the only major clip that can be taken out of this is the title card which i think is done very well. There is clutter in the other clips, particularly the garage scene and the face in television reflection is good, although would work better as an image or quick clip. well done however. in future, more knowledge of mise-en-scene would prove better :)
the only major clip that can be taken out of this is the title card which i think is done very well. There is clutter in the other clips, particularly the garage scene and the face in television reflection is good, although would work better as an image or quick clip. well done however. in future, more knowledge of mise-en-scene would prove better :)
vidswanttosees 1 year ago