the 1st thing i thought of when i saw this picture..(im writing b4 i lisen 2 his part)
FGM. these young girls forced 2 be mutilated and have their clitoris removed. with no say @ all if they want to or not. no say even though certain rights protect them...it scars them for life. physically and emotionally as well as mentally.
read a book called AMAN: THE STORY OF A SOMALI GIRL. very touching book.
Amazing idea :) Like, I looked through the people who did this, and they're all so great with words, and they really get a message out. The lyrics are all so empowering too, it's incredible!
Def man. I wasn't really going for flow on this one. Sounds dumb I know, but I wanted the message to shine. Check out some of my others, they are way better on flow. Thanks for watchin.
That's your opinion and that's cool. It's an exercise in story telling. It helps you create a story or a picture of someone elses life or situation. It really helps expand your train of thought and builds character in lyrics. Does that make sense?
The more I watch the more you're right. I got better delivery on other videos and I think I was just trying to get a message across you know? Thanks for checkin it out, I always appreciate the criticism man. It can only help. Check out some others and tell me what you think.
At the moment I don't. But I do have a blog. I'll see if I can get a page going just for music man. I'll hit you with the link when I finish it. Shouldn't be too long.
Yeah man it's all good. Pretty much it's like when you mess up, "on god, wait I mean allah kind of thing." Nothin serious. Thanks for watching though.
sorry bout the last comment my psace bar was fucked up....But realll sick concept original as shit....check my page peeps if u think i got what takes to take on this challenge.......i think so
ur wack nigga im ashamed that ur the same color as me
wwwbase 1 month ago
@wwwbase As I am now you. Well done sir.
JohnnieTech2 1 month ago
what beat is that?
thenewrevolution100 5 months ago
Hey man, this was great, can i join this cypher? because i very liked this cypher, and i got my lyrics done.
Please pm or answer me here.
Peace
AKeyOnDaMic 10 months ago
This is such a great idea, and you're so very talented! Thank you for sharing; it was extremely moving.
summerberri 1 year ago
That was deep man, great lyrics, nice pic choice.
MrMorpheusV2 1 year ago
does it have to be a rap? i wanna join :D
nchollywood 1 year ago
nice lyrics...
BurninBudProductions 1 year ago
i need in on this how do i joinn????
TheProcab 1 year ago
sickest contests
trafal15 1 year ago
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trafal15 1 year ago
how do you get on this cypher?
sirbaconzz 1 year ago
this is sik dude!
clees1996 1 year ago
this is a really new great idea. different type of cyher
flipfaith15 1 year ago
the 1st thing i thought of when i saw this picture..(im writing b4 i lisen 2 his part)
FGM. these young girls forced 2 be mutilated and have their clitoris removed. with no say @ all if they want to or not. no say even though certain rights protect them...it scars them for life. physically and emotionally as well as mentally.
read a book called AMAN: THE STORY OF A SOMALI GIRL. very touching book.
ok now i will listen
mashamendez2010 2 years ago
I loved it your so talented thats awsome
simply4u2know 2 years ago
luv this cypher wish prince ea wuld do his vid on it
mchan12 2 years ago 5
Oh me too, trust me. You know it would be sick.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
nice good lyrics, it reminds me of that girl who was shot and killed in the Iran riots
Whiteboy831 2 years ago
you snaped on this
joscer45 2 years ago
touching lyrics
ddsimplegirl 2 years ago
dude u guys are all bad ass.
1life1time 2 years ago 7
good concept
MookieSays1Love 2 years ago 2
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man johnnie is fucking sick check out my channel i got some ill beats and raps i made
sorry for spamming just trying to get views i have like one subscriber lol
dpaosd 2 years ago
I watched pretty much all the videos to this cypher and it was tight!
Keep up the work JohnieTech
shantattin 2 years ago 2
this is a great idea for cypher!
Bun2ThaB 2 years ago
ay brah. can i get down on this??????
OptimusCrewJayzo 2 years ago
Nothin really stoppin you man.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
iight fsho brahh. thanxxx
OptimusCrewJayzo 2 years ago
loved the message.
deep stuff, makes you think twice.
allstarqtpie 2 years ago
Thank you, I really appreciate that. Means a lot to me.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
"if I could steal her shoes and walk just a half a mile,
rob her of her tears just to see that child smile."
I really liked that.
Sheryl4 2 years ago 9
Yeah, I am usually really bad at writing a chorus. This one came WAY too easy.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
this is a good idea. :) Sadly I don't put up videos. But could I just put up lyrics for something?
MrLonely2332 2 years ago
Do you man, whatever you want.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
Amazing idea :) Like, I looked through the people who did this, and they're all so great with words, and they really get a message out. The lyrics are all so empowering too, it's incredible!
VanillaSponk 2 years ago 2
That's what I wanted. Sometimes it's not about bein a rapper everyone knows, but gettin some great lyrics to the public you know?
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
Great lyrics.
