Oh wow. Well done, very creative, good story, great effects, the music was deffo a great choice as it's quite freaky. Very professional, I wish I had a camcorder as the clearer picture does make it look so much better. Keep up the good work x
This is so awesome! What an original work of art! The shots, acting, editing, and whole over all concept is brilliant!!!! better than almost anything on T.V. today! Why isn't this featured on youtube? Just goes to show you how F'd up the system is! a 5 star video! Dave D.
Well, there certainly are a few layers to this. I saw it, basicly, as a commentary on an abusive relationship, in which the woman's entire importance is based on her carrying out the tasks that she is given. She probably hadn't much of a life beyond that on this plane.
I liked how you dissolved her out as she continued to clean, tough on the guy having to nfreeze and stay perfectly still. I guess she is supposed to be an actual ghost/being rather than just a recording since she was looking around and figuring out that she was dead. Now did her dissolving out mean that she left? or did the reappearance of the blood mean that she would repeat the same thing? Or are we supposed to wonder on that?
Mountcastle73, First of all I want to thank you for taking the time to scope out some of my videos, I really appreciate it Jerel. Yes, she is a ghost, her dissolve is for people who could get confused about her looking at her own corpse, I needed to establish clearly that she was a ghost. The end credits with the blood, I just bookended it.
This is kinda a joke about women who obsessively clean too. She had to come back to clean her own murder scene. I have some wacky ideas! HA HA!
Perfection in editing - this is truly a 3 minute masterpiece! This is a 5 star WOW ~!~
I think this belongs somewhere else - in addition to YouTubeland. I am really struck by this! And nothing witty or snip in commentary - just totally appreciative of the work. So very first rate.
That was the best video I have seen in awhile & I really mean that!!! I had to watch it twice cause the whole time, I thought it was you that was the killer...and Im sure thats what you wanted people to think so awesome job!!!!!
Wow, actually pretty good! Liked the editing. Fake blood needs to be darker though:too -pinkish on video. Music added greatly to it also. Overall, a well done bit!
hay i voted for this video in that contest. but i was too late on the voting because i lost a day somehow. funny. iggy35 just redirected me to your video feature me.
Very nice concept, well-executed (so to speak).:) You seem to have a serious appreciation of horror, so you might like my video called A PSYCHO POEM. Again, very nicely done.:)
nice video. im still checking out the compition but this video is added to my finalist voting list. good luck. i think the title for this video is freat and yep it always seems no matter what a womens work is never done. so im told.
That was great... the twist at the end was perfect. What software do you use, I always wanted to make a movie like this one... but don't have the right software. Anyway, great video =)
Haha ... I love it. I kept wondering why the woman wasn't more frantic in cleaning up all the blood! The ending was really cool! Trying to be careful not to spoil it for others. GREAT JOB! I gave it five stars.
I voted for you because it's a damned good little film like the closeups twist theme music almost too much but scary like sounds such as vacuum ..... etc. etc..... mark
fantastic! i love it! now maybe all the guys will realize how much work it is to clean up after the party...hope the cops dont show up cause if they do, the forensic techs will still find all sorts of evidence....5 stars!
Scary, Spooky And Shocking, Left a chill running up and down my spine even after it was over! Judging by creativity and originality! I vote for delisaproductions!
That was a good job. Even after death, the job still has to be done... heehee.
I feel bad now. I've already used my vote on someone else. :( I didn't know that your 'Halloween' video was this contest or I would have waited before voting. I sorry. :^(
You are one of the best best best in creation video
Very exciting video
It make me so nervous
AuntieKeiko 2 years ago
interesting...
jiaoyinyang 2 years ago
Bloody fantastic! =^)
GContelli 3 years ago
How did I miss this? Wonderful WONDERFUL! And such great make-up FX! 5 dessicated stars, and a high five on the "elm" music. luv it!
allmuppetcaligula 3 years ago
OMG!! That freaked me right out!! Excellent video. WOW!! GL in the contest - this one should do it for sure!! :_)
RhiannanAR1 3 years ago
A fabulous video! I loved it :-)
The music was perfect and the blood and gore looked very real!
thanks for taking part and good luck!
NuttersClub 3 years ago
Great video and fx! 5 stars! Really creepy and gory!
mia0899cs 3 years ago
Oh wow. Well done, very creative, good story, great effects, the music was deffo a great choice as it's quite freaky. Very professional, I wish I had a camcorder as the clearer picture does make it look so much better. Keep up the good work x
bluecandylover 3 years ago
this is a really great video for the contest you should win lots of goodies with this video great work on this video good job
RickyCountryAtHeart 3 years ago
It's an hard work, but someone has to do it :-)
5*****
Sulay
ifnwebtvbeta 3 years ago
wow,i thought it was going to be your husband dead.good job and happy halloween :)
Eviscerator15 3 years ago
Hahaha, I really am not fond of horror, but I think this one is great, and I love the title!
