i loove the 48 fest scene, i wanna do one soo bad!
ok, my critiques i guess if you wanna hear them: i understand purposeful use of a shaky screen but i dont think most of this was purposeful - more so than suggesting a tripod i'd suggest doing more than one straight through take of each scene. that conversation at the table would've looked much more profession had you shot it through 2 or 3 times from different perspectives.
We had someone to do original music, and then they just dropped out. It was pretty obnoxious. These are just some of the Apple loops that come with GarageBand.
As for the shaky camera, it was a purposeful choice, but we at the same time our tripod was really shitty, so we couldn't do much else if we wanted, ha!
By the way, did I tell you good job on that bank commercial? It was excellent!
nice! you know how to put a story together pretty well! I give you major props for making something like this in 48 hours. one thing you need to work on however, is to make sure you work on your cinematography or get a tripod. I know some styles of shooting call for an unsteady feel to illustrate chaos or uneasiness but yea just use something to make your pans and shots more smooth and stable. what kind of film program was this?
are you kidding? The unsteady feel is perfect for it. honestly, a stable camera would've actually weakened it. And they handled the camera itself very well, very focused and it caught all the action.
Yeah, dude, but mine sucks majorly. Seriously, it's the most jacked up thing I've ever seen. We were going to use it anyway, but when we wrote our script we decided to go handheld because the idea is that she's being watched by Cain's people... basically she's never alone, someone's always there. Thanks for revisiting! It's really cool to be able to go back to everybody's films and rewatch tthem.
Well done film!! likeit
trainfart 2 years ago
good job guys!!
roachiekiedis 2 years ago
i understand- atleast you got something done! i feel like i haven't filmed much of anything because i dont have a crew :(
oh, thankyou :)
ShelbiJayFilms 2 years ago
who did the music? was it in the PD?
i loove the 48 fest scene, i wanna do one soo bad!
ok, my critiques i guess if you wanna hear them: i understand purposeful use of a shaky screen but i dont think most of this was purposeful - more so than suggesting a tripod i'd suggest doing more than one straight through take of each scene. that conversation at the table would've looked much more profession had you shot it through 2 or 3 times from different perspectives.
ShelbiJayFilms 2 years ago
We had someone to do original music, and then they just dropped out. It was pretty obnoxious. These are just some of the Apple loops that come with GarageBand.
As for the shaky camera, it was a purposeful choice, but we at the same time our tripod was really shitty, so we couldn't do much else if we wanted, ha!
By the way, did I tell you good job on that bank commercial? It was excellent!
quietlymocking 2 years ago
nice! you know how to put a story together pretty well! I give you major props for making something like this in 48 hours. one thing you need to work on however, is to make sure you work on your cinematography or get a tripod. I know some styles of shooting call for an unsteady feel to illustrate chaos or uneasiness but yea just use something to make your pans and shots more smooth and stable. what kind of film program was this?
dimsumcart 3 years ago
Thanks much!! We just used iMovie to make this. And yeah, I need a better tripod. Mine sucks so bad we just went for the shaky feel.
quietlymocking 3 years ago
are you kidding? The unsteady feel is perfect for it. honestly, a stable camera would've actually weakened it. And they handled the camera itself very well, very focused and it caught all the action.
licketysplit101 2 years ago
ever heard of a tripod
AbusiveUncle 3 years ago
Yeah, dude, but mine sucks majorly. Seriously, it's the most jacked up thing I've ever seen. We were going to use it anyway, but when we wrote our script we decided to go handheld because the idea is that she's being watched by Cain's people... basically she's never alone, someone's always there. Thanks for revisiting! It's really cool to be able to go back to everybody's films and rewatch tthem.
quietlymocking 3 years ago
Nice...
diegojimenez 3 years ago
you are my friend
kekeventers 3 years ago
ACK! wait what the crap? ending totally different! how you get my voice on that ohone! i not say those lines!
kibbleofdoom 3 years ago
we hated the ending...also it wasnt u on the fone at the end...y wud u be calling cain?
EKStremeProductions 3 years ago
HA! meah!
kibbleofdoom 3 years ago
Nice movie Amelia!
Latinlabel 3 years ago
evan man, you kicked the shit out of that phone
Prosthetics1209 3 years ago
i no right! it was a model i found outside a cingular store
EKStremeProductions 3 years ago
I loved it. Very professional. :-D
caseydavid2 3 years ago