Good job! All i have to say is that maybe instead of tracers some more ground hits would be better. You can still get the effect of rounds barely missing the characters (maybe even better ;) and it looks a lot more natural
@cjdog23 agreed that much tracer fire looks to me like there would be a mini gun or something that would be chpooing stuff up- Im no war/gun expert but it looked slightly over used
overall good the ground shots would show the closeness of enemy hits. also with sound having it (sound of the bullet) go from one side to the other would be great.!!
some people just don't know what a mockumentary or point-of-view move is. The editing's good, for a guy his age. Just little polishing for minor details and for those complaining about the camera being so shaky, try watching Cloverfield or Quarantine-you'll get it.
Fuck all you haters, they only kids and at there age NONE of yous could could this! Yes maybe easy for some but at 16 they are only gonna get better! Well done!
abit unrealistic during the explosion and after. A c4 look or whatever. it will blast ur legs off... next time put the character or the main actor abit further away :D
@leonardothekitty think the camera is supposed to be in some kinda "realistic combat mode" and if so, its spot on, you cant see anything in an ambush like that :P
The bullet shell was going in slow mo but it wasn't effected by the dirt on the camera, just make sure you plan your vfx in order! Inane tho check out my stuff and leave a comment! p.s. I'm just beginning so take it easy!
@leonardothekitty - You moron...he's a 16 year old actor and movie maker, what are you supposed to be, leonardo dicaprio :))) OWNED. By the way GREAT video, greatings from Bosnia.
The test looks great. You have the concept down. Add the the motion blur and adjust the color correction bit more. remember, a great visual artist is the one that makes everything look natural. Where ppl can get lost in the story not the effects. You are about 1 ot 2 steps away. Keep chugging along. Great job.
this is really good but its almost like there is too much going on for how fast they move the camera around, if you slowed that down im pretty sure this would be like 10x better. :D
Do you mind if i use a portion of this for one of my videos? Ill be sure to mention you and post a link to your channel. Great job on this either way.
May I suggest Adding Grain and Blur to your Effects? I'm pretty sure you used action essentials but by modifying the color, grade, blur, sharpening, contrast, and simple atmoshperical properties you could come out with outstanding realism? - Brandon Yaeger (Fourth Dimension Filming VFX Supervisor) /watch?v=q8M44bFQuAQ
@ZeroBrianx Hey Brainiac, this is youtube, not Aljazeera. I know it got a little emotional at the end of Medal of Honor but kindly send your sensitivity over there. This is a battle effects video, that dude is still alive and getting laid, but I'm sure he'll appreciate your soldierific goodness. ; )
The debris accelerates upward while falling. When the camera pans up it is very obviouse the debris is just some sort of image overlay. Make it so debris doesn't move with the camera during all that annoying camera shaking.
Seriously dude, do a color correction tutorial pleeeease you do some THE BEST color correction i have EVER SEEN...every single video you have the color edit is just astounding..thumb this up guys i want him to see it
Two points of feedback: One of the explosions had the particles/image layer of either above the filters or it was too pixelated - similarly, the slow-mo bullet (and the firey kick-out) was above the filter layers and looked pixelated.
Also, when a bullet casing is discharged out like that, there's no firey explosion from the front. There's a LOT of pressure discharge and a kind of gasseous smoke, but no fire like that. Keep it up!!
dang you guys are amazing, should make a short film with a storyboard :) btw may I know where can I get the sound right after the mine/grenade exploded? it's like a deafening "eeeeee" sound. thanks :)
Amazing but I have one question.. How do you do the bullets flying around not muzzle flashes but like the bullet streaks. Please reply I subbed btw ;)
Very nice, great job on all the sounds and muzzle flash along with shrapnel on the camera. Though I do believe that you have every thing there, now comes a storyline series. Keep it up
Liked everything but the camera shake. I think you should have included more of the character's upper halves, and shown more of the faces. Also, the slow-mo shell ejection could use some work. Other than that, this looks great. I would strongly encourage you to keep up the good work!
