[ShortStory] My Last Wish

[TheGreenapple3s]

Sad

[kareenaloveful]

Crying and BUBBLE EYES THEY MAKE ME CRAZY

[vediogirl12345678910]

sssaaaddd alyssa is ugly bella is the beuty queen

[Brioks]

:( im so sad i love this sooo much

[CheekyMonkey38643]

Its really sad :'(

[Craftmoon101]

not sad enough! make it more sadddderrrrr!!!!!!

[Hwayoung123]

how to make one?

[soulbalde99]

Y all girls die at sad love story

[shine12cute]

Kbtoys124

I think she's not ugly she's pretty than snoobish girl in school WHAT YOOU THINK THAT SHE IS AN UGLY GIRL! SHE IS NOT AN UGLY GIRL

[Kbtoys124]

She's the most popular girl in school ? Yea And the Ugliest .

[Fia266]

I cried at the end .... :'(

[fabulous025]

it's too bad she died( bella)

[mileyswift24]

if there would be an online game like this...i would die for it!!!

[945801961]

What the heck the story always end up like someone dying but it is still awesome

[Butterflyhearts223]

She could of told Jake that she would die in 2 weeks then causing some trouble O.O

[nhipham101]

What 's the name of the song at the end of the video??

[babyrosyx3]

This is ORIGNIAL I suppose?

[Charisse2020]

uhmm...you sed she only painted her skin so why is it when they go swim the paint won't fade?

[andrewteoh25]

lol from buford in P&F



[Crazydork252]

Im not crying I'm sweating through my eyes

[Charisse651]

I think if Jake kissed Bella she'll be alive like the Sleeping Beauty...

[Facepalmalldaylong]

G'AWWWZ, So sweet Q.Q

[TheMangaQueen]

OMG this is amazing!!! please can i make a manga of this??? >.< ill say that you made the story :) and hopefully i can put it up on deviant art and give you the link!

[TheMangaQueen]

CRYING SO MUCH >.<

[yuantari2]

I forgot to say, it was also very sad D:

[yuantari2]

why is her skin grey? (after watching) ooh, and Alyssa is really B***chy and snobbish. Forgot to mention, your video is quite good actually!

[dorisdonut]

but it was very sad....

[dorisdonut]

it wasnt bad! in fact, it was good. real good. it looked like you made hundreds

[vgirl9999]

Silent tears fell when i watched this, silent tears............

[Kingdomhearts1109]

BLEH!!!! I AM NOT BITCHY, SNOBBISH, OR POPULAR!!! AND ID

LEAVE HIM FOR YOU!!!!!!!

[nanatandlulu]

this is so sad



[PBfantageloverzz]

I cried

[KiraraRain]

at 5:55 why was the table talking??? not any offense, just asking. 

[ChocolateyLov]

OMG ppl will die from SKIN DISEASE?!?one of my classmates have it!=( PLZ TELL ME IT'S NOT REAL!>-<

[Nasuadaso]

why is he winking at the guys at 1:15 LOLL ;D

[OMGKiKaT]

SO FREKEN SAD and i thought in the beginnig the girl was totally ugly but na na na

[XxItsQuinxX]

OMG, so good!! cant stop crying!! but afterall, its a very good short story :')

[Melissathehedgehog1]

I cried soo much its the most saddest story I ever read so far!!!!!!!!!!

[Izzyzmmv]

lol, choked my names also isabella, gone by bella, have pale skin. D:

[GirlsRule430]

I used to watch this everyday and I havent watched it in a while... and I just wanted to watch it again, its my favorite short story.... but this is the first time tears went into my eyes!! I NEVER GET SAD FOR SHORT STORIES BUT FOR THIS ONE I DID.

[WHATTHEBEEEEEP3564]

this is freaky my name is isabella (but they call me izzy or bell) and i have 2 best friends called alyssa and jake O.o also im a dark skin color and they a fair skin color woah

[shimin4222]

SOO SAD....

