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  • Never had a father or mother grew up in da hood happyness is a unfamilair word to me never known what dat felt lyke when will i die who knows so i just get high god never answered my prayers im a sinner and im scared so when will my life come to a end when will everything make sense i cant stand when i cry it just brings more pain inside.... Written By: Mr.OnE'8-E'SeveN yall should check out my fb page im a unknown artist gonna get in da studio with my nigga Mr.NiNe'Three'SiX and caleb

  • God gave u a soul n a mind fuk tha shit they tell u to do /make a ryme I don't need u to tell me who I am / u can tell me I ain't good / well fuk u i think u understood wat my intentions are n if u didn't well here I lay it out for ya/ have tha mentality to do wat u want if u don't things can become deadly as u walk/if u don't think this is the reality than ur weak minded n if u do fuk society u think I'm lyin well we all watched wen eazy was dying PAC was tha shit too now we are all here fee

  • It had to come to this, i'll give you all a bum to kiss, and ass to want to blast because at last ive become numb to fists, i came up from the bottom and i fought em, all my enemies, slaughtered em and never knew that they were all my friends to be, your ears you gotta lend to me, your raps u gotta send to me, ur challenges are emptily threatening my entity, and i don't have a problem showing off all my intensity, and bringing it, singing it like i'm a blue jay, one more thing soulja boy is 2gay

  • Mindless, spineless/ I'm the motherfuckin finest/ Prodigy, take all of your property/ Mine now, I won it properly/ Made rap my monopoly/ MikeNadim, stumble that/ Put it in a paper, crumble that/ Write right rap right now before the flight/ Sit tight, ready to ignite/ Head tight, brain waves struck despite/ I'm livin off luck, dead right?/ Not even, sit tight/ Let loose, abuse winnin the fight/ Livin of a new meanin of height/ Beatin any bitch in sight/ Paid defense/ Legitamate sacraments

  • There was prolly like two good raps on here thats ashame

  • my rage explodes from speakers/ reloads the tweeters to feel me deeper/ so much on my mind i cant be defined by mind readers/ put my thoughts behind me and follow the x beside my leader/ the nation of 93rd blacks set me back after the anthem/ parallels to the fist of a black panther/ many men prey on the focus of death in society/ but the irony fires me to speak my mind which cause multiple cultural rioting

  • Wow, kkidd4769/Seems like you lost your mind/Your just another hater/You act like your all greater/Than all of us/But really you suck/Yea but you say w"Whys this fool talking?"/I say cuz wanna and there aint nothing wrong with it/And I dont think im kool cuz I cuss when I rap/You do tho and its why I turn yours into scrap/Scrap metal so you should speed up on them pedals/And Lil Waynes good/Just like you should/But nah Im done ticking you off.../Please, I'l let someone else finish you off...

  • Ayo, mind of reality,bust a flow and prove my sanity,spit acid like an open battery,flow colder than winter next to a boulder,spit flu game like Ima cold shoulder,so what if I sell my mind for least and unlock the cage to free the beast and boast terrisiom like I'm from middle east,just another freestyle from another tight beat from the kid who can't afford shoes on his feet. -Drama

  • In my mind im a fighter My hearts a lighter My arms are the writers While my eyes an overnighter My body feels like itz getting tired From all the bulls### thats getting higher The light is disapearing while the night get nighter No hope around me but i keep it lighing Like a thunder in a rain instead of the sighting Of a tornado that keeps making us fighting An Mc trying and killing bees I see you yfb but thanks i can handle this by myself But you still agree That theres nothing stoping me
  • on chance one shot get it done dont get caught because they will kill u like these pills i pop sit back and drop into a high for days in a daze looked in the mirror cant se my face force my eyes open sprayem with mace make u a disgrace then dig u a grave no more lifes to save time ran out gotta kill the slaves keepem in chains i say when it rains when it snows i say when u call my hoes laugh attack i tickle your toes as your girl blows til a blow o shit just let one go got five more eny miny mo

  • In my heart i'm already dead but in my head i'm still pulsin rhymes like its the enemy of me so lets think a sec before we breathe when we see the bodies dropped on the pavement na thats not murder its stupidpity all these people killin others for wat? revenge,money fuck that we all no that everyone is not the enemy unless they fire on us so don't pled for something that u don't no mercy never get none so quit asking so i might as well light this weed and smoke it up till i'm K.O
  • everytime I rap you know it's gotta be hard/so hard that your gonna wanna fucking see god/cuz I'll make you suffer all eternly I'm gonna make you bleed till you could no longer breath/I'm gonna make you see the true meaning of musury/I'm gonna make you drink all your puke while your still asleep/I'm gonna make you wish that U were fucking dead/dam right little sissy's thats exactly what I fucking said/and I don't give a fuck about what anyone thinks/I'll fucking drown U in your own kitchen sink!