The audio is from Saving Private Ryan.
wjz10595 16 hours ago
hey dude just a real quick tip, i think if you applied motion blur to the explosion debris it would look a ton better.
TheLidKazer 6 days ago
how do you do the colour correction? it seems like a movie style!
KingsofSparta 1 week ago
Really awesome!! Damn i wish i could do that
AlwaysBTrollin 1 week ago
Awesome work... I'm sure that took awhile!
enhanceddi 1 week ago
if you somehow made the bullet case that flew out a little more affected by the light it would look more realistic :)) other than that, great job!
Carwikz 3 weeks ago
@Carwikz
Yes I know, next time it will be better!
I promise! ;)
WarPictures 2 weeks ago 2
you cant see anything
TheLonman22 1 month ago
Hey! Where did you get the sound effects? Nice work!
erbgmc 1 month ago
Damn that's really good dude!
666thsandevil 1 month ago
Good job! All i have to say is that maybe instead of tracers some more ground hits would be better. You can still get the effect of rounds barely missing the characters (maybe even better ;) and it looks a lot more natural
cjdog23 1 month ago
@cjdog23
Thanks for the tip man! ;)
WarPictures 2 weeks ago
@cjdog23 agreed that much tracer fire looks to me like there would be a mini gun or something that would be chpooing stuff up- Im no war/gun expert but it looked slightly over used
overall good the ground shots would show the closeness of enemy hits. also with sound having it (sound of the bullet) go from one side to the other would be great.!!
ashpod84 2 weeks ago
very good
lisergitek24 1 month ago
too much camera shake this aint born idenity you aint matt daimon
santinowilliams44 1 month ago
damn was there an earthquake when you shot this? Keep the cam still bro. it was good till that.
FilmsDevastation 1 month ago
sehr geil alter !
agnostiker100 1 month ago
To bad you see the explosions turn with the camera view itself
NVYPhantomTV 1 month ago
The bullet at 0:28 needs some color correction and needs to be scaled down just a little bit!!! But everything else is awesome!!! :D
MaverickWolfGraphics 1 month ago
some people just don't know what a mockumentary or point-of-view move is. The editing's good, for a guy his age. Just little polishing for minor details and for those complaining about the camera being so shaky, try watching Cloverfield or Quarantine-you'll get it.
chansie41 1 month ago 13
yeah, just film your fellow comrade as he groans in deep pain
omgflyingbanana 1 month ago
good job dude ;)
mjylem 1 month ago
Do you need a good video camera to make these kids of videos?
MrLyricalmeaning 1 month ago
Fuck all you haters, they only kids and at there age NONE of yous could could this! Yes maybe easy for some but at 16 they are only gonna get better! Well done!
FIZZTRIX 1 month ago
nearby too realistic ;D
Maxpoweredrummer 1 month ago
abit unrealistic during the explosion and after. A c4 look or whatever. it will blast ur legs off... next time put the character or the main actor abit further away :D
MsSoNicBoOoM 1 month ago
Nice
MrAndersohn 1 month ago
@leonardothekitty think the camera is supposed to be in some kinda "realistic combat mode" and if so, its spot on, you cant see anything in an ambush like that :P
Haraldur34 1 month ago
what did you do to change the coloration and everything
FuhrRadio 1 month ago
subscribed!
IronmanLE1 2 months ago
My eyes hurt after watching this
thejarrett1OOO 2 months ago
you have to make a movie!
GlobalGamingXtra 2 months ago
NIIICE
CANNABIS9810 2 months ago
hey maka a movie
funnydbjacks 2 months ago
Is this Chuck Norris Brother Recording?
MrAllroUnder24 2 months ago
Saving Private Ryan audio there :D
TheSirStarkey 2 months ago
The bullet shell was going in slow mo but it wasn't effected by the dirt on the camera, just make sure you plan your vfx in order! Inane tho check out my stuff and leave a comment! p.s. I'm just beginning so take it easy!
