hmm... interesting accent. Could you maybe try a little bit higher, with a bit more emotion? In the last line he's whining and complaining a bit.
The who are you line could use a bit more suspicion. I like the accent though.
blackninjakat 3 years ago
hmm... interesting accent. Could you maybe try a little bit higher, with a bit more emotion? In the last line he's whining and complaining a bit.
The who are you line could use a bit more suspicion. I like the accent though.
blackninjakat 3 years ago