was a good attempt, and youll be good at it one day, but this just seemed to stilted/late night hosty type stand up to me if you know what im saying. dont make every punchline sound like it needs a rimshot after it. then add better transitions, but yea man, it takes balls, so good job either way.
dude keep it up...your jokes were corny and awkward but i smiled the whole time and i even laughed out load a couple of times...this is just a shitty audience. You are at a damn coffee been!
Seriously, some of the material here is really quite good, genuinely good lines. Confidence and delivery, not so much, but still, good work. Really like some of the material
Man I'm a comic myself and I thought that was very good. "I'm everybody's type"=funny. The horse joke: pause before the punch line I'd suggest. I've got to say I love the way you explain the joke afterwards, it's hilarious "you know eh... she's anorexic". I think you need to work the awkward, cheesy joke angle more though... it's funny if you play up to it. I hope you continued because you've a lot of potential. Well done sir, I tip my hat to you.
Horse-chick joke was good. But I think you lost them with "blew her brains out". I think you should have just said shot her. You don't need the shock for this joke...its already shocking.
I did a gig where I was the only comic once. I was sandwiched between folk singers and I know how hard it can be. I thought the jokes were good and your timing and intonnantion were spot on. Really well done.
Hahaha! This is much better than the last one I saw you in. A lot of the people didn't laugh but I think they were retarded. Your jokes seemed to go right over their head and then whip back around and hit them in the back.
Dude you have balls of steel just for getting up there, especially being the ONLY person to get up there. That takes huge clankers, man. Don't listen to any haters. If you want some constructive criticism . . . your jokes were pretty good but just keep performing as often as possible because you were obviously nervous as fuck and you gotta get over that before you can really have the audience eating out of the palm of your hand. Keep it up man, good job.
Your jokes are not bad, I genuinely laughed at Aloha one. Maybe work on some transitions and delivery, you sounded a bit nervous. Good job overall, will check out your other stuff.
0:50 giant groan for his lousy punchline
raydempsey 4 days ago
Ba-dum-bum Chhhhh!
papatoony 4 weeks ago
Puns are shit
FasterthanSpeed414 1 month ago
i laughed so fuckin hard :D loved it!!
shit audience though. but great , material :D
moekanz 5 months ago
haha good job man I liked it my fuckin knees were shaking my first stand up show
B4R5O6O7K 1 year ago
blew her brains out bit is gold.
abrythenabry 1 year ago 2
you are great man
itsyourboytjy 1 year ago
"get it? cause he beat them?"
rileybobo50 1 year ago 2
not bad man keep it up that takes balls.
Sneak693 1 year ago
was a good attempt, and youll be good at it one day, but this just seemed to stilted/late night hosty type stand up to me if you know what im saying. dont make every punchline sound like it needs a rimshot after it. then add better transitions, but yea man, it takes balls, so good job either way.
xguitarxdementiax 1 year ago
Grand Theft Auto is a good joke.
christhemountain 1 year ago
i like the way you just kept going! nice joke at the end
beatlegreg07 1 year ago
Nice bro! U did awesome! I hope when i do my first Stand up comedy that i dont like mess up or anything :l
blacksushi150 1 year ago
was this screech from saved by the bell
jallendubya 1 year ago
YOU STINK!
JohnnyWeld 1 year ago
@JohnnyWeld spongebob refrence ftw
MrDarthvader011 1 year ago
nice
MrJamil28 1 year ago
dude keep it up...your jokes were corny and awkward but i smiled the whole time and i even laughed out load a couple of times...this is just a shitty audience. You are at a damn coffee been!
ChurchsPinkfuzzy 1 year ago 2
Seriously, some of the material here is really quite good, genuinely good lines. Confidence and delivery, not so much, but still, good work. Really like some of the material
MrBenjalo 1 year ago 2
tell me this is a joke and someone put you up to this? your not really serious abt these jokes are you?
asd910ddm 1 year ago
Man I'm a comic myself and I thought that was very good. "I'm everybody's type"=funny. The horse joke: pause before the punch line I'd suggest. I've got to say I love the way you explain the joke afterwards, it's hilarious "you know eh... she's anorexic". I think you need to work the awkward, cheesy joke angle more though... it's funny if you play up to it. I hope you continued because you've a lot of potential. Well done sir, I tip my hat to you.
Gavfather 1 year ago 3
Horse-chick joke was good. But I think you lost them with "blew her brains out". I think you should have just said shot her. You don't need the shock for this joke...its already shocking.
Delivery needs work.
Props for doing this though.
kintar90 1 year ago
Keep trying buddy
lwmisner3 2 years ago
i like the one where you go "the third girl i dated told me we should date other people so i blew...dated her sister"
ipinnedu 2 years ago
I did a gig where I was the only comic once. I was sandwiched between folk singers and I know how hard it can be. I thought the jokes were good and your timing and intonnantion were spot on. Really well done.
Archiewhynot 2 years ago
needs better material and way 2 corny
Sviolinist 2 years ago
hahahaha i laughed, so its not too bad
iDiOTrx 2 years ago 4
Your so corny, especially the minor/miner one.
coolcat37773 2 years ago
Hmm to be honest your style isn't up to scratch but you have balls of steel for going up there, need to relax more though.
xSynapse 2 years ago
grand theft auto...awesome joke
ray36power 2 years ago
i think you were funny in that akward type of way. keep up the good work!
mixmastermikepwt 2 years ago
Stale audience.
Vaduh 2 years ago 7
Hahaha! This is much better than the last one I saw you in. A lot of the people didn't laugh but I think they were retarded. Your jokes seemed to go right over their head and then whip back around and hit them in the back.
spellingitgood 3 years ago
Dude you have balls of steel just for getting up there, especially being the ONLY person to get up there. That takes huge clankers, man. Don't listen to any haters. If you want some constructive criticism . . . your jokes were pretty good but just keep performing as often as possible because you were obviously nervous as fuck and you gotta get over that before you can really have the audience eating out of the palm of your hand. Keep it up man, good job.
RicksonByArmbar 3 years ago
lame...honestly tho my opinion dont mean shit. but yeah...keep it up f'real. check out my video....it destroys this, and it was my first time.
DCaple0013 3 years ago
dont say "nothing?" or repeat the punch lines every time as if implying the audience is retarded lol, they dont like that.
thirtyaughsix 3 years ago
hahaha all youre videos art great keep it up
KOOLAID951 3 years ago
Your transitions get better and better when switching subjects which keeps the flow of your standup pretty smooth. Keep it up!
xXKugeXx 3 years ago
Props to you for even doing that. +1.
k3n12ock 3 years ago
I lol more at ur pick up videos.
kaaud 3 years ago
Your jokes are not bad, I genuinely laughed at Aloha one. Maybe work on some transitions and delivery, you sounded a bit nervous. Good job overall, will check out your other stuff.
shogunofyellow 3 years ago
what they said /|
fellowheromonk 3 years ago
dude is another pick up lines video comin? your stand up is good though nice job
WesMantO0th 3 years ago
each time u do stand up u get funnier and funnier... FIRST COMMENT!!!.... and maybe last...
phillywigs 3 years ago 2