The Nativity Re-Told (The Nativity Factor - Under 16's Entry)

[xORIGAMIxARTSTx]

I think your ratings confirm it.

[katet211]

yeah maybe it isnt the best one out there but at least she tried !!!!!! un like you lot who just go on other peoples videos and comment 'poor' !

you know who i am 72dsingh ;) xxxx

[72dsingh]

How is it poor??? I was so proud when I made this but I didn't think it would be AS good as other peoples! At least I HAD a go at it. And I was so confident but then when I read what you said then that just put me down!!! Thank you so much!!!!

[xORIGAMIxARTSTx]

Poor

[stwjun]

Nice idea.

But the shutterstock-watermark is still in there... :(

[72dsingh]

it is in a modern situation

[bucketfullotone]

I like the whole idea that Mary and Joseph are 'real' people with ordinary day to day issues, I would be alot more implicit i.e. instead of saying "There was a(n) ordinary women, called Mary," I would like say or show what it was like for her to... get out of bed that day, make breakfast or have her period or yearn for a family or anything at all normal for a women to do at that time. But quote and work with the bible word for word. If it says there's an angel, I'd bring in an angel.

[XJetthroX]

Not factual a tall :S thing you need to reread the bible mate