baroque word age (first draft)

[sittiz]

Awesome. I like this just as it is. No other elements distracting me, just the words on the screen and the soundtrack. Poetic simplicity and it works well in this case in my opinion.

[webmadman]

@sittiz

Thank you!

I agree with you- when I set out on this project, I saw the words as just the starting point, I honestly didn't expect the first step to come out so compelling. As it is, I think I'll probably leave it as is- I learned a lot in the process, so I guess I'll need to start another project to learn more :-)

[originalplastic]

You've done it! Your poetry moves! More please!