[Cyconsy]

FUUUUUUUUUUUUK i watched this like i dunno 4863 times and i STILL can't stop crying!

[ilovebtr23]

T.T THIS IS SO SAD why does the good people ALWAYS DIE! T.T

[smilez4everyone]

awwwww so sad T^T

[xXHoneyBear]

-sniff sniff- sooo..touching D:

[JakeCarr98]

lol. my names jake

[jazzd1234]

OMG THEY'RE GIANTS

[MerveBagciMusic]

So sad...

[dorothy1999]

i swear how can ppl not tell she has a problem? SHE HAS A WEIRD COLOR SKIN CUZ SHE HAS SKIN CANCER PPL

[maxim2465]

this made me cry LITERALLY i started crying so bad i couldent stop crying for 20 minutes its SOO SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[yasmin00000000000000]

Where. Did you get the backgrounds from

[TheKilljoy4679]

You forgot to mention that jake can jump VERY high. Maybe he's also on the basketball team?

[narutoheartsramen]

how come at the beginning her eyes werent blue?

[BulletShootingGuys]

WHY DO THEY ALWAYS HAVE TO DIE?!

[littlecrazybrat227]

i didnt cry...IMA LIER! THAT WAS SOOO SAD!

[amanni123]

Im crying rite now i didnt even now that i was that emotional this is such a sad story

[Lovelygirl5369]

Wow!!! That was sooo sad!!! I almost cried XD

[IchigoYutaka]

I CRIED!!!!!..it was soo sad~

[ShawtyyyBabbbyyy]

Awww. I cry alittle. ;(

[Cyconsy]

So dam f**kin good i cried so hard. But i really want like, alyssa die she doesn't deserve a life. bella should've told jake and alyssa before she died so jake would forgive her and alyssa to maybe become nice.

[therealdemifan2]

u made me cry so sad and good story!

[superkid8liar]

U SHOULD MAKE A VID WHERE BELLA HAUNTS ALYSSA AND KILLS HER AND THEN SHE WRITES IN ALYSSA'S BLOOD: "Jake, I love you too, and when we meet again, we will be together until we both die." JUST a little idea i think should haappen because alyssa waz so snobbish she should should watch Jake and Bella be together so she wil be like: "OMG I CANT BELIVE THEY R TOGETHER! I SHOULD BE WITH HIM RIGHT NOW!" and then Jake says: "I'm so glad i broke up with alyssa!" and alyssa gets rlly mad and yells.

[pinayninjapearl]

awww this is my favorite

[orangerox55555]

You should make another one and make her come back to life! :3

[RockerLinda21]

awww these stories alwaysmake me sad... not cry... but just feel touched

[YouKooZz]

tear tear thats sad :(

[alexthesuperstar]

ok one thing in movies videos tv shows and everythan else how the hell do a cat get stuck in a tree!!???!?!?!??!?!?!!?

[MehMakeNom]

with the cat you shouldve made it say "thank you..i mean...meow" then jake f6

[ledramaticscene]

how did u get these piks? of like the people things

[SUP3RNICK]

some of these short storys make me want to cry =(

[AmutoIkutoAmu]

man good ! thxs for sharing this how u make the backgrounds?

[MSNoobHater]

i bet you jake loved her just bcuz his favorite color was grey. :P

[urdandy]

How would this be not sad u "bitch".

[ZProGamer]

O.o

[heavengems]

i loved this vid XD

[ChickeyNuggetPro]

but alyssa is ugly..

[princesa1034]

1:17 .. are boys.. in love with him? o.O

[maplestorygirl1]

Whats the last song called?

[Xx0Frosty0xX]

OMG big tears XD

[GoGoNikey32]

soo sad D: alyssia is soo ugly why did he date her? she is the ugliest girl in the effing world.

[pixieproductions4427]

this is AWESOME would u mind if I made a vid of it?

