The Elephant Chronicles Episode 2 - Two Betrayals (Halo 3 Machinima)

[Legobiy24]

The leader sounded like Barney! An a*****e! And maybe they should just drive it!!!!!! How about that as an idea!

[theG4MER14]

i didint understand a singel thing the elite was saying. can you post what he was saying in the coments

[zMinybuddiez]

Your intro was WAAAY to fucking long. 1:17 ?!?! Seriously? I skipped it.

[BiscuitFever]

i think you could have worked a little on your voice acting and on your camera angles also the script was kinda medeoker just giving you some positve critisesm (sorry about my spelling i have all ways been a horible speller)

[xLURCKx]

wow half the people who commented are retarded, frist you say you wasted part of your life watching this then your too stupid to realize that your wasting even more of it just to say it sucks or read other comments to click one of the thumbs so the voices weren't clear who gives a fuck if you dont like it just dont watch it again dumbass or spend a little time to try to help make a better one

[DeadHippieFilms]

Pretty good. Where is that piano & singer bit in the beginning from? For the life of me I can't place it.

[macandfriends]

this was better than your first. just try some script writing

[killkcow]

@drakadh its there second video not their first (besides glitchs)

[Generalkidd]

Actually it's probably my 5th or something like that besides the glitches.

[valleeproductions2]

If you people think it sucks why don't you try making one better? Keep your bad comments to yourself.

[mikko271]

the elite is fucking retarded

[TheSquidtank]

i liked it good job just make the voices more clear

[DarthVulku]

ok dont listen to a word these assholes are saying theyr just a bunch of jerks that cant give constructive critisim. its not that bad. i suggest that you check out the forgotten spartans seriesand compare yours too his.

[Haloisawesome22]

sucks

[THEKILLER9K]

wow this is the worst vid iv ever seen 1/5

[Drakadh]

Hey gives those guys a brake it was there first vid ( Besides the glitches vid ) if they were pros they can make a heck of a vid

[eaguilar97]

dude i didnt even knew wich guy was talking this was a REATARDED VIDEO here me r e t a r d e d v i d e o

[Sei0124]

3:19 Did not Match either. Those other two are leaving, and the other two guys are saying, "Don't Leave, come back!" But then again they are moving back as well. I thought they wanted them to come back, not walk away from them.

[Sei0124]

Sorry but... The Storyline is WAY off my friend -.-" I thought this Machinima was suppose to be about an Elephant. They found an Elephant and It doesn't really occur to them that it is, "ANCIENT" or "AWSOME, WE FOUND AN ELEPHANT!"

And at 2:09 , it doesn't make SENSE at ALL! He asks, "Why did you bring us here" etc.

But didn't they go to the Desert to find a Elephant?

[pandadude951]

Theres no emoition, its boring. And lame!! stop making videos!!!

[DarkFalcon524]

You know, if you hate this, then don't watch it. It's really unnecessary to post it on every video.

[pandadude951]

No there is. They should stop because its crappy. I didn't finish it. I watched the first two minutes to see if its any good. And its Crappy!

[YourMomstinky]

The voice doesnt seem very like serious seems like hes just reading no emotion but still very good

[comandergernade]

when the flare went off when it ended it waz so delayed he said ahhh when it ednded and what did the eleite say

[sharinganxgod]

This is gay!!!!

[Ironmaniacs7]

wat the crap did the elite say 2:21-2:35?

It sounded like .." theres something you should know, ladrtasa huskio hsud bjnwb hcudnjci ieohnj usni bcih wdj bucijwbkb uw dbc wudcowuc uio yqwh"

[clashing24]

THIS FUCKING SUCKZ COCK!

nice 5 year old actors faggot.

[EnemyD]

indeed man I agree with you, terrible even my old machinima kicks the shit outta this crap, my videos are better and quite frankly I have been working on new machinima for over a year now preparing and I promise it to be a popular series.

[Deathnotice1223]

we all know u have a problem about sucking cock retard u r just being asshole

[wtfruo2]

lets see u guys make one

[dillon9168]

this is gay as hell

[SHADOWRYDER123]

hey general i would (personally) think that if u gave the elites more of a deeper voice it would give the impression of Captors.... apart from that good job :)

[ZackP9]

That.......Sucked............

[rsroxs0404]

umm come on man that was as bad as teh first 1 wot is teh story line u need 2 make it liek more real u no wot i mean yer well good luck

[clashing24]

i rather stare at a dying puppy than watch this deadbeat garbage!this thing u call the elephant chronicals is no better than dora the explorer!

