I loved it, very well written. You had substance and subtlety. It was an 'intelligent' song, and benefited greatly. Excellent job, I want to hear more.
That was beautiful! It wasn't flat, just authentic & live as opposed to engineered beyond recognition. Please post more. BTW, glad to see you had fun in my city by the Bay.
well... you probably do need to work on your singing. But your guitar sounds beautiful, if there were any mistakes I didn't hear them. Nice song btw. Change is here baby, and I am on board!
not at all. your voice sounds fine. dont worry about it. just work on your loudness of your voice. again, another beautiful piece. i voted for obama for the record lol
Your voice isn't flat, you just need more practice to strengthen your control, and yes, diaphragm. It's exercise; better muscle tone makes for better control. I believe that singing (and most art ) is good for your soul.
This was VERY nice. I liked it and no, I do not think your voice sounded flat. The story was wonderful & I enjoyed it very much. I'd love it if my hubby would sing for me like that with his guitar!
I can't believe to this day that there are idiots that think artistic nature loving males are gay. Sound like the only beauty that fool wants is a gun shooting animals. Rock on klusmanp I am a tree huger and have cats which are awesome as well. More important I am a guy and quite far from gay.
i like nature and music and art and a lot of things. but theres nothing wrong with killing animals for food, that's nature and every omnivorous or carnivorous creature in the world does it. I live in red neck ville out here and am one of the very few with a computer (i also live in the smartest family in mailes but don't tell anyone i said that) and out here humans are a vital part of the food chain and without us hunting all the deer would become overpopulated and die. also, I like to ramble.
There's light at the end of the tunnel! (girls are used to:"this is not for you!" when we find cute boys but are not hetero -SNIF- usualy when we think "he's too perfect")
Geez, it's like when everyone shouted at Andy Kaufman to do Latka. The song stands on its own cat free, and I do love the cats and the ninja TI's. Awesome song!
Beautiful song. Reminds me of the old union songs. I like folk music because it captures a moment in a song.
As far as the singing goes, your voice suits the genre quite well and you've got a nice tone....
but if you wanted a direction to improve in, I would work on some breathing exercises to strengthen your diaphragm and then you'll have extra umph and air if you'd like to ornament.
You've already changed Youtube for the better with all your nice videos and good energy. Thanks for your cats and self sharing! Really enjoy your video offerings and positive cat activism! Have a great year!
To andlomnibus: no, most engineers I have known have not been cruel, evil people, just not very artistic. In general, I believe people drawn to the engineering field are predominately logical, pragmatic, and creative in a way that usually does not come out as songwriting or funny videos. Sorry if I offended anyone!
That is so simple and beautiful I found myself singing along with you. Hey, perhaps we could do a duet? Nice to hear from you. And ..."Bonne Annee" as we say in France, or a happy new year; which ever direction your life takes.
Thanks so much, your voice is lovely but most of all so sincere, the words to your song are simple yet powerful. Yes a change is coming, a good one, thanks again for another great video!
Maybe Obama watches YT and would like to use your song for his inauguration in a few days? My husband wrote to Obama yesterday inviting him to attend the Black Heritage Celebration in Oklahoma City in February. He probably won't come, but you never know! My husband's a Researcher for the State and enjoys writing, so he got chosen to "write" the letter. He thought it was important to show that even smaller communities can bring about change and wanted Obama to know--just like your song lyrics.
The State of Oklahoma Dept. of Civil Liberties, along with other state depts., sponsors The Black Heritage Celebration once a year, as well as the Latino Heritage Celebration & the Native American Heritage Celebration. I think it is important to show how far we have come as a society and change is more than just based on advances doing away with racial prejudice and should be change in general to be more open minded in all ways-religiously, racially, & gender-related, basically more thoughtful.
Wonderful! and inspiring in this season of the rebirth of freedom.
"No one should make you feel guilty for not...creating art, but such activity helps the whole world. What did Blake say?--'No person who is not an artist can be a Christian.' He means that a person who refuses to approach his whole life actively, using language, music, sculpture, painting, or drawing, is a caterpillar dressed in Christian clothes, not a human being." - Robert Bly
Do you write out your songs first or play around with the guitar until you find a melody and then build up a song around that? Either way, you're very talented. That song took to me to a nice place.
I usually have several guitar "thingies" floating around in my head. When lyrics inspiration hits I play around with the various guitar "thingies" to see if I can get a fit with the lyrics.
I'm studying engineering as an undergrad. I really like some of your videos, they're oddly funny. And i also wanted to thank you for making engineers everywhere look a little less pathetic video by video. Haha, i kid of course.
