Ah, I like this peace very much, Hollian ever so slight twist of perspective in your usual style to a new door opened. It is not difficult to see this placed in a summary position in your book, at or near its conclusion. This is almost an epitaph for the splintered soul given up in self realization and given over through the heart, less amorous in its passion, yet greater in compassion for self; a tender yet bittersweet admission, a confession, a soul searching appeal to know oneself and ...
(cont'd 2/3) ... accept oneself, even if realized in surrogacy through another, a lover. And most loudly spoken, to love oneself, even for the beauties of the flaws. Another thought, that you should (if at all possible) have the book produced containing a DVD of your videos for each peace. Your eye for the symbolic image, and the mood of each image, is a fine craft and your use of each illustration sets not only the visual tone, but the meter of your poetry, like ...
(cont'd 3/3) ... the rhythm of a slow and deep breathing, a breathing come from deeper within. Beautifully written, dear lady, and another for my favorites list.
You are a true literally genius!! Every litlle bit of it written I felt connected to and I felt that it was so lovely and breathe taking a cried after watching it while i took in its meaning. It was simple beautiful and there ae a few poets that I find out there that can put as much feeling as you don in a piece of literature. Beautiful<3
Exactly how I feel...great work.
sistine29 1 year ago
Ah, I like this peace very much, Hollian ever so slight twist of perspective in your usual style to a new door opened. It is not difficult to see this placed in a summary position in your book, at or near its conclusion. This is almost an epitaph for the splintered soul given up in self realization and given over through the heart, less amorous in its passion, yet greater in compassion for self; a tender yet bittersweet admission, a confession, a soul searching appeal to know oneself and ...
harleynanda 2 years ago
(cont'd 2/3) ... accept oneself, even if realized in surrogacy through another, a lover. And most loudly spoken, to love oneself, even for the beauties of the flaws. Another thought, that you should (if at all possible) have the book produced containing a DVD of your videos for each peace. Your eye for the symbolic image, and the mood of each image, is a fine craft and your use of each illustration sets not only the visual tone, but the meter of your poetry, like ...
harleynanda 2 years ago
(cont'd 3/3) ... the rhythm of a slow and deep breathing, a breathing come from deeper within. Beautifully written, dear lady, and another for my favorites list.
harleynanda 2 years ago
Hmmm. Pardon the typo in the first line of part one. The elipsis was dropped. It should read "Holli...an ever", etc.
harleynanda 2 years ago
You are a true literally genius!! Every litlle bit of it written I felt connected to and I felt that it was so lovely and breathe taking a cried after watching it while i took in its meaning. It was simple beautiful and there ae a few poets that I find out there that can put as much feeling as you don in a piece of literature. Beautiful<3
dnanything 2 years ago
i love ur work!! =]
LovrPeace 2 years ago
I'm so happy you do - thank you! =)
poeticone2812009 2 years ago