wow i can see some of wwe move; rko, pedigree thats cool man i love wwe
BeastPunk94 3 years ago
Your opening montage was a strong hook. Remember to cut up long scenes (especially with dialog) with reverses, cut-away or insert shots.
Hugo, do you like the tough guy characters? lots of shooting here. Have you though about adding muzzle flashes or squibs?
After the guy (Steven) got shot, he should have changed his clothes if he was playing a different character (if i understood it right)
goldenpizza 3 years ago
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wow i can see some of wwe move; rko, pedigree thats cool man i love wwe
BeastPunk94 3 years ago
Your opening montage was a strong hook. Remember to cut up long scenes (especially with dialog) with reverses, cut-away or insert shots.
Hugo, do you like the tough guy characters? lots of shooting here. Have you though about adding muzzle flashes or squibs?
After the guy (Steven) got shot, he should have changed his clothes if he was playing a different character (if i understood it right)
goldenpizza 3 years ago