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sugioh 11 months ago
The very slight pause before the characters move forward slows down the momentum of the opening shot. The cut to Josh getting his head slammed into the machine doesn't flow well into the next cut of his expression.
cuts were not that great but the end was funny
adjustonetwo 11 months ago
Nice cuts. A bit too much hang time at the start and on the big boy's tummy.
Hamabkun 11 months ago
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sugioh 11 months ago
The very slight pause before the characters move forward slows down the momentum of the opening shot. The cut to Josh getting his head slammed into the machine doesn't flow well into the next cut of his expression.
sugioh 11 months ago
cuts were not that great but the end was funny
adjustonetwo 11 months ago
Nice cuts. A bit too much hang time at the start and on the big boy's tummy.
Hamabkun 11 months ago