM....GreaT Job on The miC, KeeP iT True LiKe thaT Man
971sirkri 2 years ago
some cool shit dude, keep making music, peace
abanks47 2 years ago
This cool.You just need a better mic or some better mixing or spit louder.Maybe all the above.Bomb beat & hook.3/5.
thegreatcrates 2 years ago
Tight production.. Nice lyrics, but i missed something on da mic. I can't explain it so well, you just need to speak clearer, louder and give more feeling to it. Keep at it dawg ;)
HipHop4alivin 2 years ago
not bad..very dope production lyrics are actually pretty tight just needs to be a little louder i think
Zmw192 2 years ago
nice nice , but spit louder like everyone here say , no problem do your thang and you'll be better next track and so on..
dope lyrics !
peace from poppyess
Poppyess 2 years ago
you get a A for effort,dope beat and lyrics,but be more loud and show more aggression,i need to feel the emotion,but im feelin it word up! keep it up!
getmoneystayreal 2 years ago
Dope...But a little constructive criticism...Work on your delivery...The mic is not something to be hesitant...shy...passive on.
And if you are reading off something...Don't...Remember your lines...It will help you to spit more freely.
Nice beat...Nice lyrics...Just spit from the heart and you should be fine.
tekken000 2 years ago
Appreciate the advice a lot. Yeah this was the first song I ever recorded and I'm learning that it is 100 times better to memorize it. I'm gonna be getting into a studio hopefully sometime next week and I've got this song memorized and it's gonna be on pro equipment so hopefully I can make something real hot.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
hey got ur message and i think its actually alright but i agree if u could rap louder and more attitude it would be pretty bangin. but im sure if u fix that i would listen to u cuz i like this beat u have too
MrStevo1810 2 years ago
yea man i got your mesege. nice job. u gatta pull through with what u got right.
HIPHOPrevoltion 2 years ago
Yea, im liking this but the mastering is just unprofessional. Your voice isn't loud enough and that can be fixed with good mastering. otherwise the lyrics are dope, and the beat has a nice sample. 4*
Keep real Hip-Hop alive----->
RAPMANHIPHOP 2 years ago
kl, better than all that mainstream bs these days
danthedonHBB 2 years ago
Nice, but u could spit louder, and with more attitude!!
RealHipHop1993 2 years ago
Nice!
Remssss 2 years ago
nice job, keep it up
LlLWayneSucks 2 years ago
This is the Hip Hop,
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FinnishAirsoftplayer 2 years ago
very nice to listened...5**
mceihtfane 2 years ago
ill track
i love it
AMAruofAssassinz 2 years ago 2
Very nice,
OGDonNinja 2 years ago
Very nice bro
keep that shit up
2pac94200 2 years ago
nice...keep up the good work...5*
HipHopTV1000 2 years ago
good shit bro!
RapOfficer 2 years ago
Algood aye. Spit louder next time bro its too quiet .
TheRapResurrection 2 years ago
It sounds as if your holding back your voice, And to be brutaly honest Lyrics are cool but delicery is slack bro open up your throat spit hard!
HipHopRapManiac 2 years ago
I don;t lie Warren G rapping style, quiet and all. I prefer RZA's rapping style or Raekwon's on cryminilogy - sharp, hard, loud flow. But its not bad anyway
kubus333 2 years ago
Lyrically i like it but the sound quality did make it bad = (
TouchePro 2 years ago
Okey pretty good i like it just speak louder and other than that its tight
96Towers 2 years ago
Emcee's like LL Cool J, Common, Tupac, Slick Rick, and many others don't create a love track in Hip Hop until after they are established. A reputation must be established first. You obviously have talent but you will not succeed with this track until you have a foundation. Just some positive critism. Keep Hip Hop Alive. One, Maka
emceemaka 2 years ago
i'll be honest. im not feelin it. it would be better if u rapped louder and didnt whisper. u probly should rap loud enough to where ur voice is louder than the beat. or just as loud. i didnt like this beat either. this aint not my type of music. but keep doin ya thing bro.
KillaInstinct24 2 years ago
This song is dope I liked it. Keep it up man.
Twuan89 2 years ago
the only thing i didnt like was the fact you whispered all of the song..if you could only rap a little bit louder this could be a masterpiece (:
realhiptothehop 2 years ago
i aint feelin this shit here' jus keepin it real man, not my type of music, but keep doin ya thing, peace -B
StOnEz6one7 2 years ago
i like this shit. keep it comming man! get in that studio. i know its rough. i do acoustic alternative pop shit. its hard to scoop money and shit. got two jobs and im only 17. Keep it up bro
kennyxx3 2 years ago
dope
FiswaT 2 years ago
uhmm a bit boring but i hope its just the quality
yunboyfresh 2 years ago
yeah u gotta blend in the voice with the melody other than that. Its good!
ClearNano 2 years ago
Appreciate your honesty a lot. A lot of people have said that and the problem is that if I fluctuate my voice louder or softer to add emotion, since I'm using a USB mic, it pops and skips so I can't get the verses how I want them. I've found a studio though so hopefully the final version will be more how I envision it.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
Thanks a lot! Make sure to subscribe to stay up on my latest songs!
