For english not being your first language your lyrics are very very good. One mistake in this one is that it should be "patient you were giving promises" not was. Don't bother reuploading it though, its such a small mistake.
Thank you! I'll change that in the lyrics but won't reupload the song! ;) The quality of these songs is quite bad and I thought about uploading a better, elaborated version (maybe even with several instrument layers) when I'll have the required equipment! ... I'm pretty new to songwriting and you'll always have good and bad ones. Youtube and the comments really help me to find out wich songs I'd like to put some more work into.
No no! I do care about your opinion! =) I uploaded these songs in a "rough" version, so input and opinions will help, making them better and in this case I totally understand what you mean! It wasn't meant to be sad, but emotional! xD Thank for your help! =)
For english not being your first language your lyrics are very very good. One mistake in this one is that it should be "patient you were giving promises" not was. Don't bother reuploading it though, its such a small mistake.
Bagodonuts15 1 year ago
Thank you! I'll change that in the lyrics but won't reupload the song! ;) The quality of these songs is quite bad and I thought about uploading a better, elaborated version (maybe even with several instrument layers) when I'll have the required equipment! ... I'm pretty new to songwriting and you'll always have good and bad ones. Youtube and the comments really help me to find out wich songs I'd like to put some more work into.
frathomon 1 year ago
@frathomon know what you mean, Im new to song writting also. Looking forward to some more songs and different versions in the future
Bagodonuts15 1 year ago
Okay, but I want to hear some of your stuff, too! ;)
frathomon 1 year ago
Yeah absolutely. In a month school ends and I'll have plenty of time to record :) ( I hope)
Bagodonuts15 1 year ago
Umm, good but the chorus feels like a bit too long for me. And that makes the whole song sad and it wasn't meant to be said, I guess. :)
But this is my oppinion, don't care about me!
exbattery 1 year ago
No no! I do care about your opinion! =) I uploaded these songs in a "rough" version, so input and opinions will help, making them better and in this case I totally understand what you mean! It wasn't meant to be sad, but emotional! xD Thank for your help! =)
frathomon 1 year ago