wow he called kiera jakie. that is funny
laneshia9 2 years ago
omg i cant beileave he kissed her they need to ggo together they seem so cute together
nae147258 2 years ago
i hope he's gonna pick jackie.....what a drama xD...love it 5*
tellem123dkt 2 years ago
loved it. cant wait 4 the next 1
essence1660 2 years ago
how in the world is he supposed to do that. hes in a tight squeeze
2fine4him 2 years ago
that was really good i hope he chooses jackie
cant wait for the nxt one
lilvicm 2 years ago
"flying fiddlesticks your alive!" lmaooooo.
Wooo they foundd her
omgg he kissed herrr
ahhh this is sooo goodd :D
I love this storyy.
OneToughCookiee 2 years ago
Yay They Found Me.! (: Thx 2 Patrickk :D
Vince UGH.! Lolz
Oh Snapp Patrickk What Are You Going To Do.??
5/5*
xdOpemamiix3 2 years ago
loved it!
i feel sorry for Patrick...it's a tough situation he's in to.
hope he choose the right one.
SlovesCnell 2 years ago
awsome. KUDDOS!! lol.
B5AYBProductions 2 years ago
That was good. I'm glad they found Jackie. Oh lordie. Now he gotta choose. Him and Jackie seem so kute. I wonder who he picks. Loved it.
puertoricanprincezz 2 years ago
oh i loved it..that was really good as always 5/5*
Ulukau808 2 years ago
geez girl u write hella good stories!! lol <3
ya gurl ~nessa~
kimmys89 2 years ago
aww thats a tough one jackie...or kiera....cnt wait 4 da next one!
Qtee4eva16 2 years ago
that was a great chapter!
B5SHAWTY09 2 years ago
Loved It
I Hope He Choose Jackie
angelasweet3 2 years ago
I LOVED IT.....It was like BOOOM!! and BAM.......IT WAS GOOOD
cRaZiGiRl2012 2 years ago
cool love it !
popoil9663 2 years ago
dat was good i loved it 5*
jackson2041 2 years ago
that waz real good o do u kno wat the last song was called
blackcherrypie3 2 years ago
since you been gone by keisha chante
msbryanb405 2 years ago
ok thnkz
tht was good i love it
5 stars
CillaGirl94 2 years ago
OMG. That was good!
PFizzleZno1 2 years ago
wow he called kiera jakie. that is funny
laneshia9 2 years ago
omg i cant beileave he kissed her they need to ggo together they seem so cute together
nae147258 2 years ago
i hope he's gonna pick jackie.....what a drama xD...love it 5*
tellem123dkt 2 years ago
loved it. cant wait 4 the next 1
essence1660 2 years ago
how in the world is he supposed to do that. hes in a tight squeeze
2fine4him 2 years ago
that was really good i hope he chooses jackie
cant wait for the nxt one
lilvicm 2 years ago
"flying fiddlesticks your alive!" lmaooooo.
Wooo they foundd her
omgg he kissed herrr
ahhh this is sooo goodd :D
I love this storyy.
OneToughCookiee 2 years ago
Yay They Found Me.! (: Thx 2 Patrickk :D
Vince UGH.! Lolz
Oh Snapp Patrickk What Are You Going To Do.??
5/5*
xdOpemamiix3 2 years ago
loved it!
i feel sorry for Patrick...it's a tough situation he's in to.
hope he choose the right one.
SlovesCnell 2 years ago
awsome. KUDDOS!! lol.
B5AYBProductions 2 years ago
That was good. I'm glad they found Jackie. Oh lordie. Now he gotta choose. Him and Jackie seem so kute. I wonder who he picks. Loved it.
puertoricanprincezz 2 years ago
oh i loved it..that was really good as always 5/5*
Ulukau808 2 years ago
geez girl u write hella good stories!! lol <3
ya gurl ~nessa~
kimmys89 2 years ago
aww thats a tough one jackie...or kiera....cnt wait 4 da next one!
Qtee4eva16 2 years ago
that was a great chapter!
B5SHAWTY09 2 years ago
Loved It
I Hope He Choose Jackie
angelasweet3 2 years ago
I LOVED IT.....It was like BOOOM!! and BAM.......IT WAS GOOOD
cRaZiGiRl2012 2 years ago
cool love it !
popoil9663 2 years ago
dat was good i loved it 5*
jackson2041 2 years ago
that waz real good o do u kno wat the last song was called
blackcherrypie3 2 years ago
since you been gone by keisha chante
msbryanb405 2 years ago
ok thnkz
blackcherrypie3 2 years ago
tht was good i love it
5 stars
CillaGirl94 2 years ago
OMG. That was good!
PFizzleZno1 2 years ago