Tubby Nerd Humiliates Pro Copywriters with 19 minute lesson

[kitchensinkcleaner]

You've got credible points on headline construction. To humiliate pro copywriters, though, you need more than headlines. I'm referring to:

1.Brevity - You could've said in five words what you did in twelve.

2.Points grouping - your points were OK, but were all over the place. You gave a commentary while presenting a point. Distracting!

3.Claim validity - How exactly did you humiliate pro copywriters? Claims must be validated, and I didn't hear any. And yes, there are more points to consider.

[RobertDomark]

Great video, Thank you very much :)

[keatir]

Hi Ed

I must checkout your video series in the Immediate Edge, your videos always look cool. Also great info.

Rob

[CostaRicaChannel]

Thanks for the great info on headlines and copywriting. Costa Rica Channel