NotOnlyWhatYouC 2 months ago
HARD HARD HARD EPIIIIIC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
romanek1005 2 months ago
@leonardothekitty haha. quoting freddie wong
ryno7425 2 months ago
HOLY JESUS THAT WAS COMPLETELY SICK!!!
Sebarilla 2 months ago
it is if im not mistaken saving private ryan back round
BattleGoers 2 months ago
looks like lasser gun flashes and explosions WTF
TOtayler 2 months ago
0:7 how he could shot when dust cover is close?
Losti97 2 months ago
Not bad! But can I suggest some motion blur?
Semesto 2 months ago
Awesome montage ! Congratulations Soldier :3
Volfony34 2 months ago
Holy shit this is better than freddiew!!!!
jakejereus 2 months ago
@leonardothekitty - You moron...he's a 16 year old actor and movie maker, what are you supposed to be, leonardo dicaprio :))) OWNED. By the way GREAT video, greatings from Bosnia.
ProductionLG 2 months ago
Nice, the video remembers me to Saving Private Ryan, and that's a great film!
thomasbakker96 2 months ago
Saving private Ryan sounds ;) great video :D
TheFilip031 2 months ago
Wow...best color correction ever ! Great job !
Dickshot59 2 months ago
Is that the audio from saving private ryan? nice video! really cool stuff! Check out our channel if you have the chance! :D
MGNFilms 3 months ago
is besser als so mancher B-Movie! mach weiter so du bist echt gut!!!
Sic1102 3 months ago
Excellent work!! Well done!!!
MichaelNo999 3 months ago
@leonardothekitty Calm down hes not trying to prove that hes better or trying to copy Matt Damon...and unless you can do something better than this
FearLancer2 3 months ago
really nice :)
DaGaNfollowyourmind 3 months ago
@leonardothekitty their kids brother cut them so slak i think they did great for the age this is actualy pretty good compare to the one s i´ve seen
ltcalvo 3 months ago
next hollywood stars very good job guys
Rockstarsss 3 months ago
niceee any tutorials?
god2yew 3 months ago
/watch?v=7KihR6WYQ_w
TaskForceRebels 3 months ago
I think the spent round still had the bullet in it
michaelttanner 3 months ago
Nice work.. Camera at points need to slow down just a bit to get a view of what is going on. shake is good but to much.. keep us posted for more..
masterod1 3 months ago
I think we've found the next Spielberg!
Flight322 3 months ago
@MisterDUTCHYx1
Thanks man! ;)
WarPictures 3 months ago
@WarPictures Hes right, you are very talented :) keep up the good work.
moonbar33 3 months ago
@WarPictures what program use use for audio and visual effects
midgetmarine2 3 months ago
btw, the screaming in the beginning is from Saving Pvt. Ryan right? :D the guy on the beach?
MisterDUTCHYx1 3 months ago
Pretty nice :D one tiny detail though :p The flying shell at the end looks really fake :P you should have changed the contrast on it :)
Breaking1337 3 months ago
What video camera do you use? Btw subscribed! ;) Nice vids!! Keep up the awesome work!! :)
snakegunnerrulez 3 months ago
great!!
Please up bass!!!
KovacsZsoltPeter 3 months ago
O.O
Strukiluk 3 months ago
the best thing about this is not the vfx its the sound
Sultanaman23 3 months ago
try and adjust the color of your effects so that they blend in with the color grade of the video better, thats how yu make it xtra real looking
8bitcritr 3 months ago
how old are you??
MrSebfrench76 3 months ago 2
@MrSebfrench76
I'm 16 now.
WarPictures 3 months ago 42
@WarPictures
Do you have Stevie,sorry,Steven Spielberg cellular number?Do you want it?
Seriously,you're made for the fx,congrats!
MrSebfrench76 3 months ago
@WarPictures 16 ? Woow i am 17,, MAN you really have talent !!! Very nice videos !