You have a wonderful voice :)
lotrfreak2010 2 years ago
Loved your song!
tsiobo 2 years ago
I loved it, very well written. You had substance and subtlety. It was an 'intelligent' song, and benefited greatly. Excellent job, I want to hear more.
DaUziel 2 years ago
Nice voice you have ;)
By the way, how come you are not wearing that red shirt anymore? you look good in it.
TheMia168 2 years ago
If this is a pro-obama song , I'm sorry but I don't ant his "change".
DizziNY1 2 years ago 2
That was wonderful! Thanks for all your stuff. Really makes me smile!
nelspaws 2 years ago
A little bit out of tune but hey! we've got a have fun in this short life!!! Great song! Love your humour!
bogoto123 2 years ago
That was beautiful! It wasn't flat, just authentic & live as opposed to engineered beyond recognition. Please post more. BTW, glad to see you had fun in my city by the Bay.
robinohood2001 2 years ago
Well thanks! I always try to improve so I'll keep working at it. Lucky you to live in SF. What a beautiful city!!
klusmanp 2 years ago
you're great!
fevertotell00 2 years ago
you should lose the guitar and sing it to cat yodeling lol! this is good
Fyairln 2 years ago
Very nice. Sounds like a classic folk tune...reminds me of Woody. Simple and to the point, keep it up!!
mara235 2 years ago
I like it! its soft and peaceful! did you make the song up? awsome
AndreaMNarciso 2 years ago
well... you probably do need to work on your singing. But your guitar sounds beautiful, if there were any mistakes I didn't hear them. Nice song btw. Change is here baby, and I am on board!
always2bfaithful 2 years ago
ummm great but the cat yodeling is way better haha great stuuffffss!!
blue0piggy 2 years ago
awesome
vpittsley 2 years ago
Dude! You voted for Obama? You just earned 25 points in my book. That's a lot.
You did go a little flat at times, but I still loved the song.
coffeekoneko 2 years ago
I gather then that you voted for the current occupant of the Oval Office?
That's disappointing.
I really enjoy your cat videos though.
annoyinglittletwerp 2 years ago
it was a lil off a lil sometimes a lil xP but still, it's pretty awesome :D
ramo823 2 years ago
u sound great!!! no kitties here? :( miss zoey!!!!! and the two orange guys!!!
semerdo 2 years ago 2
I bet a million dollar that you don't have cat's and guitars!
RFDlic 2 years ago
Riot! love u
semerdo 2 years ago
not at all. your voice sounds fine. dont worry about it. just work on your loudness of your voice. again, another beautiful piece. i voted for obama for the record lol
snipehunter45 3 years ago
Your voice isn't flat, you just need more practice to strengthen your control, and yes, diaphragm. It's exercise; better muscle tone makes for better control. I believe that singing (and most art ) is good for your soul.
myartchick 3 years ago
I'd hit it. ;)
DoctressJulia 3 years ago
He's dreamy.....
llsbastian 3 years ago 2
Great song, Paul!
More please. :)
LongIslandMom 3 years ago
hm very pretty and nice
ITSxMExBITCHx 3 years ago
Loved it, Paul. You are not just a pretty face, eh?
How are the kitties?
Metamorphica2 3 years ago
if you had your music on a cd, i would buy it.
lovely song, simple, clean, wonderfully refreshing.
MatchGirl 3 years ago
WOOOO OBAMA!
also nice song! makes me want to see what he'l do.
MeowMix140 3 years ago
cool :)
fbceugene 3 years ago
love it!!
linathequeen 3 years ago
This was VERY nice. I liked it and no, I do not think your voice sounded flat. The story was wonderful & I enjoyed it very much. I'd love it if my hubby would sing for me like that with his guitar!
Suenell 3 years ago
Nice song, but you're right about your vocals!
eirehead55 3 years ago
very nice song - reminds me of 60's folk music - yes change has to & will occur - great fan of urs - luv cats too :)
Rena54 3 years ago
That would be a great Unitarian anthem.
jamieteevee 3 years ago
I can't believe to this day that there are idiots that think artistic nature loving males are gay. Sound like the only beauty that fool wants is a gun shooting animals. Rock on klusmanp I am a tree huger and have cats which are awesome as well. More important I am a guy and quite far from gay.
icupix 3 years ago 3
i like nature and music and art and a lot of things. but theres nothing wrong with killing animals for food, that's nature and every omnivorous or carnivorous creature in the world does it. I live in red neck ville out here and am one of the very few with a computer (i also live in the smartest family in mailes but don't tell anyone i said that) and out here humans are a vital part of the food chain and without us hunting all the deer would become overpopulated and die. also, I like to ramble.
