You needed to get a hyper cam to take screen shots of the game so the text could actually be read. It was too blurry, so I could get the icons and the main titles, but it is difficult to make out which jobs are being attempted, until you can see the live action sequence.
Maybe I should have used live quality, but it did not help the horrible live action sequences, where the camera was out of focus and is shaking furiously to make the sequence seem like it is a big deal and that it is intense. I think that this was a good try and I liked the interlaced game play, but poor planning, bad camera work, and bad special effects killed this whole thing. I learned to use high quality, but you still need to learn to spell and use correct grammar.
Also, the camera angles for the live action parts were not interesting...instead of just doing one clip for each action sequence, make it a mesh of clips, of different angles, from far and close up...its more interesting that way.
The clips for the action parts were too long, and I lost interest quickly. the only thing the shaky camera did was make me dizzy...it was a little too much. It was good though how you intercut clips from the game with clips of live action sequences, though I'm not sure whether or not taking clips of the game counts as filming copyrighted material or not.
Cons: shaky/blurry camera doesn't make the action sequence look intense, it just makes the whole thing look like it was rushed/ cheap. Music does not fit. Bad special effects. That replay thing looked awful. This entry is too long. The action sequences are all only one clip, with boring camera angles.
Pros: a good ad for the game
A good try, but it seemed rushed,not thought out, and unprofessional.
I've been looking for more information on the contest everywhere, but haven't been able to. Is it still going on? Do you know what the submission site is?
if anyone would like too use my concept that i guarantee its not RETARDED LIKE ALL THE OTHER VIDEOS and u can win urself 5000 dollars :) its the easiest thing to do...
Hey, Thanks for your comments on my vid, your vid is cool, bit of a problem with the audio but that must be youtube as well. Also it needs to be less then 2 mins and get to the point as fast as you can, other then that its good i like it. Best of luck to you guys. Good Job
What's up STERILE MAGE??
bowtoyourmaster 1 year ago
ahaha NERDWARS .
annigerl 1 year ago
Rambone 3...
ChristianSexPest 2 years ago
there is a alot of dick critics here.
jschmid 2 years ago
would you say this vide isnt long enough or just right?
jschmid 2 years ago
You needed to get a hyper cam to take screen shots of the game so the text could actually be read. It was too blurry, so I could get the icons and the main titles, but it is difficult to make out which jobs are being attempted, until you can see the live action sequence.
VictorsChipsInc 2 years ago
learn to use high detail and it wouldnt be blury
i used camtasia for the recording i cant use screen shots and have the mouse in it at the same time smart one
immuneshade 2 years ago
Maybe I should have used live quality, but it did not help the horrible live action sequences, where the camera was out of focus and is shaking furiously to make the sequence seem like it is a big deal and that it is intense. I think that this was a good try and I liked the interlaced game play, but poor planning, bad camera work, and bad special effects killed this whole thing. I learned to use high quality, but you still need to learn to spell and use correct grammar.
VictorsChipsInc 2 years ago
Also, the camera angles for the live action parts were not interesting...instead of just doing one clip for each action sequence, make it a mesh of clips, of different angles, from far and close up...its more interesting that way.
TheSKPFilms 2 years ago
The clips for the action parts were too long, and I lost interest quickly. the only thing the shaky camera did was make me dizzy...it was a little too much. It was good though how you intercut clips from the game with clips of live action sequences, though I'm not sure whether or not taking clips of the game counts as filming copyrighted material or not.
TheSKPFilms 2 years ago
Cons: shaky/blurry camera doesn't make the action sequence look intense, it just makes the whole thing look like it was rushed/ cheap. Music does not fit. Bad special effects. That replay thing looked awful. This entry is too long. The action sequences are all only one clip, with boring camera angles.
Pros: a good ad for the game
A good try, but it seemed rushed,not thought out, and unprofessional.