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
Its alright, but you need a better voice to match the track, or need to fit it better to your song. It sounded like you were murmuring the entire time, I could hardly understand what you were saying.
Zanefanners 2 years ago
I feel you. Yeah I'm just using a USB mic right now but I've found a studio so hopefully soon I'll have a mastered version of it up.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
pretty hot like im being honest the kind of voice doesnt fit the beat but the lyrics are good good job o and use moe energy in ur voice
hollister7900 2 years ago
Thanks for the advice. What would you say about my voice doesn't fit it? And yeah I agree with the energy but it's hard to get the emotion I want using a USB mic. Hopefully when I get in the studio it'll be better.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
great track man!! nice tune plus lyrics!!!
preludet 2 years ago
Thanks a lot!
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
Nice lyrics! Like it
Btw, check out my up coming mixtape!
Up coming MC (click my channel!)!
Appreciate it!
Yorhymes1 2 years ago
cute lyrics,. nice flow. (: true hip hop <3
PonDeFloor1014 2 years ago
Appreciate the support! Thanks!
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
not really feeling it.... but keep at it! music is expression.
Chill
Reelistiksounds 2 years ago
NICE!!!! tell me if u get in the studioo :))
mynameisflick 2 years ago
Will do. I found a studio now it's just a matter of getting it done. Make sure you subscribe to stay up on my latest tracks including when I finally get a studio version of the tracks I have up now including "Dry Your Eyes"
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
nice
TheWarkid187 2 years ago
u need a better mic recording, other then that its awesome man keep up the work
poundcakejake1 2 years ago
Nice beat.... But there is no energy in your voice while you dropping ya bar, but you saying some deep, understanding, real shit... But, other then that, it's an okay song...
TruhbleMan 2 years ago
Agree. Like I told another guy on here the main reason I can't get more emotion is cause the mic isn't the best. It's a great USB mic but nowhere near studio quality. When I get more emotional I tend to get louder and the recording pops so I can't get it how I want it to sound til I hit the studio. I should be in the studio soon though so hopefully it comes out nice.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
keep up the work locc, your getting there!!!! holaaaaa oe
Adangerouskid 2 years ago
yeah man this song is old school hip hop but plz put other sad music this song remember me in graffiti days and some street life peace up bro keep it up yoy
parkour457 2 years ago
I like the beat. Can't hear what he's saying. SEARCH ISREAL SPAIN
MusicMan8519 2 years ago
u better than most of them right now, but ur performance is more like p.diddy ITS BAD!! get that better and u be really good
AZking45 2 years ago
your delivery needs to improve...lyrics are nice tho...flow is pretty smooth...
but work on delivery...
TheCalculatedRizk 2 years ago
Yeah I hear you. It's mostly cause with the mic I can't change my voice up or it pops and skips so when I get in the studio I'm hoping I can give it a much better delivery
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
It's really good, but I'm eager to hear a studio version of this. I know how much a USB mic sucks.
BrokenSword47 2 years ago
Ha ha yeah it sucks a lot. I should hopefully have a studio version up soon. I'm gonna be getting in the studio soon to work on my demo and I'll upload it then.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
excellent.
teddybeartoe 2 years ago
this was actually really good man, that song in a studio with a producer who could help ya abit along the way, could make you huge .
respect.
cola6763 2 years ago
Thanks a lot! I'm hoping the studio is the thing I need to put me out there as a serious force in the game. We'll see once I get my demo done...
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
Sound quality is bad but the beat is nice.
& it's hard to hear your voice so I can't say anything.
5* anyway.
EIvIERiiiC412 2 years ago
its cool i like the vibe of the track
goinganto 2 years ago
good hip hop not followin the trends i will sign this kid
strongties 2 years ago
I dont know what u were listening to but this song is way better than Jay-z's shit man.....not to mention he did this shit on his own without studio equip....tru hip-hop will always be better than those Hip-POP fiends....
LeDuckDuckGoose 2 years ago
I don't like it, but somebody probably does
ccraig2008 2 years ago
its cool i like it but i also like gangsta 90's hip hop
CheddaBunny 2 years ago
On a scale of 1 to 5
Chorus: 5
Beat: 3
Flow: 2
Rhymes: 0.7
Sound Quality: 1
Overall Average: 1.5.
Could be a lot better with some fine tuning. Better lyrics, and better sound quality.
TheInvaderBN 2 years ago
i agree at TheInvaderBN
bapes8 2 years ago
How would he get better lyrics? Its a song for a girl man, not just random rhymes with sick hooks....he doesnt have to flow or rhyme like Binary Star (they are on the top tier, prob one of the best for flows, beat, rhymes, EVERYTHING, check em out)
LeDuckDuckGoose 2 years ago
Just b'coz a song is about a girl doesn't mean it can't have better lyrics! What kind of lame excuse is that?? I wasn't criticizing him; was just giving my honest opinion.