ReturnAceRazgriz108 3 months ago
@WarPictures thts sooooooo fcukin epic for a 16 years boy
epicandamazin 2 months ago
@WarPictures Where did you get your sound effects and could you do some tutorials on colour correction and stuff
ItsCiarian 1 month ago
Shake the camera more... it will look great :/
pesterenan 3 months ago
Good Video, but you should add no bullets flying, when the camera is turning to another position, makes it look unreal. But great work
drkokain67 3 months ago
The test looks great. You have the concept down. Add the the motion blur and adjust the color correction bit more. remember, a great visual artist is the one that makes everything look natural. Where ppl can get lost in the story not the effects. You are about 1 ot 2 steps away. Keep chugging along. Great job.
JackedMag 3 months ago
@alfaromeo890 My name is Ryan
LordODark1 3 months ago
Your sound design is amazing man
C4LV1N0 3 months ago
nice effects horrible camara work u get dizzy and lost dnt know what the fuck is going on
OriginalRecords2009 3 months ago
lixo
Douglas6663 3 months ago
@leonardothekitty *facepalm*
SkizzardGaming 3 months ago
needs some motion blur and fx color correction
thegarythesnail2 3 months ago
Great ! Sry man where you download a sound FX ?
maroo1233211 3 months ago
Less camera shake would be much apreciated...
SpecialOperations 3 months ago
I recognize some of the sound fx from saving private ryan
That's awesome
TylerShoots 4 months ago
amazing but you should have put more motion blur on the spent brass or shells
ClayCFilms 4 months ago 38
this is really good but its almost like there is too much going on for how fast they move the camera around, if you slowed that down im pretty sure this would be like 10x better. :D
supertr00per8 4 months ago
awesome!! O.o!!
luispozo234 4 months ago
to much camra shake this isn't bourn identity you ain't Matt damond!
mmagnus66 4 months ago
@mmagnus66 LOL That video is too funny!
MIZZIJR 4 months ago
Awesome work :D try motion blur on *all* parts of the scene! Also the shell and the blood splatter
VWXYZ 4 months ago
Real medal of honor
leparkourtutex 4 months ago
Absolutely perfect!
Except for one tiny thing... the shell's colors didn't match the scene's... but whatever! Still great!
UnipsychleProduction 4 months ago
Just perfect
m22dj 4 months ago
TOO MUCH CAMERA SHAKE!! haha
Xman3194 4 months ago
a little motion tracking would have helped
ToolBoxEntertainment 4 months ago
Tutorial PLS !
MyMusclelover 4 months ago
plz make a tutorial -.-
scorpia733 4 months ago
wow amazing
NETboyz33 4 months ago
Do you mind if i use a portion of this for one of my videos? Ill be sure to mention you and post a link to your channel. Great job on this either way.
commandoproductions6 4 months ago
thats actually pretty good
jrthetucan 4 months ago
llol sounds from James Ryan !
Nice Video :)
LittleBlender 4 months ago
hey bat waht programas do you use? only after effects? and waht camera do you have or use to make that video?
lirihtco 5 months ago
@lirihtco channel info. Do you know what is it? ;)
TheUltimateKnockouts 4 months ago
@TheUltimateKnockouts haha come on man. I'm just asking
lirihtco 4 months ago
demasiado bueno d dond son?
nestordinho 5 months ago
Chuck Norris can do this in ms paint ;]
ThoseGamingMoments 5 months ago
saving private ryan beach scene sound affects i know the whole movie by heart. its just i love that movie. but cool vid
15riccy 5 months ago
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dunuxPS3 5 months ago
that was pretty cool. the camera shake was alittle fast and the camera wasnt facing at the peoples upper half.but over all very good
elitehero36 5 months ago
holly shit how doo you get those sounds and stuff
SLYFIY 5 months ago
@SLYFIY Wasn't real . Like the talking was from the movie Saving private Ryan ! Where he says mama or something .
SplatRed 5 months ago
I suggest turning up the shutter speed. Motion tracking some of your effects could enhance the feeling that you're going for. You've got potential!