  • Doug...Doug.... My name is doug You look at me, you gettin a slug in your brain like EMIN3M I'm INSANE, Drizzy drake and lil wayne they aint got shit on me. I smoked so much weed I'm outta my tree And you'll think twice about looking at me. I'm Better the game and im better then 50 I'm pretty new but ima make history, and you can comment or diss me i don't give a damn cause everything i just said, came off the Top of my Head.
  • I Hop Up To The Mic Ta Spit..I Just Sliced My Wrsists...So Bloods All Over The Place Spraying Out And Shit, How Could This... Turn So.. Bad So Quick, I'm Onstage Wi'a Fine Bitch And Massive Stiff..Which...Means That I Switched Lorazepam With Valium Mixied With Klonopin Damn It's Gone I'm Out This Bitch, Fuck It All, I Don't Need Nobody...I Need My Cemetary My Pills And A Sawed Of Shotty.. Ya Got Me?

  • @Rawrrrx19 I did not post this..........

  • in the eyes of my mother, i stand out from all the others, never fuckin tripped playa i aint never stuttered, soldiers on the front line like colonel cutter, slicin thru tracks like knives thru hot butter, comin out the gutter like you cleaning out leaves, and if you hate me NO APOLOGIES

    nice beat bruh

  • Scence birth, you say im a curse,

    I just think its funny beating ur ass on a verse

    But its no worse, you talking shit under my name

    you wanna play a game ill leave ur ass

    bloody and cold in the rain

    ur life is what i'll claim

    I got the glock loaded with seven shots

    so step to my block and get that ass rocked

    And yo homie will get socked

    You really think I give a fuck?

  • sick shit

    but since birth i was worse

    learinin every curse word

    i emursed

    never talked so i pursed my lips shut

    im raw some say uncut

    my flow is a rappin nightmare

    its scary

    mommy never knew daddy

    all i know is he drove a caddy

  • nigga got his lesson learned he got what he earned but i shoulda neva took his life away i shoulda let it fade by day each hoe i spread legs with get 3 kids and i have child support next nigga is on life support my homie didnt abort so his life is now in the pen wrestlin grown men i wear a size 10 in shoes but i aint gotta clue what color is blue or red so if i see a guy roll up i pop up and shoot yeah some deep shit huh?
  • deep shit heres some shit you can compete with leap away fade by day i smoke kilo's i got a ckuzin kiko him and rico knocked out now they got found out and smuggled passin by cops and get ruffled thats why i keep the rilfe loaded and the pistol bloaded get cocked and reloaded more bullets float in shootin bullets while you havin din din with grown men listen !
  • i won't do drugs..lol....eminem rocks

  • everyone wants to be a famous rapper, but they wont/ out for the gold incrested bling but they ain't dope/ oh did I stike a never? slice n' rewire the ciruits of these drones, proned, owned by the make believe guidlines of rap hiding behind line firing back I'm tired of whack ass faggots that can't rap for shit when every spit I lick is sick disecting victims in minutes limitless killing enemies endlessy no whack rappers a friend of me, rest in peace, there done end deceased

  • tha shadow is back, back in the game,

    now this wont be the same yall need to shame,

    cus this is shade, putting up ma shades.

    poppin some heads, keep rappin untill you fades.

    i`ll kill ya with my rymes, kill ya with ma knifes.

    now i got some ho`s there all my wifes.

    fuck the world, this is the only thing i try.

    my rymes are hot, my hard is cold, and iam fly.

    comment ;)?

  • uhuh yeah you see yeah you can feel it its the great in side yeah you would wanna climb in buyyour self a nice dime watch piece uhuh its hell where we dont see you its the life we stay and long and preech to you im so sick im tired of the pain knock on the door tell me im ready for the fame tell me im set and ready to the clame what wont be spoken in the name tell me im long ready i promise ill only make you stronger fallow the tips wave the hand up and smileyelling fuck you

  • look listen to the beat yup its me when i got my rappin record bear feet. not much mony on the streets, in a football team couldnt afford cleats, i was a MVP player untill my homis death to him today i plege, the name was fif aka chris say shit about him eat my fist then take this my rap i know i aint good but i still got my hood, maybe i cant rap cuz i aint black or i dont rap with crack, im not da best not the worst for me this is a first so plz take my word!!

    i tried sorry!! it is bad!

