Spectre's are kinda like MIB's. you know will smith lol. thats the comparision that i thought of when you were trying to explain it. best of the best looking out for the galaxy and all the people in it (aliens and humans), thats a spectre. they also work outside the law.
You should script your review a bit. Use cuts & frame jumps, because it seems to be the youtube way these days. Just avoid pauses & awkward noises, it which make the review very boring & dull. I also think that most of your audience is Mass Effect fans, who want more criticism & information on the book, so don't explain the things we know. Also don't end your review like you did here. That said, I appreciate the the info you've given about the book.
Mate, I don't mean to be harsh, but where's the actual review? This seems more like a book summary rather than a critique. There's no actual analysis or evaluation going on here. I wanna know what you thought of it, any chance you'll give us an opinion?
@penfoldini its ok, i accept criticism since i can learn from my mistakes. When i was originally making these review videos i was trying to work on just talking in general, and as you can see i got very far off topic. Real Review: The book is a great addition to the Mass Effect Series, it is a must have if you are a fan of the series. Even if it deviates from the Shepard's story, it still has a great storyline. i was running out of room for this, continue with the second reply.
@penfoldini As of the news from Mass Effect 3, a character named SANDERS is being introduced, from the storyline of all three books Kahlee SANDERS may have a connection (i wouldnt understand why not). The author of the book series is the same as the author of the game storyline, so he may have planned this for some time. All books are great with the exception of Ascension being a bit slower. If you are a quarian fan, ascension is very deep into the culture of quarians. i hope this answers ur q.
Didn't know about Sanders so thanks muchly for that too. As an analytical female myself however, I do hope they bump up her IQ points significantly as I thought she was sorely lacking in that department, I was figuring stuff out way before she did and I am by no means a genius!
On the topic of ascension, I agree totally!
I hope you keep going with the reviews though, we really, really need them.
Im very glad I didn't offend you with my criticism, less mature peeps get a real stick up the arse about it! I also look forward to any furture vids on Mass Effect... Im sooo addicted it could require an entry in the Diagnostic manual for Psychological Disorders!
*shakes head in shame*
Ps,This 2 part review is most welcome. :)
Pps, Have you thought about reviewing the comics, or have you already done so, meaning my observation skills have gone on vacation without telling me?
Mate, I don't mean to be harsh, but where's the actual review? This seems more like a book summary rather than a critic. There's no actual analysis or evaluation going on here. I wanna know what you thought of it, any chance you'll give us an opinion?
Spectre's are kinda like MIB's. you know will smith lol. thats the comparision that i thought of when you were trying to explain it. best of the best looking out for the galaxy and all the people in it (aliens and humans), thats a spectre. they also work outside the law.
jonandrenee1 5 months ago
@jonandrenee1 great comparison, i completely agree with the spectre= MIB
ARomanianKid14 5 months ago
You should script your review a bit. Use cuts & frame jumps, because it seems to be the youtube way these days. Just avoid pauses & awkward noises, it which make the review very boring & dull. I also think that most of your audience is Mass Effect fans, who want more criticism & information on the book, so don't explain the things we know. Also don't end your review like you did here. That said, I appreciate the the info you've given about the book.
SaintChing 7 months ago
nice review i subbed and liked
kotorfan100 8 months ago
Mate, I don't mean to be harsh, but where's the actual review? This seems more like a book summary rather than a critique. There's no actual analysis or evaluation going on here. I wanna know what you thought of it, any chance you'll give us an opinion?
penfoldini 9 months ago
@penfoldini its ok, i accept criticism since i can learn from my mistakes. When i was originally making these review videos i was trying to work on just talking in general, and as you can see i got very far off topic. Real Review: The book is a great addition to the Mass Effect Series, it is a must have if you are a fan of the series. Even if it deviates from the Shepard's story, it still has a great storyline. i was running out of room for this, continue with the second reply.
ARomanianKid14 9 months ago
@penfoldini As of the news from Mass Effect 3, a character named SANDERS is being introduced, from the storyline of all three books Kahlee SANDERS may have a connection (i wouldnt understand why not). The author of the book series is the same as the author of the game storyline, so he may have planned this for some time. All books are great with the exception of Ascension being a bit slower. If you are a quarian fan, ascension is very deep into the culture of quarians. i hope this answers ur q.
ARomanianKid14 9 months ago
@ARomanianKid14 Respond to this video...Many thanks!
Didn't know about Sanders so thanks muchly for that too. As an analytical female myself however, I do hope they bump up her IQ points significantly as I thought she was sorely lacking in that department, I was figuring stuff out way before she did and I am by no means a genius!
On the topic of ascension, I agree totally!
I hope you keep going with the reviews though, we really, really need them.
(Also doing a 2-parter, lol)
penfoldini 9 months ago
@ARomanianKid14
Im very glad I didn't offend you with my criticism, less mature peeps get a real stick up the arse about it! I also look forward to any furture vids on Mass Effect... Im sooo addicted it could require an entry in the Diagnostic manual for Psychological Disorders!
*shakes head in shame*
Ps,This 2 part review is most welcome. :)
Pps, Have you thought about reviewing the comics, or have you already done so, meaning my observation skills have gone on vacation without telling me?
penfoldini 9 months ago
@penfoldini lol thanks!
about the comics, i am not really the biggest on comics, but i may be interested in reading them. if i do come to reading them, i will make a review.
ARomanianKid14 9 months ago
Mate, I don't mean to be harsh, but where's the actual review? This seems more like a book summary rather than a critic. There's no actual analysis or evaluation going on here. I wanna know what you thought of it, any chance you'll give us an opinion?
penfoldini 9 months ago
good book i really liked it!
Tikwatejnu 1 year ago
Niiice review man.
TeddyNutts 1 year ago
@TeddyNutts thanks alot
ARomanianKid14 1 year ago
DUDE!! You are amazing :D Tyvm for this man, and same for the Ascension vid. You earned yourself your thumbs up and a sub ;)
SilentPhenomed 1 year ago
@SilentPhenomed thanks alot :)
ARomanianKid14 1 year ago
@ARomanianKid14 No, THANK YOU lol. I'm happy you did this, now I have a better understanding of this series ;)
SilentPhenomed 1 year ago