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From: JohnnieTech2
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  • ur wack nigga im ashamed that ur the same color as me

  • @wwwbase As I am now you.  Well done sir.

  • what beat is that?

  • Hey man, this was great, can i join this cypher? because i very liked this cypher, and i got my lyrics done.

    Please pm or answer me here.

    Peace

  • This is such a great idea, and you're so very talented! Thank you for sharing; it was extremely moving.

  • That was deep man, great lyrics, nice pic choice.

  • does it have to be a rap? i wanna join :D

  • nice lyrics...

  • i need in on this how do i joinn????

  • sickest contests

  • sickestcontests

  • how do you get on this cypher?

  • this is sik dude!

  • this is a really new great idea. different type of cyher

  • the 1st thing i thought of when i saw this picture..(im writing b4 i lisen 2 his part)

    FGM. these young girls forced 2 be mutilated and have their clitoris removed. with no say @ all if they want to or not. no say even though certain rights protect them...it scars them for life. physically and emotionally as well as mentally.

    read a book called AMAN: THE STORY OF A SOMALI GIRL. very touching book.

    ok now i will listen

  • I loved it your so talented thats awsome

  • luv this cypher wish prince ea wuld do his vid on it

  • Oh me too, trust me. You know it would be sick.

  • nice good lyrics, it reminds me of that girl who was shot and killed in the Iran riots

  • you snaped on this

  • touching lyrics

  • dude u guys are all bad ass.

  • good concept

  • I watched pretty much all the videos to this cypher and it was tight!

    Keep up the work JohnieTech

  • this is a great idea for cypher!

  • ay brah. can i get down on this??????

  • Nothin really stoppin you man.

  • iight fsho brahh. thanxxx

  • loved the message.

    deep stuff, makes you think twice.

  • Thank you, I really appreciate that. Means a lot to me.

  • "if I could steal her shoes and walk just a half a mile,

    rob her of her tears just to see that child smile."

    I really liked that.

  • Yeah, I am usually really bad at writing a chorus. This one came WAY too easy.

  • this is a good idea. :) Sadly I don't put up videos. But could I just put up lyrics for something?

  • Do you man, whatever you want.

  • Amazing idea :) Like, I looked through the people who did this, and they're all so great with words, and they really get a message out. The lyrics are all so empowering too, it's incredible!

  • That's what I wanted. Sometimes it's not about bein a rapper everyone knows, but gettin some great lyrics to the public you know?

  • Great lyrics.

    I'm no rapper, but it i think you need to work on how you say it

    either that or it's they way you flow

  • Def man. I wasn't really going for flow on this one. Sounds dumb I know, but I wanted the message to shine. Check out some of my others, they are way better on flow. Thanks for watchin.

  • This is sick, mind if I hop in? :}

    Love the chorus man :)

    5* / Subscribed

  • I can't really stop you right??  ;)

  • Well no, but I don't wanna look stupid.. haha :}

  • No worries man, it's not that serious. We're all just here to have fun.

  • Alrightyyyyyy.. Im gonna write it now.. :}

  • i like the idea of it being only Lyricists but the idea of rapping to a picture is lame

  • That's your opinion and that's cool. It's an exercise in story telling. It helps you create a story or a picture of someone elses life or situation. It really helps expand your train of thought and builds character in lyrics. Does that make sense?

  • nice dude u got skillz

  • Thanks man, def appreciate that.

  • delivery isnt good

  • The more I watch the more you're right. I got better delivery on other videos and I think I was just trying to get a message across you know? Thanks for checkin it out, I always appreciate the criticism man. It can only help. Check out some others and tell me what you think.

  • i wanta be in

  • yo man you got a myspace with music or anything? Id love to listen to more of your stuff

  • At the moment I don't. But I do have a blog. I'll see if I can get a page going just for music man. I'll hit you with the link when I finish it. Shouldn't be too long.

  • alright dude you maddd good at what you do

  • "waitin on god or allah".....umm...yea...god and allah is the same this...it's just how you say god in their language.....SAME GOD

  • That's semantics you know what he meant.

  • showing how people see god, and allah as seperate

  • can u relax

  • Yeah man it's all good. Pretty much it's like when you mess up, "on god, wait I mean allah kind of thing." Nothin serious. Thanks for watching though.

  • good  job man. love the concept

  • You need to work on your delivery..a lot

  • sorry bout the last comment my psace bar was fucked up....But realll sick concept original as shit....check my page peeps if u think i got what takes to take on this challenge.......i think so

  • No problem man, i'll check it out.

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  • I thought I wrote a comment on this already lol...anyways it's dope man....

  • You may have who knows, appreciate you watchin...

  • ill shit

  • Thanks man. Appreciate you spittin on it.

  • This sounds ill. Hope I get called out.

  • Yeah man, I imagine you will get called out.  You got some smooth shit.

  • you did ya thing wit this cypher..its not like all the others..props fam..

  • Thanks trakz. I bust somethin nice every now and then haha.

  • check out my got barz contest and cast a vote man..got some ill mc's that entered..

  • Props for creating the Lyricist Cypher

  • Good lookin man. Appreciate it.

  • sick verse and sick idea 5 stars, i'm working on my own verse but? do i have to be called out?

  • That's kind of how it works, but it's whatever man. No ones gonna stop you ya know??

  • THAT'S creativity.

  • Glad you think so!! It's what I was aiming for.

  • oh man this is a original idea good job...ur verse was dope too....

  • Thanks for watchin. Always good times.

  • thats a hot idea man .

  • Appreciate it. I do it quite a bit, but I figured I would bring some other people into it as well. Always fun.

  • True lyricist!

     that was dope, cool idea

  • Appreciate it.

  • dope idea man.

    stay up

    --Mic Check

  • Appreciate it bro.

  • great idea. this is actually something i do when i write tracks.

    im gona peep ur shit. you should check out this i did to nmcmals beat, its one of my deepest tracks. ---watch?v=Rphfv4mgmOk&feature­=channel_page

    great idea dude!!

    5 for your part too hah

  • Thanks man, i've seen some of your stuff but i'll check out some more. Good lookin fam.

  • sick man good idea

  • I imagine it will come around to you. Hope so at least.

  • pretty sick man...good shit stay up

  • Appreciate it homie.

  • Nice....

  • Thanks man.

  • this is a dope and original idea man

    you verse was ill too...

    do i have to use the same pic too?

  • Use any picture you want man. Lookin forward to your verse. Just post it as a response man and we'll get this shit goin.

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