This would be good if it was more original. Roxas and Xion = Kingdom hearts characters (nobodies). Gear second = Luffys power up (One Piece). Jin = Tekken character. I could go on. Did you do this deliberately?
@RnBrealist yes cause when i started this fanfic i was 13 and i just wanted to have fun. and i thought they were really cool things so i added them to my fan fic.
That was a solid episode and story progression. When in extended dialogue you need more variety than just 1 camera angle of a character, Make each dialogue relevent to the editing and plot (dialogue). Be as creative as possible, you are sitting in a comfort zone with dialogue scenes, make each scene with the intention to add something new and reinvent. Just a few tips, nice episode though.
LOL, That Was A Great Ep. But I Think It's soo Funny That Like The Vegeta Guy Just Comes Out Of Nowhere Kills Nail And Runs Away! LOL It Was Just Kinda Fuuny In A Way! Lol
Wow very good premiere! Favorite and 5/5 also a few questions in episode 12 how come ryu said his name is drake and kai said his name is leon finally, does jin know his children are part of the organization like roxas and xion?
what the name of this song
KELVINWEST14 9 months ago
best opening
KELVINWEST14 9 months ago
This would be good if it was more original. Roxas and Xion = Kingdom hearts characters (nobodies). Gear second = Luffys power up (One Piece). Jin = Tekken character. I could go on. Did you do this deliberately?
RnBrealist 11 months ago
@RnBrealist yes cause when i started this fanfic i was 13 and i just wanted to have fun. and i thought they were really cool things so i added them to my fan fic.
DBEproductions 11 months ago
what happened in ep 12
DustinItachiUchiha 11 months ago
@DustinItachiUchiha I was thinking the same thing. Care to explain?
couver73 11 months ago
que paso con Turles
What happened to Turles
BrolyTheTitan 1 year ago
@BrolyTheTitan He died but was brought back by Akuma. He's recovering right now.
crewslol 1 year ago
nice new opening credit to the creator
eyeMsogr8 1 year ago
what's the intro song
NarutoUzumaki9822 2 years ago
Hekireki by last alliance if your still wondering
hakuboshi1 1 year ago
@hakuboshi1 thanks
NarutoUzumaki9822 1 year ago
Was'nt Freeza's name Zexion
TheNw1218 2 years ago
im very confused colud u please summary the story so far DBEproductions
RogerHardy12 2 years ago
You know what i'm just going to put up a season one summary so everyone can see my madness.
DBEproductions 2 years ago
Wait? I'm confused so..Jin(goku) kids are Roxas(f.Gohan) and Xion(Pan) right?
ShinGoku17 2 years ago
Yep
crewslol 2 years ago
Hey man this was really good. Could you please tell me how you get the camera angle to go below the character. Thank you
T33KAY1 2 years ago
have a character go directly over another.
DBEproductions 2 years ago
Ah, thank you
T33KAY1 2 years ago
That was a solid episode and story progression. When in extended dialogue you need more variety than just 1 camera angle of a character, Make each dialogue relevent to the editing and plot (dialogue). Be as creative as possible, you are sitting in a comfort zone with dialogue scenes, make each scene with the intention to add something new and reinvent. Just a few tips, nice episode though.
DBZJojo 2 years ago
this fanfiction is great! Good episode
movie1321 2 years ago
LOL, That Was A Great Ep. But I Think It's soo Funny That Like The Vegeta Guy Just Comes Out Of Nowhere Kills Nail And Runs Away! LOL It Was Just Kinda Fuuny In A Way! Lol
UltimiteSaiyan 2 years ago
epic opening..dammit i wish i cud do that also thingz r getting interesting now
SundroX 2 years ago
Wow very good premiere! Favorite and 5/5 also a few questions in episode 12 how come ryu said his name is drake and kai said his name is leon finally, does jin know his children are part of the organization like roxas and xion?
ssj2unlimited 2 years ago
That part i fucked up on. and he knows about Roxas but not Xion.
DBEproductions 2 years ago
Lol your fic is alot better than before dude lol i couldn't even watch it now i can because everything makes sense
NeoHaseo579 2 years ago
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arshiaey 2 years ago