Jay-Z's "Song Cry" is about a girl too, but still pretty sick.
TheInvaderBN 2 years ago
dam man this is nice! this is what true music was b4 all these clowns braggin bout cash changed it.
upyours537 2 years ago
u sound like a 04' kanye, lyric is kinda soft, and lyric kinda plain 2, just being real
yardleyhbk 2 years ago
Ether Q, keep doing you're thing. In this day and age you're brave in writing a song like this especially when most cats are promoting misogyny and polygamy. You have a lot of potential. All you need to do is practice your delivery, put more emotion and tone into your voice, and get into a professional studio or a good quality recording home studio. Other than that, you're doing good. Peace!
jamezthompson3 2 years ago
ur rite bout voice, but when u think of it, thers a huge difference between a voice alone and voice enhancers and sound frequencies, once he gets a studio its a lot better
upyours537 2 years ago
I feel you there. Yeah hip hop is really being dragged down by the content that's being promoted. Like I've been telling people the main thing holding back my delivery is, first I need to practice (I just started recording 2 weeks ago) and second I can't fluctuate my voice how I want it cause with the USB mic it pops and skips when I get loud. But the producer I'm working with has a studio and pro tools so hopefully the final version will be nice.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
con. rap we need more of this this is knowledge building material
poundsounds2009 2 years ago
Agree with you 110%. I'd rather drop knowledge than drop stacks. I could care less about a million dollar deal and more about getting good music out there.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
found your link off hiphopdx. com
its straight dude...but you could use a better instrumental and deff. hit up a studio or your friends mic. that is better cause your lyrics are hard to understand and im using $80 skullcandy headphones
badboy841311 2 years ago
Yeah I feel you. I'm trying to get into a studio and get some better quality but until I get the money and even a studio lol I'm stuck with doing this. I'm just starting so I'm doing whatever it takes to get my name out there. Hopefully soon I can get you some better quality though.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
even without a studio, this still sounds good, nice beat
upyours537 2 years ago
not bad man! not bad at all! hopefully u can find a proper place to record!! this track would sound great!
ibti090 2 years ago
this is nice! stay reaL
mbcking 2 years ago
Cool song.
One advice Keep it real all the time dont rap lies.
GL in rapping dude.
RocaWeaR4 2 years ago
Thanks for checking it out. Yeah my big thing is always keeping it a hundred. Too many rappers out there are destroying hip hop by lying and making up lies.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
kudos... keep em comin
kush123 2 years ago
nice i liked <3
djoletearce15 2 years ago
Saw the link on the Busta Rhymes news on HipHopDX, and I don't regret having clicked on it :)
MontaFDP 2 years ago
thanks for the recommendation homey. i like the lyrical content but work on your voice. you need more conviction
turpinian 2 years ago
Appreciate the honesty. I just started doing actual recording so I'm always messing with my voice and that to see how I sound better. I've been writing for years but I'm new at recording so any advice is helpful. Make sure if you haven't to subscribe and stay up on the latest songs.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
The mic doesn't seem that bad. It sounds more like the problem is mixing. Studios are expensive. I would suggest buying a good setup and learning how to mix tracks better. The song seems good btw just i cant tell too much from the quality
meence 2 years ago
Aite! it aint nun dat special
Hustlers1Ambition 2 years ago
nice song there bud. liking the beat and yeah getting in a studio will push u over the top. it gets a bit hard to hear at times because of the usb mic
You have talent. Keep at it and best of luck making it big
Thuggintube 2 years ago
This song is ok:)
lalassssss 2 years ago
not bad dude..keep it up
Trestin67 2 years ago
wow nice thank you so much for sendin me that e-mail like seriously sick song
poly2300 2 years ago
Not a problem. Thanks for taking the time to check out the track. Make sure you subscribe to stay up on my latest songs and spread the word. Let's bring back some lyrics and content into hip hop
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
itz pretty good. for using a usb mic, it good anywayz luv tha beat!!!
Good Job
Nativegangsta4life 2 years ago
Thanks for checking it out. Yeah the beat is nice. Hopefully I'll get into a studio soon so it'll sound even better.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
I love the instrumental.
Good job.
djkoopz 2 years ago
i'm in love with this song :) it's pretty amazing. keep it up.
ADD2992 2 years ago
What mic you have? Also the quality just need some good mixing that's all.
TheHustlingYoungster 2 years ago
The mic is a usb mic. It's a Audio-Technica AT2020. Thanks for the support by checking out the video. Hopefully I'll get some studio time soon so I can get it mixed better.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago
That's actually a good usb mic. I can mix it for ya if you want me too. I do mixing/producing for people.
TheHustlingYoungster 2 years ago
get a better mic and mix the voice better with tha track, imma subscribe just to hear your next songs, this beat hot though
totalblur123 2 years ago
Thanks for the subscription. Yeah I agree the mic isn't all that but I'm on a budget so for now it's all I've got to work with.
TheEtherQ 2 years ago