What a feisty dance! What is there works pretty well, although because it is so simple, be sure to polish everything. The "legs" seem a bit too stretched, perhaps lowering the torso for the entire timeline would make the form and body read better. The feet appear to slide before they hit the floor, perhaps because it does not look like a walk (where feet hit and slide back), but a dance. Perhaps offsetting the hands with pointing the apex of the lift would help break up the movement as well.
What a feisty dance! What is there works pretty well, although because it is so simple, be sure to polish everything. The "legs" seem a bit too stretched, perhaps lowering the torso for the entire timeline would make the form and body read better. The feet appear to slide before they hit the floor, perhaps because it does not look like a walk (where feet hit and slide back), but a dance. Perhaps offsetting the hands with pointing the apex of the lift would help break up the movement as well.
ConstructionImage 2 years ago