  • Grim reaper puttin lives 2 rest u can try but u wont deny my test thinkin 2 urself i shouldve worn a vest i read it i wouldnt call it a try 2 dis dont think u wanna be tryin this 50 rounds so i no i wont miss yea i hear u haters u still talkin shit, but y don't u just mind ur biz b4 i shoot u n ur kids, so nibble da head of my stick, til i spit, n always swallow it, i hate when a bitch waste what i give, now close ur mouth n wipe my nut off ur lips.
  • BITCH COME STEP WIT ME/ IT WILL BE YO LAST/ BREATH YOU EVA DO BREATHE. STANDIN ON TOP OF DA WORLD WIT NOTHIN OTHER DEN MA GLOCK AND SOME TREES, IM BUZZIN, SLAP YOU ACROSS DA FACE AFTER IM DONE WIT YO MOTHAFUCKIN,,,, ASS peace

  • whats up with these idiots rating bad...

    judge the lyrics and style of rhymes and meaning geez just cause aint no kill and money rap don't mean it fucks shit, seriously...

  • In my mind I'ma fighter..../ that's only how you rap/ like you think you'll get far by using that/ you lack/ the fact/ to rap real/ get the deal/ get the fuck out this place/ your fake/ your Lyrics are 1 copied/ 2 sound like some wayne shit poppin'/ like your some kinda gangsta/ trying to rhyme/ about cash, bitches, and wannabe crime/ I'm sick of all your tries/ buy some time/ to learn a good line/ (Fucking Youtube Comment character count man)

  • YO. this ain't a diss 2wards Shady... It's a diss 2wards the copy rappers out there who got famous, while some real skilled rappers are stuck in there basement....

  • And 2 all haters, fuck you too. I know the guys who comment me bad all the time are some nolifes jealous, I ain't awsome, and I don't have to be - fuck you ppl,

  • ayo..

    all ur raps suck like lil wayne's shit

    brainless motherfuckaz plus ya caint spit

    u face this and ull get ur brain split

    get a face lift so watch wut the fuck u say bitch

    u wanna talk badboy 1greenDiamond

    i putta nine to u n we'll see whos survivin

    bullet straight to ya brain the aim is immaculate

    kill u on purpose n make it look like an accident

  • Hahaa you killed em man

    peace

  • @kkidd4769 hahaha sick shit!

  • no im not emo but a good verse

    relax

  • i think how many times you left me thats why im just smoking this weed until my eyes can not see i know girl you found another man i dont understand i dont feel emo but just leave me alone now i got the gun i put it to my head enough is said im ready to pull the trigger so my brains can spill all over the wall even though after all i have no apologize because i relazied if i cant have youmight as well leave this world without you
  • i live in regrets but i cant go back, go a year in the future, i dont kno where ill be at/ i might be dead, or lockd up in the jail cell, kids dead on the streets, bullets made they brain swell/ and u all kno dam well,i got up when i fell, got my story to tell/

  • i can kill it flip i have en visioned where i wanna visit but stay away from prison will u listen everything can become so simple another example of a badboy witha badboy vision making badboy decisions no limits i wanna move forward i wanna take control not hidin buried in a hole like a man wiv no wit i get a grip get a bottle take a sip while i think all i seem to do is drink my lifes lookin bleek all i wanna do is jus speak jus retreat maybe start again
  • Can somone sit down and give me a few seconds to listen to all my intelligent eligant verses noyu got it all wrong i dont snatch white bitches purses. Its not worth it i'm sick of cursin as life worsens. When I was 12 I thought mymother was a infinant demon to belive in

    But my mothers got me scremin cause she keeps sayin shes guna be leavin to cleaveland with my stepfather Hes horible cause he isnt one percent ignorable cause all hedoes is bitch about the metaphoria about my aunt Gloria

  • im a psycho that smokes hydro

    woah and i mite go slow

    when i flow i row my boat as i rhyme n go

    ill battle any mutha fuka that wants 2 flo

    oh u dont know ill take out the 4 4

    and cap u down u wack ass klown

    fuck your town u bow down

    as i take your crown cry cry u bitch

    ima take this around and make a hit

    ill spit better then any rapper when i take a shit then make a hit so u can listen ima cuss out every hater as im dissin after im done ill kill u then start pissin

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  • i apologize, for tryna wreck it but i seem to have been disrespected so check it whenever you motha fucks come standing watch out cuz microphones and rhymes im handling vandaling up the walls with what i feel is true but few can mess with it and that dont include you so foo, i suggest you relax on these tracks cuz we takin money out your hands like god damn sale tax straight facts, and this is plain and just so when they strike, realize retaliation is a must. TRUST
  • Why is everyone on youtube sooo bad at rap.. lol.. its almost embarrasing. has honestly NO ONE heard of multies? or metaphors? or just basic wordplay? but damn no multies.. thats 2nd grade soulja boy shit.