Roeleke (twirretwarre)
catseyes4you 3 years ago
yikes
iseehaters 3 years ago
good job! 5* lol =)
ukp42 3 years ago
Oh wow, SCARRRYYYY!!! I love this one, bravo!!
Forrest-Uriah
fiwaszewski 3 years ago
Intense video! Outstanding, very well done! 5*s!
greggfla 3 years ago
I missed this? This is a masterpiece. Great editing, acting and cinematography not to mention(but they always do) great story.
PuppyZwolle 3 years ago
I love this video...one of my fav's:)
This belongs on the big screen!!!!
dogpatchdebbie 3 years ago
I agree 100%!
greggfla 3 years ago
Great concept, very well executed - I'm spooked!
ladypn 3 years ago
Brilliant film & editing work. Your music selection was perfect! AWESOME 5*
Shane
ripper778 3 years ago
love the editing, and a great twist at the end
jopaulin 3 years ago
This is so awesome! What an original work of art! The shots, acting, editing, and whole over all concept is brilliant!!!! better than almost anything on T.V. today! Why isn't this featured on youtube? Just goes to show you how F'd up the system is! a 5 star video! Dave D.
popartproductions 3 years ago
"A WOMAN'S WORK IS NEVER DONE"
Damn straight! Now go make me a sandwich!
haha jk, I had to do it
Nice vid
xBlitzerx 3 years ago
I love your silent style!!! Hilarious message - thanks for keeping me entertained on a sleepless night!
KakoiDedikuSan 3 years ago
Well, there certainly are a few layers to this. I saw it, basicly, as a commentary on an abusive relationship, in which the woman's entire importance is based on her carrying out the tasks that she is given. She probably hadn't much of a life beyond that on this plane.
leftysergeant 3 years ago
hehe nice work
Gabkicks 3 years ago
I liked how you dissolved her out as she continued to clean, tough on the guy having to nfreeze and stay perfectly still. I guess she is supposed to be an actual ghost/being rather than just a recording since she was looking around and figuring out that she was dead. Now did her dissolving out mean that she left? or did the reappearance of the blood mean that she would repeat the same thing? Or are we supposed to wonder on that?
Mountcastle73 3 years ago
Mountcastle73, First of all I want to thank you for taking the time to scope out some of my videos, I really appreciate it Jerel. Yes, she is a ghost, her dissolve is for people who could get confused about her looking at her own corpse, I needed to establish clearly that she was a ghost. The end credits with the blood, I just bookended it.
This is kinda a joke about women who obsessively clean too. She had to come back to clean her own murder scene. I have some wacky ideas! HA HA!
DelisaProductions 3 years ago
Wow, your videos are really well made
RickKenobe 3 years ago
awesome vid 5 stars
supercool235 3 years ago
feel sorry that her afterlife is cleaning her own blood up!
tictocfilms 3 years ago
I agree,this is a masterpiece.
AuroraKismet 3 years ago
WOW..Lisa..that was so AWESOME!! Scary and pretty cool!!Luv it!! 5 *****
jasminmommy 3 years ago
Insane! yet..totally cool.
clayLavl 3 years ago
excellent- you really should enter this in film festivals. 5/5.
SillyOclock 3 years ago
VERY cool.
Goin to check out your channel now :)
deansig 3 years ago
Perfection in editing - this is truly a 3 minute masterpiece! This is a 5 star WOW ~!~
I think this belongs somewhere else - in addition to YouTubeland. I am really struck by this! And nothing witty or snip in commentary - just totally appreciative of the work. So very first rate.
CommentSense 3 years ago
I agree, Mac
Lisa is too good for youtube! She belongs on the big screen!
She is the best!
dogpatchdebbie 3 years ago
Mac..Great Share..Wow..Subbed instantly!! very creative!!!
DsmB2007 3 years ago
Wow - The female version of David Lynch - Very nice
footguy5150isback 3 years ago
Whew!