MeowMix140 3 years ago
Sure you aren't gay? :-) You're cute anyway!
RockvilleWoof 3 years ago
I'm not gay, just very precise. Not that there's anything wrong with that.
klusmanp 3 years ago
There's light at the end of the tunnel! (girls are used to:"this is not for you!" when we find cute boys but are not hetero -SNIF- usualy when we think "he's too perfect")
MelleButterf 3 years ago
Where are the cats, where's TJ?
Seriously, can you cook as well? You develop more and more to a dream man to me...you can play the guitar!!! And your voice isn't that bad..!
anneperle 3 years ago 2
Geez, it's like when everyone shouted at Andy Kaufman to do Latka. The song stands on its own cat free, and I do love the cats and the ninja TI's. Awesome song!
rosechimera 3 years ago
Well done. Reminds me of something Nick Drake would have done... only without the melancholy.
hussalita 3 years ago
Lovely, how about a cat song? I would love it, you have a great voice.
catendresse 3 years ago
That was really good!!
Undine1225 3 years ago 2
Beautiful song. Reminds me of the old union songs. I like folk music because it captures a moment in a song.
As far as the singing goes, your voice suits the genre quite well and you've got a nice tone....
but if you wanted a direction to improve in, I would work on some breathing exercises to strengthen your diaphragm and then you'll have extra umph and air if you'd like to ornament.
Fantastic though. Keep it up!
kalypsokink 3 years ago 2
Bravo! I like this a lot. Well done! :)
KarinBerry 3 years ago
Very fitting! Better than that poem read on national TV!!!!
I hope you keep that mind of your working =) I wander what other great things can come out of that!
HrhbunnyGirl 3 years ago
Hey wait a minute - didn't Ginger write that?
Versorium 3 years ago
I love your song! Thank you. (Gee, no kitties on backup vocals?)
mbchase 3 years ago
Finally! A video by klusmanp without any stupid cats!
(I just wanted to be different. I love your cats)
TeamAlphaBravo 3 years ago
Very fine song, and a wonderful performance! 5*
SomeCharacters 3 years ago
that sounds so pleasant (sp check), kind of like a lullaby. thanks :)
valkarja 3 years ago
You are Amazing, your talent, your sencerity, and your compassion for cats.
By the way; I miss the cats; will they be having a new video out soon?
Thank you for another wonderful video.
sashaporter113 3 years ago
Love you. But where are the cats :)
tattinger99 3 years ago
beautiful.. what a voice & lyrics!!
but where are Oscar, Ginger & Zoe??
stoneandeddie 3 years ago
CHANGEFAGQ!
nah actually good song i thoroughly enjoyed that
adv1k 3 years ago
Beautiful but where are the cats?
Kattypuss7 3 years ago
That was great :) Thanks for sharing it with us all
Wuqaz 3 years ago
good
lmao20092009 3 years ago
"Brothers and sisters from the ocean to the sky'
And a change is comin' in the sweet by and by."
Doesn't "sweet by and by" mean "heaven" or after death? I live in a Southern state and that usually means "after death" to me. Ha ha!
I hope we don't have to wait that long for change to happen! ...o.O...
I like your song and lyrics, but that line bothers me. You have a lot of talent!
KathyBentley 3 years ago
Awsome. This song really spoke to me. I'm facing some very challenging problems right now and this was very uplifting. Thanks!
Kim
kimllpd 3 years ago
Ok, lovely song, timely lyrics, nicely sung, pleasant voice, in tune. But where are the cats????
5 stars anyway. (;^)
CattyCatRanch 3 years ago
Well arent you talented! ^_^
XxLuciferousxX 3 years ago
You've already changed Youtube for the better with all your nice videos and good energy. Thanks for your cats and self sharing! Really enjoy your video offerings and positive cat activism! Have a great year!
healtheworldnow08 3 years ago
pretty song
emprise 3 years ago
You seem to be as beautiful on the inside as you are nice looking on the outside! I wish you and your kitties the most happiness and success in 2009.
1lightspeed 3 years ago
To andlomnibus: no, most engineers I have known have not been cruel, evil people, just not very artistic. In general, I believe people drawn to the engineering field are predominately logical, pragmatic, and creative in a way that usually does not come out as songwriting or funny videos. Sorry if I offended anyone!
lahuerasantera 3 years ago
Very nice singing!
ElatedScherzo 3 years ago
Very nice - I love your videos!
krysia2005 3 years ago
awesome
greencode80 3 years ago
You're so sweet. Who would ever believe you're an engineer?
lahuerasantera 3 years ago
You say that as if engineers are usually cruel, sadistic people.
andlomnibus 3 years ago
That is so simple and beautiful I found myself singing along with you. Hey, perhaps we could do a duet? Nice to hear from you. And ..."Bonne Annee" as we say in France, or a happy new year; which ever direction your life takes.
suzyqplacet 3 years ago
Beautiful song.