VictorsChipsInc 2 years ago
+Advertises game quite well
-music is a little distracting
-shaky camera
-A little long, makes it harder to watch
AdamCollet 2 years ago
very innovitive : i'd give you the 3 G's out of the one's i've seen (watched 12 - 15)
TreFlip1992 2 years ago
dude it looks like GTA. but other than that it's all rite
sephiroth260 2 years ago
I've been looking for more information on the contest everywhere, but haven't been able to. Is it still going on? Do you know what the submission site is?
vongspoth 2 years ago
take the green off, this one is better.
jschmid 2 years ago
Happy lol?
immuneshade 2 years ago
You guys obviously never heard of close ups. Was your camera operator scare of getting shot by the fake gun?
VinegarLikesChicken 2 years ago
Its not supposed to be close up....
GaL
immuneshade 2 years ago
That the film has no close ups is what makes it awful.
VictorsChipsInc 2 years ago
lol
immuneshade 2 years ago
fukin goof
RG6CF 2 years ago
i love it!!! good job, this is what i think mob wars is about. nicely done
JeanPDuffy 2 years ago
One word: Shite.
MrMolineux 2 years ago 4
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Check out my entry
jmahmoodafterglow 2 years ago
this is really good
jschmid 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
hell yea it is.
jschmid 2 years ago
if anyone would like too use my concept that i guarantee its not RETARDED LIKE ALL THE OTHER VIDEOS and u can win urself 5000 dollars :) its the easiest thing to do...
ReallyStupidPerson 2 years ago
Good effort. I just wouldn't use any copyrighted music in your next version.
IckyIguana 2 years ago
Ya we are taking all that out and re editing it
immuneshade 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
watch my video audition
thanhproduction 2 years ago
ok vid you need to use stand for filming
Itookthelaw 2 years ago
ya look whos talking....
immuneshade 2 years ago
dude i was giving you advice i was being nice
Itookthelaw 2 years ago
Hey. Me and a couple buddies were lookin to make a mob wars video. Where do I get the contest information and guidlines????
spicer44 2 years ago
try googling facebook mobwars competition
immuneshade 2 years ago
yeah its ok too bad you have a lot of illegal elements in it
theflipman10 2 years ago
ya like the music?? hmmmm
anything else?
immuneshade 2 years ago
That is the best one I've seen and definately going to be one of the best ones.
LtDarkKnight 2 years ago
your video is too long
theflipman10 2 years ago
learn to read.... the title
immuneshade 2 years ago
ill have one up soon dont worry guys
ill bring some competition for the money
Soccerduude2 2 years ago
I am redoing video if you read.
immuneshade 2 years ago
awsome :D add me 0.0 partyhay7070 and rofl gl m8
maddawho 2 years ago
WOW that was the best one ive seen so far!
newcarscent7 2 years ago
Hey, Thanks for your comments on my vid, your vid is cool, bit of a problem with the audio but that must be youtube as well. Also it needs to be less then 2 mins and get to the point as fast as you can, other then that its good i like it. Best of luck to you guys. Good Job
justformobwars 2 years ago
Ya im Redoing sound now....
Godfather said it was fine that its over.. But like I said I am in the midst of re editing it
immuneshade 2 years ago
woow you guys are like my heroes!! keep it up
1westons1 2 years ago
you got 5k in the bag
ProNubAdge 2 years ago
Damn good work.you deserve cup.
gandipxx 2 years ago
I love this video!!! Good luck with the contest...you deserve to win!
sounder17 2 years ago
YESSSSSSS!
bionicbuttlessboi 2 years ago
Epic and Vert...your pants are ALWAYS mostly off anyhow! ROFL! Great special affects.
letdowns 2 years ago
EPICCCCCCCC
thepresident022 2 years ago
rofl that was great hahaha
1TylerFord1 2 years ago
lmao nice
123urpked 2 years ago
lol
my pants are off to you STERILE MAGE
verticleye 2 years ago 3
OMG im in this im sexy!!!!!
TYLER IS HOT!
letdowns 2 years ago
nice, is that Nathan, tanner and wes in there?
crazyairsoftshooter 2 years ago
lol
junoooni911 2 years ago
first view
sp00kd00k 2 years ago
The crowd goes wild!
KingOfSmurfs 2 years ago