If you have ambitions in this genre you should think about the difference between poetry and verse. Poetry doesn't necessarily have to rhyme, but just becasuse it's verse doesn't necessarily mean it has to be poetry either. This is meant to be a constructive comment so please take it as such.
@mjeshaw This was a poem I wrote for my 9th grade english class. I acknowledge that my artistic / poetic abilities are lacking, but the rhymes are good and it's a good narrative. Maybe it's not a poem by definition, but I am no poet. Just wanted to share my work with other youtubers. Thanks for the comment!
@justjustinme That's fine; it was just friendly advice in case you were interested in writing more. Having to study it puts a lot of people off for life. As Dr. Johnson said, "A man should read as inclination leads him, for what he learns as a task will do him little good." There are plenty of war poems, such as Keith Douglas's "Vergissmeinnich", that rhyme as well as being great poetry. You can find it on YouTube, although I prefer to read, rather than hearing another person's interpretation.
Nice work.Today is the national Greek No(ΟΧΙ)day.Greeks choose the good side and i am proud for that.btw where can i find that voice.I know is from the americas army.
If you have ambitions in this genre you should think about the difference between poetry and verse. Poetry doesn't necessarily have to rhyme, but just becasuse it's verse doesn't necessarily mean it has to be poetry either. This is meant to be a constructive comment so please take it as such.
mjeshaw 3 months ago
@mjeshaw This was a poem I wrote for my 9th grade english class. I acknowledge that my artistic / poetic abilities are lacking, but the rhymes are good and it's a good narrative. Maybe it's not a poem by definition, but I am no poet. Just wanted to share my work with other youtubers. Thanks for the comment!
justjustinme 3 months ago
@justjustinme That's fine; it was just friendly advice in case you were interested in writing more. Having to study it puts a lot of people off for life. As Dr. Johnson said, "A man should read as inclination leads him, for what he learns as a task will do him little good." There are plenty of war poems, such as Keith Douglas's "Vergissmeinnich", that rhyme as well as being great poetry. You can find it on YouTube, although I prefer to read, rather than hearing another person's interpretation.
mjeshaw 3 months ago
but they never took Sweden muhahaha, great poem
Svanberg123 4 months ago
@Svanberg123
Nope. Never did. hahaha. Thanks for the comment Johan. :)
justjustinme 4 months ago
awsome dude thanks now i get a+ on my poem for school ;P lol jk
ambspier 11 months ago
@ambspier
someone actually asked me if they could use it for their poem. I told them no, but I think they did anyway. hahaha.
justjustinme 10 months ago
@justjustinme i didnt tho lol
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ambspier 10 months ago
@ambspier
yes. and i thank you for that . :) i'm sure your poem turned out great.
justjustinme 10 months ago
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hamilton150 2 years ago
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hamilton150 2 years ago
why so?
justjustinme 2 years ago
good poem! lol.
jeremiahj13 3 years ago 2
Nice work.Today is the national Greek No(ΟΧΙ)day.Greeks choose the good side and i am proud for that.btw where can i find that voice.I know is from the americas army.
MALAKAS0 3 years ago 2
It isnt from the American army :P
I used google, and look up "speech synchronizer". :P
ty for comment btw :P
justjustinme 3 years ago
THank you very much i really need this program
MALAKAS0 3 years ago 2
Hehehe, good luck. :) I hope you found it ok. Let me know if you found it. ^^
justjustinme 3 years ago
good work
SpiderBasses 3 years ago 5
ty :)
justjustinme 3 years ago
Excellent you cover important parts of WW2 in your Poem. 5 ***** ,
and give a reminder.
rezcrash88 3 years ago 7
Thank you. :) Some parts the voice didn't sound it out the way I wanted it to though :p
justjustinme 3 years ago