JimmerSD 3 years ago
Simply excellent, great concept... perfectly timed.
whirlpoolzend 3 years ago
That was the best video I have seen in awhile & I really mean that!!! I had to watch it twice cause the whole time, I thought it was you that was the killer...and Im sure thats what you wanted people to think so awesome job!!!!!
jenbabe22 3 years ago
A Major Twilight Zone!
giraffepoo 3 years ago
Lisa, you've got this horror stuff down!!!
excellent:)
dogpatchdebbie 3 years ago
Wow, actually pretty good! Liked the editing. Fake blood needs to be darker though:too -pinkish on video. Music added greatly to it also. Overall, a well done bit!
jimp1102 3 years ago
LOL nice but strange !
bloodyEVILeye 3 years ago
interesting..
trgoblin 3 years ago
GOOD VIDEO WELL PUT TOGETHER
river3782 4 years ago
omg how did u do that cut?!?!!!!!??
ashleytisdalefanduh 4 years ago
who started the fight? did u try to kill HIM first?
deborahdcook 4 years ago
omg that was fantastic i have chills
omg i think ur becoming one of my favorite youtubers by far i am a horror fanatic wooo hooo u rock
TheBennyZone 4 years ago
Amazingly creepy! There's a lot of suspense packed into this 3 minute short. Great production!
Moosie
anmoose 4 years ago
HOLY CRAP! I seriously got the chills.
AskCarrieLee 4 years ago
YOU ARE TO TALENTED !!!!
jrwilsonpainting 4 years ago
OK that was good.
bobomcgraw 4 years ago
I wish that youtube had different levels of Subscriptions. You'd be in my more elite grouping... oh yeah, I have to subscribe first.
bowlingballout 4 years ago
hay i voted for this video in that contest. but i was too late on the voting because i lost a day somehow. funny. iggy35 just redirected me to your video feature me.
twister7boy 4 years ago
From a man who has been married 6 time's perspective, this was a gas.
joeshowallme 4 years ago
Very well done. Nice twist on the old adage!
Clarachk 4 years ago
Nice twist! That is hell, having to clean up your own murder scene!
trillian57 4 years ago
Truly brilliant piece of horror, and i am a big horror fan!
Im subbing :-)
susanmarie70 4 years ago
wild! love this!
clayLavl 4 years ago
I really liked this. :) It's SO true. Great job. I hope you won
childre24 4 years ago
This is so true!
What a smart video.
Very few changed ,we are slaves yet!
Women, wake up!
5*s
Brazilady 4 years ago
Very nice concept, well-executed (so to speak).:) You seem to have a serious appreciation of horror, so you might like my video called A PSYCHO POEM. Again, very nicely done.:)
maxruehl 4 years ago
This is... sense of duty.
Everything's in this movie is perfect (from an horror point of view).
And there's a subtle sense of humor which is priceless.
5*
danbergam 4 years ago
5 stars for great editing and story, awesome
hillbillygill99 4 years ago
Good job! Great effects and music.
BarefootCowboy 4 years ago
Great job!
victorintheworld 4 years ago
Very entertaining. Good luck!!!
j9crissman 4 years ago
very good. I know I am always cleaning! I love love the opening with the lamp shade.
eaglecrowowl 4 years ago
Lawd Have Mercy, my popcorn went a flyin errry which a way
MsOpheliaPayne 4 years ago
You have my vote! 5 stars. Awesome vid!
casinogirl66 4 years ago
nice video. im still checking out the compition but this video is added to my finalist voting list. good luck. i think the title for this video is freat and yep it always seems no matter what a womens work is never done. so im told.
twister7boy 4 years ago
That was great... the twist at the end was perfect. What software do you use, I always wanted to make a movie like this one... but don't have the right software. Anyway, great video =)
-Izzy
Horrormoviefan12002 4 years ago
That's right...
LISA ROCKS!
CyberLeech205 4 years ago
SHE SURE DOES!
OakgroveProductions 4 years ago
Great job Lisa! very poignant and powerful statement. The music and editing were very well done.
phoenix022005 4 years ago 2
BIG THUMBS UP FROM FRANKIE, OH WAIT, He cut his thumbs off and mailed them to his ghoul Friend!
WELL, HE VOTES FOR YOU- DELISA!!!!!
OakgroveProductions 4 years ago
again great
TheLeonShow 4 years ago
I'm voting right now Lisa!
citizenkong 4 years ago
great
TheLeonShow 4 years ago
i might have to hire this lady to help out the shabby condition of my apartment. excellent make-up work too. very funny concept.
AVDJ 4 years ago
LOVED it! :)
Illuminatta 4 years ago
Haha ... I love it. I kept wondering why the woman wasn't more frantic in cleaning up all the blood! The ending was really cool! Trying to be careful not to spoil it for others. GREAT JOB! I gave it five stars.