I'm no rapper, but it i think you need to work on how you say it
either that or it's they way you flow
BreakNeckProducts 2 years ago
Def man. I wasn't really going for flow on this one. Sounds dumb I know, but I wanted the message to shine. Check out some of my others, they are way better on flow. Thanks for watchin.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
This is sick, mind if I hop in? :}
Love the chorus man :)
5* / Subscribed
LilHomie52 2 years ago
I can't really stop you right?? ;)
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
Well no, but I don't wanna look stupid.. haha :}
LilHomie52 2 years ago
No worries man, it's not that serious. We're all just here to have fun.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
Alrightyyyyyy.. Im gonna write it now.. :}
LilHomie52 2 years ago
i like the idea of it being only Lyricists but the idea of rapping to a picture is lame
itzMeBitch2 2 years ago
That's your opinion and that's cool. It's an exercise in story telling. It helps you create a story or a picture of someone elses life or situation. It really helps expand your train of thought and builds character in lyrics. Does that make sense?
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
nice dude u got skillz
domnick89 2 years ago
Thanks man, def appreciate that.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
delivery isnt good
DirectorRico 2 years ago
The more I watch the more you're right. I got better delivery on other videos and I think I was just trying to get a message across you know? Thanks for checkin it out, I always appreciate the criticism man. It can only help. Check out some others and tell me what you think.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
i wanta be in
BettaWithToast 2 years ago
yo man you got a myspace with music or anything? Id love to listen to more of your stuff
smallsmale 2 years ago
At the moment I don't. But I do have a blog. I'll see if I can get a page going just for music man. I'll hit you with the link when I finish it. Shouldn't be too long.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
alright dude you maddd good at what you do
smallsmale 2 years ago
"waitin on god or allah".....umm...yea...god and allah is the same this...it's just how you say god in their language.....SAME GOD
lazer46 2 years ago
That's semantics you know what he meant.
GoGoGomy 2 years ago
showing how people see god, and allah as seperate
kiddkaos1 2 years ago
can u relax
Aqzfatboy67 2 years ago
Yeah man it's all good. Pretty much it's like when you mess up, "on god, wait I mean allah kind of thing." Nothin serious. Thanks for watching though.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
good job man. love the concept
WYJerks 2 years ago
You need to work on your delivery..a lot
kingsoku 2 years ago 3
sorry bout the last comment my psace bar was fucked up....But realll sick concept original as shit....check my page peeps if u think i got what takes to take on this challenge.......i think so
TheLastConnect 2 years ago
No problem man, i'll check it out.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
manniceconceptman...somethingrealdifferentPROPS!
doubtigetcalledoutcuzimnotasknownassomeoftheseothergreats...butletitbeknownimillonthemicandwillprollyjustdoit
forthefunofit...nospacebarrightnow..srry
TheLastConnect 2 years ago
I thought I wrote a comment on this already lol...anyways it's dope man....
2goinggreen 2 years ago
You may have who knows, appreciate you watchin...
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
ill shit
GrandmaOnDrums 2 years ago
Thanks man. Appreciate you spittin on it.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
This sounds ill. Hope I get called out.
TykwonFlow 2 years ago
Yeah man, I imagine you will get called out. You got some smooth shit.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
you did ya thing wit this cypher..its not like all the others..props fam..
trakzproductionz 2 years ago
Thanks trakz. I bust somethin nice every now and then haha.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
check out my got barz contest and cast a vote man..got some ill mc's that entered..
trakzproductionz 2 years ago
Props for creating the Lyricist Cypher
HipHopRapManiac 2 years ago
Good lookin man. Appreciate it.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
sick verse and sick idea 5 stars, i'm working on my own verse but? do i have to be called out?
OneTrueVerse 2 years ago
That's kind of how it works, but it's whatever man. No ones gonna stop you ya know??
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
THAT'S creativity.
Terrra91 2 years ago
Glad you think so!! It's what I was aiming for.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
oh man this is a original idea good job...ur verse was dope too....
REALYZE4 2 years ago
Thanks for watchin. Always good times.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
thats a hot idea man .
LorenziTv 2 years ago
Appreciate it. I do it quite a bit, but I figured I would bring some other people into it as well. Always fun.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
True lyricist!
that was dope, cool idea
KnoxieTy201 2 years ago
Appreciate it.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
dope idea man.
stay up
--Mic Check
matt12m 2 years ago
Appreciate it bro.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
great idea. this is actually something i do when i write tracks.
im gona peep ur shit. you should check out this i did to nmcmals beat, its one of my deepest tracks. ---watch?v=Rphfv4mgmOk&feature=channel_page
great idea dude!!
5 for your part too hah
city0fj 2 years ago
Thanks man, i've seen some of your stuff but i'll check out some more. Good lookin fam.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
sick man good idea
SuburbanInvasion 2 years ago
I imagine it will come around to you. Hope so at least.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
pretty sick man...good shit stay up
JLiiVE3 2 years ago
Appreciate it homie.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
Nice....
lileezy23 2 years ago
Thanks man.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago
this is a dope and original idea man
you verse was ill too...
do i have to use the same pic too?
emohkay 2 years ago
Use any picture you want man. Lookin forward to your verse. Just post it as a response man and we'll get this shit goin.
JohnnieTech2 2 years ago