[AlisonAqua]

It's Not Kinda Bad it's AWESOME

[blueandyellow1029]

Woo Harry Potter! ;D XD <3 GREAT STORY

[hvinh2204]

alyssa a a bish

[Wafflemonger123]

omg i cant stop watching these they make me cry...

[antione604]

awwww hehe im on a grown ups accounts >:D

[ipodbabii]

Whats the name of the 1st song?

[DestinysOnlyWish]

He kinda acts gay...

[CupcakeLuver2000]

23 people missed the like button :(

[Fargosis16]

why do the pepolez always wear slippers??

[denny2131]

o.o im like a Jake and Bella hybrid >:D

im nice and stuff but im still a nobody D:

well at least i like myself for who i am :D

[eflemingmiller]

Wow me and my bestfriend watched this and we both started crying and my best friend is a guy! 

[unicornpeee]

@eflemingmiller are u a guy too or a girl?

[caramelfluffcake4141]

@unicornpeee I was thinking the same thing.

[eflemingmiller]

@unicornpeee im a girl

[xXAznboytoyzXx]

Omfg short story always sad ending pz make a good ending

[brookecn6]

omg so sad D: my eyes were tearin up O:

[aubzfarwaniya]

What's the name of the first song?

[JelloGirlXD]

WTF THOSE PANTS ARE WAY TOO HUGE FOR THOSE TINY PEOPLE!!!!!!

[gimmeThumbsUp]

i though i would stop watching and will call u a retard for making dumm stories..

bt i ended up wasting my time to tell u that u did a great job :]

exept after 9:34 bcuz is over

[aubzfarwaniya]

Bad? are you kidding??? It made me drop a tear :')

[Aruyia]

i rly like this short story but i just have to say one thing... if her skin looked wrong and she had makeup to cover it up, why didnt she? o.o

[allerleirauh1223]

is skin desiese (i might of spelled that wrong) real?

[xRawrLynn]

Alyssa is a freakin b!tch

[MsDarkfoot]

awwwww im cryin

[5566zaxljy]

Sad

but well makeded!

[Andebet1]

אנלא מבין מילה אחת אפילו!!!

[iiNB4Rii]

the end made me cry!! T_T

[Torivampire]

thats sooo cute i had a friend who died before that her bff told her he loved her thanks for the story

[unicornpeee]

so sad :( BUT STAR BUCKS COFFE XD

[phinbella1]

um this looks like twilight.. but its good

[MrDragonball2000]

my name is alyssa but im not at all like that i would never ever be that stupid girl in amillion years

[ZProGamer]

where you get backgrounds

[FaLLinD0wn]

Keel when she's in heaven she gets blue eyes but shouldn't her skin disease blget cured in heaven?

[nitendo9]

why is she gray?

[darksoul491]

@nitendo9 skin sickness dude

[xuan200]

ima die of sadness like my cozuin is gonna die on boredness, maybe I should show her these stories before she loses her SECOND life and doe of boredness AGAIN. (My cuz not really dead)

[TheAvrillavignealice]

oh god i think im gonna die no seriously so sads :(

[Djsxychick15]

how can u make a short story???

[TheHoboist]

the storyline was pretty good, but the climax sucked like hell. u shouldnt use so fancy font for the letter, not everyone can read it. also, next time, make it sound more emotional, not bleak. overall, this is OVER 9000!!! good job, for a first XD!!!

[pongorodo]

wow! this is soo good! first i only like mmv,s but this story is TO good!

[hellbird60]

dosnt suprise me, in stories like this, one always dies

[chocolateaddict12345]

ohh my freakingg gosshh!!! sooooo sadd.... :'(

[Pharingto]

i cried omg i cry to muhc im so soft im such a soft guy x.x

[pivotmast187]

that nerse is a bitch she has no affections if bella if was still living and got to married to jake and she had to go to the hospital cause of her skin and jack could not come cause he had to work she'd be all like '' I DONT NEED THIS MAN HAS TWO JOBS!!''