  • agreed

  • the weed sells much more than your retail/ sellin pounds on the beach - posted up like a seashell/ some so-called gangstas - they be actin like females/ tight clothes - long hair - and a beard like a shemale/ and he's stale/ old and out dated - he cant stop hatin - keep hopin you dont make it/ til your dumpin the 40 off/ im bout to pull a Tony Hawk/ PUSSY i'm Neversoft/ im bout to set it off - im feelin like a dog on a chain - they bout to let me off.....theres more but i needa webcam or somthin

  • umm... wow.. how do i put this... it lacks rhymes... the rare rhymes you do have are pathetic honestly. not hatin just bein brutally honest here. meta's (none) no wordplay. all cliche shit. nothing worth reading.

  • have u ever heard of fuken freestyle bioch!! there aint rules!

  • yea i know what a freestyle is. i can do it alot better. never said there were "rules" there are just skills that you can use to make it better. such as actually using rhymes more than one word. cause one word rhymes and no talent any1 can do. a GOOD freestyle has metaphors wordplay and multie syllable rhymes. you obviously dont know what your talking about thinking there are rules an shit lol, and thinking all freestyles are equal. go hang yourself or somthin. there is a reason why someare best

  • wow nice explanation of what we already know ... c i dont give a fuk all iim sayin is that theres just no rules... n un should suk on a donkey dick

  • well seeing as you type worse than a mentally challenged child, i decided to imform you of the basics (as that what i was judging on) so you basically rendered your first comment void. and what are you talking about donkey dicks for? are you into gay beastaility? fuckin faggot.. smh

  • THIS AINT NO FUKEN SPELLING BEE MOFO, AIGHT I GET UR POINT AND I AGREE NOW WHAT DO U WANT ... WOW MENTALLY CHllenged kid? how fuken weak ... im not smart and wat dont mean shit either way cuz guess wat ! we both fuken die lmao naw just kidding idk i like arguing it helps me waste people time like now ! lmao naw fo sho i know wat u said but waynes gay

  • wayne is very gay. and i like arugeing to =)

  • @liquidbullet5 Lets see if you any better!!!

  • @solo0nine not gonna drop my dope shit for someone that honestly thinks these people are good, and challenging me to do better... not to mention your replying to my comment thats almost a year old

  • @liquidbullet5 the funnier thing is they are all rappin like they are poor when they can afford broad band internet electricity bill phone bill etc. lol

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  • go to sleep, please!,fuck a heart attack, ill make ur heart freeze/

    not your ordinaray mc, like the bitch you are make you drop to your knees/

    i make you bleed then plea, i gouge out your eyes so you cant see where you flea/

    im a zombie 6 feet deep,no longer wanting to feel the heat, so save ya self/

    cuz Daz like cigarette bad for your health,comin at you when you least expect like i got some stealth/

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  • haters.... step back if you feelin yourself/

    cuz i react with killin, with the pencils on my shelf/

    kid i choose to leave you bruised, as i watch the blood spillin, i warned you about your health/

    Daz is sharp like glass, not a bully but im fully willing to kick your ass/

    my brain thinks too fast, god damn i need a joint,nd u need a notebook to pass my class/

    this number two pencil is the stencil tracin your mental/

    Cuz shit is your fullest potential/

  • @ecuadork8 your the perfect example of what i was talking about. 1 word rhymes with no metaphors or punches. anyone can talk random violence and throw a rhyming word at the end... where's the skill?

  • @liquidbullet5 lol what are you talking about? there are metaphors and punches in there. including multies and wordplay.

    if u think there is no skill, thats coo cuz its your OPINION,just like MY opinion on how bad you are at interpreting nd analyzing rap and my freestyle

  • @ecuadork8 "self, shelf, health" your attempt to rhyme feelin, killin, and spillin mid sentence wouldn't be as trashy if you knew anything about flow or syllable count.

    and your metaphors? "sharp like glass"... HAHAHA.. you are just saying nothing rhyming for the sake of rhyming and doing a poor job at it. It might be my OPINION your trash, but its a fact your rhymes are simplistic as the next, and your one metaphor belongs in a kinder-gardeners book.

