good start. One thing that it is really lacking is emotion. I would recommend listening to a recording of this song to get an idea. Take parts of the song that you have trouble working on and do it separately. Another must is that you need to work on your technique and skill in order to play it right. Take some time to just practice scales and arpeggios and keep in mind while you do them your elbow should not stick out. Hows that for constructive criticism :)
bonjour, tou d'abord belle ambition ;) mai essaie de travailler un peu sans trop de pédale...et l'expression ne serait-elle pas plus envoutante si tu n'appuierai pas pour appuyer ?;) laisse les notes te parler, le noir sur blanc n'est que noir sur blanc mai peu très bien etre du blanc sur noir, tout n'est qu'une question de gout et de couleur a exprimer;) amicalement, jérémy
i learned this 10 years ago and its still my favorite music. It needs work, its good but needs work. Also add some more dynamics. Good job
Fanis753 8 months ago
good start. One thing that it is really lacking is emotion. I would recommend listening to a recording of this song to get an idea. Take parts of the song that you have trouble working on and do it separately. Another must is that you need to work on your technique and skill in order to play it right. Take some time to just practice scales and arpeggios and keep in mind while you do them your elbow should not stick out. Hows that for constructive criticism :)
tfiore22 2 years ago
@tfiore22 Poor op. 23...
ginkidasnuesschen 1 year ago
Hey man, im learning this too, good job.
puchalaka 2 years ago
quite nice but it still needs a lot of work
you have to play more fluently
good luck and best wishes
abuziubuziu 3 years ago
Whoa....this needs a lot more work, especially page 2 at the end.
Pianoman545 3 years ago
I think you did a good job !!
You inspired me to learn it =D
koubache 3 years ago
HOO, have fun with that.
puchalaka 2 years ago
bonjour, tou d'abord belle ambition ;) mai essaie de travailler un peu sans trop de pédale...et l'expression ne serait-elle pas plus envoutante si tu n'appuierai pas pour appuyer ?;) laisse les notes te parler, le noir sur blanc n'est que noir sur blanc mai peu très bien etre du blanc sur noir, tout n'est qu'une question de gout et de couleur a exprimer;) amicalement, jérémy
pitiyohi 3 years ago
hmm I'm not that good on french :)
Dextersworldnl 3 years ago