YOU ROCK!
davidpetersonharvey 4 years ago
SPINE CHILLER!!! HAND MADE FROM THE HEART!!!
Fantastic music, filming, editing, acting and Plot!
THIS IS A MASTERPEICE!!! GOOD LUCK delisaproductions!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OakgroveProductions 4 years ago
I commented about this vid on Rich's main page.
It's EXCELLENT!
But I'd rather vote for that tomken8d guy... LOL
tomken8d 4 years ago
Awesome !!! Totally original and imaginative.
clockmakers55 4 years ago
Watched it again. Still creepy/scary.
Lisa ROCKS!
Everyone vote for her!
CyberLeech205 4 years ago
very nice work-----very good~~my vote
TheLeonShow 4 years ago 2
I voted for you because it's a damned good little film like the closeups twist theme music almost too much but scary like sounds such as vacuum ..... etc. etc..... mark
markpdelisle 4 years ago 2
very very good editing. Very engaging. I hope you win!
citizenkong 4 years ago 2
Blood is always hard to clean off;-)
Nice video, 5stars..
F
fiwaszewski 4 years ago
Best one I've seen so far!
Very well done & love the ending!!!
WOW!!!!!!
NiteBlogger 4 years ago 2
Best one so far. I love the twist in the end. Always makes for the best.
daniephillips77 4 years ago 2
fantastic! i love it! now maybe all the guys will realize how much work it is to clean up after the party...hope the cops dont show up cause if they do, the forensic techs will still find all sorts of evidence....5 stars!
oldfrank 4 years ago 2
well done!
13thDimension 4 years ago 2
What a surprise ending! This video is top notch. Very creative and original! You have my Vote.
5 Stars all the way!!!!
casinogirl66 4 years ago 2
Awesome, Very artistic,
DanTraveling 4 years ago 2
Very good!
higgypopuk 4 years ago
nice video! my response is also rather nice!
have a splendid day!
:o}*) < cheekychen*}
cheekychen 4 years ago
That was sweet! Well done:)
sistermoonshine13 4 years ago
1butterflykiss sent me. You've got my vote. ***** Hans:-)
enigxxx 4 years ago
Wow...
MrsAtomicUs5000 4 years ago
YOU GET MT VOTE!
*kisses*
Therese
1butterflykiss 4 years ago
YOU GET MT VOTE!
*kisses*
Therese
1butterflykiss 4 years ago
YOU GET MT VOTE!
*kisses*
Therese
1butterflykiss 4 years ago
YOU GET MT VOTE!
*kisses*
Therese
1butterflykiss 4 years ago
Lisa ROCKS!
had to watch it again.
Very good
CyberLeech205 4 years ago
Philo and I look forward to that with great anticipation.
Yakovich 4 years ago
Scary, Spooky And Shocking, Left a chill running up and down my spine even after it was over! Judging by creativity and originality! I vote for delisaproductions!
OakgroveProductions 4 years ago 2
best vid ive seen in a bit GEEZY PEEPS! good twist YOU ROCK!!
ali09901 4 years ago 2
This is awesome! So creative as always. I am sending this to my friends. GOOD LUCK!
*kisses*
Therese
1butterflykiss 4 years ago
You are by far the most imaginative person on here. Besides, I love this topic, horror, ya can't keep me away grom John Carpenter movies lol
Fringe111 4 years ago
So where can you get these house cleaning ghosts from?
Yakovich 4 years ago 2
Lisa ROCKS!
That was a good job. Even after death, the job still has to be done... heehee.
I feel bad now. I've already used my vote on someone else. :( I didn't know that your 'Halloween' video was this contest or I would have waited before voting. I sorry. :^(
CyberLeech205 4 years ago
I can't vote yet because I am a judge for this contest but I think you've made a short movie that will outlive the contest, very talented!
dudeanwalker 4 years ago 2
We are still in the first round; the deadline is the 16th for all contestants; we shall see. Thanks for asking.
JACKIEEC 4 years ago
EXCELLENT!..very clever story idea with brilliant camera cuts an 'flashbacks'! good luck in the competition ☺
richw4 4 years ago 3
EXCELLENT! Superb idea, camera work, and editing! Great job Lisa! Gotta' go clean up now!
OakgroveProductions 4 years ago
VERY ORIGINAL!
dudeanwalker 4 years ago
that was an amazing twist! bravo! amazing job.
CRAZYconTHEsk8er 4 years ago
OMG first prize all the way. Awesome
Fringe111 4 years ago 2
That was a surprise! Great job!
JACKIEEC 4 years ago 2
TWISTED!!! I LOVE IT
CrazyTee33 4 years ago