[girlsgeneration89]

that skin reminds me of agua from agua bendita (a phipino show) she has blue skin and everyone calles her a monster

[princessmarrissa]

"Every guy wants to be him.. -marrissa bursts in- EXCEPT NATHAN!"

lol.

[mileycyrus727]

Hey, what's the name of the first song? It's really nice! :) Heard it on the radio today.

[angela1224353]

too touching.....i almost going to cry

[princessmarrissa]

if she always painted her skin, she would be SO PRETTY.

I mean, some kid in my 4th grade class was getting yelled at by some 6 year old because she was black.

WOW.

[GoGoNikey32]

@princessmarrissa they should arrest him. thats gender offending

[GoGoNikey32]

@GoGoNikey32 OOOPS! i meant skin offending!

[princessmarrissa]

@GoGoNikey32 wow.

[GoGoNikey32]

@princessmarrissa excuse me but i make mistakes for typing really fast when im in a hurry.

[princessmarrissa]

@GoGoNikey32 no, not the typo.. But 6 year olds being arrested is kind of.. wow.

[ShiningPill]

:X Pretty touching ...

[Flufferdor]

DONT PASS THE POP CORN PASS THE TISSUE BOX!

[ipodbabii]

What is the 1st song called? Btw nice vid =D ... sad endin

[DaisyYouRock218]

I WAS CRYING I WAS WATCHING ALOT OF THESE SO SAD

[Godzie1]

Loved it! <3 :)

[mangagal111]

wat song is it at the beginning? its chinese right?

[dmjenxp]

omgoshhh, that's messed up -_- even if the Alyssa chick doesn't deserve Jake, she can't steal her bf, that's just wrong, and i would know, cuz something like that would've happened to me. and even if that chick Bella has a disease, that doesn't give her the right to do that > 3> lol sry if i'm taking this way too personally

[dmjenxp]

OMGOSHH LOL I HATE THESE SOB STORIES, my friend thinks that she's one of those lonely ppl when actually she has a ton of friends and her so-called-bf is the most popular guy when he's actually the most hated -_-;;

[talmany1]

why all these so sad

[NAOMIERUTHOCAMPOYT]

Pano nyo po ginagawa yung mga tao???

[sparkler52]

I always wonder what all these maplestory people do after their loved ones die O.o

[minmin91xd]

love tis story... so sad D:

[minmin91xd]

love tis story... so sad D:

[kittyloverandcat66]

tears....:(

[Joeee1988]

another sad story..

[SuperxJen]

Alyssa is so funny

[LoveXBoyX]

Why doesnt she just paint her face and dye her hair everyday? That might make everyone stop making fun of her or laughing at her.

But good story!

[AngeIxDemon]

I love it when bella smiles, it looks bubbly xD

[Shiroxoxo1]

aww Alyssas my NAME! :O

[strawberrymimicute]

Wut do u mean till we meet again? She died!

[AngelChan100]

@strawberrymimicute she meant in heaven o_o

[strawberrymimicute]

oh....

[AJC2607]

And i was wondering if that bluish face was a temporary problem!

[Izzyzmmv]

omg great editing everything matches perfectly i couldn't see this story any other way! hehe the funny thing is my name is bella and I was also was made fun of my skin. (in rl not ms) anyway love the vid !

[zoyce101]

Wow this is amazing for your first; the emotions portrayed are quite deep. :]

[MsAnimaxlover]

sooo sad makes me cry *crying* nicely done *crys again*

[Buuni1231]

i no right D:

[cchongj]

i love this story because its so sad and its very touching when the girl dies before he can tell her how much he really cares about her this is so sad xoxo emily

[katelynnlove11]

SOOO SAD!!!

[lamjervis1]

cough...cough...you make me almost choke while i was eating my prawn cracker!!!anyway very nice video cough...cough...

[TheMsPrincessCat]

*cries* gawd! ur making me cry!!!!!

[viet0wnage]

Influence from Korean drama explains the inclusion of the terminal skin disease

[aznboy800]

shit this short story made me cya

lol

[jw02078]

omg so fricking sad