In need of some sound editing, namely non-continuous sounds. Some of the action shots had me lost going from A to B and I felt like I needed to re-think the actor's placement in space after some of them because the shots weren't long enough or showed clearly enough what had occurred in them.
Congrats! This video has been awarded the "Pies Equals Comedy" Channel's Blue Ribbon of Excellence for representing and upholding the very best of the slapstick humor tradition. Excellent job!
Oh, man! GREAT, creative and funny little video for 9/10th of the way through, and then you screw up the payoff by filming from behind so you don't actually see what happens! Why did you do that?
After watching video a second time you can see that the first shot in the kitchen is on the first floor, when you see the window and the garage in the back.
The scene then goes to a second floor of a grand hallway.Oops!
Brilliant acting and direction, gripping, funny and highly entertaining all the way through from the very start (this is where most of the other entrants fall woefully short). Congratulations, this is a winner no matter what!
In need of some sound editing, namely non-continuous sounds. Some of the action shots had me lost going from A to B and I felt like I needed to re-think the actor's placement in space after some of them because the shots weren't long enough or showed clearly enough what had occurred in them.
cerickNY 11 months ago
Lol. Now that was funny.
mfambro 1 year ago
Congrats! This video has been awarded the "Pies Equals Comedy" Channel's Blue Ribbon of Excellence for representing and upholding the very best of the slapstick humor tradition. Excellent job!
PiesEqualsComedy 1 year ago
Oh, man! GREAT, creative and funny little video for 9/10th of the way through, and then you screw up the payoff by filming from behind so you don't actually see what happens! Why did you do that?
Jolly4jc 1 year ago
this film blows
chickentava 2 years ago
Great comedic short! Well done!
Kechara3 2 years ago
congrats on winning the film contest!!! this short is so clever!
tanqueraerae 2 years ago
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tanqueraerae 2 years ago
Great video! Keep up the good work!
FISHUNTER134 2 years ago
excellent
redsox1006 2 years ago
After watching video a second time you can see that the first shot in the kitchen is on the first floor, when you see the window and the garage in the back.
The scene then goes to a second floor of a grand hallway.Oops!
corky1864 2 years ago
This short is a great metaphor for life in general. Even with the best of intentions, we realize we are powerless when it comes to the Cosmic Snafus.
rainbowfollytube 2 years ago 2
Brilliant acting and direction, gripping, funny and highly entertaining all the way through from the very start (this is where most of the other entrants fall woefully short). Congratulations, this is a winner no matter what!
adinap13 2 years ago
Johannes- You got what it takes. This demonstrates excellent direction and script!
ACD14621 2 years ago
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ACD14621 2 years ago
Great work, Johannes! Very tasty.
eggwork 2 years ago
Brilliant altogether. Very funny. Darren Stevenson is astounding!
nynancyo 2 years ago 2
This is really fun. I like the physicality of the whole piece. Well done.
HeathaNayDonDon 2 years ago
Good job - this is my fave entry so far
hellojustmehere 2 years ago
Very well done!
corky1864 2 years ago