  • @liquidbullet5 LMAo i cant rap to well XD im working on it reading a dictionary everynight Expanding my Vocabulary not rly hoping to get big but you know :/ just for fun

  • @spideyO10 ^ thats what i like to hear. just practice, make it a fun hobby.

  • Yo, my dignity is shielded,

    and ima about to nail it,

    hit the big time, this time,

    quit whinin', dude ur gonna be mine,

    wether you like it or not, im in sublime,

    half the time, doped off ma face,

    racin, pac'in, chasin motha fuckas, chokin them with a lace, then i slit their throats with a razor, beat em with a stick, light the dynamite with a damn short wick,tick-tock your times commin can you hear the clock? You can have your last words then Put a sock init bitch!

  • A Man In Michigan Who Is Misunderstood,

    Never Does Any Harm & Always Tries To Do Good. He Lives Life Like There Is No Tomorrow, He's Been Through Alot Of Pain And A Hell Of Alot Of Sorrow. Every One He Meets Is A Person Not A Race, He'll Do Almost anything To Put A Smile On A Womans Face.

    Copyright ©2009Ace W. Wilcox

  • respect the simpathy for him

    cuz his an MC and dat wat he supose to be

  • These Pricks Better Hype Down,

    Coz Right Now,

    My Sound,

    Is Takin Over My Town,

    Coz It Glows More Than A Light House,

    Its Appealin Like Your Girl Revealin

    Herself In Her NightGown,

    So Watch Your Career Slide Down,

    Coz No1s Takin My Crown

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  • nigga you gay

    you eat hay

    nigga you a nigga

    now stick up yo middle finga

    fuck u faggot

    u's a maggot

    nigga wat

    nigga who

    nigga u

  • sick rhymes brah

  • No apologies\ im probably \ out commiting anotha robbery \ cuz the cheese \ the chedda \ whateva \ is whats gunna make me betta \ howeva \ its gunna take foreva \ till i can make it rain \ well watch me make a change in the weatha... whether or not \ its the facts I drop \ thats why the... haters \ discriminators \ try an take my payper \ but you see i am the maker \ and they \ they are just the fakers \ no appology will eva come from me

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  • if you write, then i know your like, an mc, my hearts cold, were it use to be, i'm getting old, so please, just stay away from my G's, as i'm being left to freeze, that's how i live my life, fighting every night, i guess i know how to live right, telling bitches to be quiet, as i can't do my work, sit back as i get my felling hurt, fuck that, trying to beat me, your last lyris was wack, thats how i got you back,
  • i know this is a gay ass question....

    but can someone explain to me what a bar is....like i understand that every two claps...is one bar....

    I pick up the mike and the room starts spinning,(1 bar)

    cause your attention orbits around my lyrics,(2 bars)

    How real is that? Dawg thats for real,(3 bars)

    To emcee is skills, unbendable as steel,(4 bars)

    I grasp the mike, as if it was my dick,(5 bars)

    Now I master the bait and come all over you tricks,(6 bars)

    is this correct?

  • fuck yall your gay

    ppl pray because they cant live with out me

    so sick to see pricks tryin jump on my dick every time is hit

    im to good to spit shit give the mic to me so u can witness me wreak it

  • Everyone who likes beats like these should check out my song called what you want. It would be perfect 4 a soft eminem song

  • could you post out a link for downloads of that?

  • would you be able post a link for this MP3?

  • Just google youtube to mp3 converter.

  • yo i smoke a blunt a day 2keep me troubles away r at least keep dem at bay i av 2get dis shite out of me head and on 2a page be4 i blow out me brains..haha..high as a kite from smokin a joint r salvia tru a pipe..at dis stage id ride a dyke..so gimme d mic nd id make yea tink 2ce dat dissin me is plite.wit only 3mins of a beat nd 500words 2speak utubes fcked up coz i need more dan 3weeks..who said d white boy cant rap jst coz i hold me sack dont mean im tryin 2act black nw 500wrds av turned 2 1

  • its 1 bar intro, than 16 bars, chorus, 16 bars, chorus

  • thats good but when i write i do 1 bar intro 20bars chorus 20 bars chrous 20bars than 3 outro

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