[YoshiFan100]

dora the explora is fucking awsom

[Arbitor2]

dude make the begingins shorter they like basicly take half of the video

[200spartins]

I couldn't really understand the first elite but what i wanted to ask was did u use naruto music? if you did good choice:)

[Generalkidd]

yeah it was Naruto Music

[EvilMonkey401]

OMG its me lol again Dark storm 444 and add me as your friend plz ty

[fuzzlebutt94]

part 2

In many cases, the author will also have the right to be identified on their works and to object if their work is distorted or mutilated.

look at the botom it says that the author RIGHTS to his name to be used on anything you used what he is made so you are n00b ocopyright

[Generalkidd]

That's true, but it's only violating copyright laws if I am making money from using the audio. You are not paying me to watch my videos therefore it well within copyright laws.

[EnemyD]

read more into copyright laws cause you only got a tiny piece right you really need to be more educated in copyright.

[Generalkidd]

oh plz, nothing in this video violates copyright laws. As long as it's non-commercial use, it's fine. I'm not making any money and if it was illegal, this video would have been taken down a long time ago.

[xemosasukekun2x]

u guys r awesome can i join

[fuzzlebutt94]

hey i got nothing against this machinma but copy right is serious at least put the name in for the audio or this problem would not happen soits not my fault your stealing audio of my fav anime

[scottycatman]

....this is garbage....you can tell who's talking into different mics

[YOURTINYFRIEND]

I am disgusted by this putrid shit you call the elaphant chronicles.

[jwb72199]

YOUTUBE IS UPSIDE DOWN! YAY

[smallone112233]

i think this was good =)

[fuzzlebutt94]

in the credits your sopose to have credit to the music and ect so you have ilegally used naruto themes >=( reporting

[Generalkidd]

actually, it's only illegal if I make money from using it.

[kobbio22]

oh my god so what, not like he made it himself

[xtimmyx1237]

dude do you have nothing better to do in your life than to report copyright. how about this, stop being a fag and ruining vidoes by getting the audio removed

[XxXxYourselfxXxX]

I'm sorry but i'm gonna say that was terrible, the only good part like rojo said, was you at the end...

[rojobo4]

the last guy that spoke sounded LIKE a real elite

the other 2 sounded retarded

[Generalkidd]

That last guy was me.

[rojobo4]

oh then you sound awesome

[sneakerboyfrankie11]

you really need to change your title it sucks....

[Generalkidd]

You mean the Elephant Chronicles? Well, that title is meant to be a reference to one of my first videos.

[sneakerboyfrankie11]

no where the video starts here0:03

[Generalkidd]

ohhh that, that is our title because my gamertag is General Heed.

[Smokingpizza]

The Elite at 2:34 sounds retardet. You should stay away from the machinimas.

[F1NJP]

"It seems... that their group has been split up now... If we're lucky... they may end up killing each other... blah... blah... blah..."

I'm sorry for that but it just sounded so lame voice acting. LOL

[Naruhidanthebadguy]

could i be in tha next episode plzzzzzzzzzzzz

[kusday]

ok i might be able to do better acting in the next episode and i have to admit i do sound like im not trying

[jpto7]

great one! 5/5

[misterstarwars]

you can't hear the leader over the music

[huvi8]

pretty cool but the voice acting isnt the best tho.

[mecrushbloodelf]

by the way cool series

[mecrushbloodelf]

the elites seem to be the best acters

[Spartan4208]

sweet!

[Tinytimmy10893]

Nice job! Can't wait for the next episode!

[Suurender]

Wheni get my Xbox360 could i bee in ur next video if not is k. btw u nrock. also my gamertag will be WarnPixels

[klone57]

i like the story line and all but you need lower pitched voice actors.i mean it sounded really bad when there was the high pitched elite at the end then a really low pitched one talking right after that

[wazup970]

whdkhksdjhfkad

[hunter1496]

nice general we are getin 5/5s !

[SniperSoopy]

TOBITHEHEARTLESS IS A FAG but 4/5 since Tobi was in it and if he wasnt would of been 5 stars... But i'm not going to rate it.

[Generalkidd]

Did you know that according to the dictionary, the word "fag" just means a bundle of sticks? Yep, it's true. Look it up.

[kikikza]

Its true, but people take the sticks part the wrong way...

[roudarix]

5/5