DaniellaNicoleK 3 years ago
Very nice patriotic sentiment :-)
SpaceyZoe 3 years ago
wonderful
ratgirl03 3 years ago
ok i love the cat videos but i hate obama
justinxaz 3 years ago
Ya, change is comin in higher Taxes!
bbjean88 3 years ago
nice
Salesman666 3 years ago
Oh, yeah -- a change is coming, all right. The entire civilized world is going to be seeing a change Real Soon Now.
MartySchrader 3 years ago
Hurray for change for a better world!
hedonistic2008 3 years ago
This is very nice! I am impressed. :-)
RosyB9 3 years ago
I rather enjoyed it. It's calming and gives one something to think about. Great job!
CerasiMelida 3 years ago
Wow, you're such a great singer and guitar player. Wonderful song!
MannDexx 3 years ago
Lovely. I can think of no other description for the song.
pinkbandgeek 3 years ago
Thanks so much, your voice is lovely but most of all so sincere, the words to your song are simple yet powerful. Yes a change is coming, a good one, thanks again for another great video!
Tibet1959 3 years ago
great song loved it
mishmishthe1 3 years ago
Lovely...thanks for sharing your talent!
quextico 3 years ago
Thanks klusmanp :>)
lids65 3 years ago
It sorta reminds me of the early sixtie's folk music. I liked it a lot.
vampyreaayin 3 years ago
That is exactly what I was going to say. It also reminds me of the music from the animated movie "The Hobbit."
aurasun3 3 years ago
Maybe Obama watches YT and would like to use your song for his inauguration in a few days? My husband wrote to Obama yesterday inviting him to attend the Black Heritage Celebration in Oklahoma City in February. He probably won't come, but you never know! My husband's a Researcher for the State and enjoys writing, so he got chosen to "write" the letter. He thought it was important to show that even smaller communities can bring about change and wanted Obama to know--just like your song lyrics.
KathyBentley 3 years ago
The State of Oklahoma Dept. of Civil Liberties, along with other state depts., sponsors The Black Heritage Celebration once a year, as well as the Latino Heritage Celebration & the Native American Heritage Celebration. I think it is important to show how far we have come as a society and change is more than just based on advances doing away with racial prejudice and should be change in general to be more open minded in all ways-religiously, racially, & gender-related, basically more thoughtful.
KathyBentley 3 years ago
nice
apurrfectkittie1019 3 years ago
Wonderful! and inspiring in this season of the rebirth of freedom.
"No one should make you feel guilty for not...creating art, but such activity helps the whole world. What did Blake say?--'No person who is not an artist can be a Christian.' He means that a person who refuses to approach his whole life actively, using language, music, sculpture, painting, or drawing, is a caterpillar dressed in Christian clothes, not a human being." - Robert Bly
Thank you for this & all your quirky vids! ;D
pumamama9 3 years ago
great song my fellow engineer
gocaca 3 years ago
Do you write out your songs first or play around with the guitar until you find a melody and then build up a song around that? Either way, you're very talented. That song took to me to a nice place.
EleFlameMax 3 years ago 2
I usually have several guitar "thingies" floating around in my head. When lyrics inspiration hits I play around with the various guitar "thingies" to see if I can get a fit with the lyrics.
klusmanp 3 years ago
Even your comment-reply-"thingies" are dead-pan and whimsical. Jesus. :)
EleFlameMax 3 years ago
I'm studying engineering as an undergrad. I really like some of your videos, they're oddly funny. And i also wanted to thank you for making engineers everywhere look a little less pathetic video by video. Haha, i kid of course.
attimus331 3 years ago 2
beautiful
guitar2adam 3 years ago
really great!
xoxoamandakisses 3 years ago
Paul, you are awsome! I'm so glad that you post some of the best videos on YT, they never fail to entertain. Thanks.
JelloSheriff 3 years ago
An engineers guide to change.
Luky1Jay 3 years ago 3
Very nice!
catquack 3 years ago
this was pleasant.
Drstrangelove17 3 years ago 2
nice !!
NickYorkieDog 3 years ago
Very appropo -- following in the footsteps of W. Guthrie and P Seegar. Thanks
jrlageson 3 years ago
This made me smile. Thank you!
Foxx3699 3 years ago
very nice and sothing
phillipsouter86 3 years ago
Screw the First
that a Lovely Song
hyperkid55 3 years ago