ChuckyTrance 5 months ago
May I suggest Adding Grain and Blur to your Effects? I'm pretty sure you used action essentials but by modifying the color, grade, blur, sharpening, contrast, and simple atmoshperical properties you could come out with outstanding realism? - Brandon Yaeger (Fourth Dimension Filming VFX Supervisor) /watch?v=q8M44bFQuAQ
4thDimensionFilming 5 months ago
@ZeroBrianx Hey Brainiac, this is youtube, not Aljazeera. I know it got a little emotional at the end of Medal of Honor but kindly send your sensitivity over there. This is a battle effects video, that dude is still alive and getting laid, but I'm sure he'll appreciate your soldierific goodness. ; )
wildevil 6 months ago
Very sweet! But I couldn't help but notice you left the dust cover closed at :28.
Nice work though
und3finedv1rus 6 months ago
Thats pretty sick man for just a simple edit. Keep it up mann
JamesDeanee 6 months ago
could you do a tutorial please D:
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TheDangerZone999 6 months ago
The debris accelerates upward while falling. When the camera pans up it is very obviouse the debris is just some sort of image overlay. Make it so debris doesn't move with the camera during all that annoying camera shaking.
keithyoung 6 months ago
wow! Crazy shit! Awsome!! Really cool test video!!
FlyRay07 6 months ago
Sickest sound design I have ever heard ever!
nargles24 6 months ago
freddiew is better
pizzaparteners 6 months ago
@pizzaparteners But he wasn't this good when he was as young as these boys
39533 6 months ago
The claymore in the beggining scared the shiit out of me :3
VlogsRUsTV 6 months ago
Epic! Loved the slow bullet effect towards the end
magicofwolf 6 months ago
SPR Omaha beach sound clips are so overused XD
rabozzotheclown 6 months ago
I have a question how did you make the yellow lines(bullet) and where u get that sound??
faquita0 6 months ago
Thats great! Suscribed! = )
CortometrajesRCA 6 months ago
thats bloody brilliant !!
SHITNASH 6 months ago
Was that the sound effects from the Omaha Beach scene in Saving Private Ryan?
TheBroadyk 6 months ago
set your shutter speed really high for war movies. Just a tip
oldschoolman33 6 months ago
@oldschoolman33 why?
KungFuMastur 6 months ago
@KungFuMastur If you want a dizzy effect its alright to slow it down but if you want the war movie choppy look go for a higher shutter speed
oldschoolman33 6 months ago
really good
91JoshB 6 months ago
Seriously dude, do a color correction tutorial pleeeease you do some THE BEST color correction i have EVER SEEN...every single video you have the color edit is just astounding..thumb this up guys i want him to see it
Danny121208 6 months ago
Two points of feedback: One of the explosions had the particles/image layer of either above the filters or it was too pixelated - similarly, the slow-mo bullet (and the firey kick-out) was above the filter layers and looked pixelated.
Also, when a bullet casing is discharged out like that, there's no firey explosion from the front. There's a LOT of pressure discharge and a kind of gasseous smoke, but no fire like that. Keep it up!!
ZielOrArman 6 months ago
OMFG awesome
Anur1337 6 months ago
dang you guys are amazing, should make a short film with a storyboard :) btw may I know where can I get the sound right after the mine/grenade exploded? it's like a deafening "eeeeee" sound. thanks :)
BenSow95 6 months ago
So as you can see war is quite a pretty sight
AAmotocrossAA 6 months ago
good work mate.
PJ1HWP 6 months ago
Well done guys, pretty good short film.
Horbland 6 months ago
lol the bullet one was so FAKE :D keep on troll'n
LemonTheMighty 6 months ago
stablelize the footage that would help
nanovor1234567 6 months ago
@WarPictures...you need to put some motion blur on the shell ejecting if ur using after effects.
9delta3 6 months ago
Where'd you get all your sound FX from?
Marzexp 6 months ago
saving private ryan at the beach is the sound effects
Kliffton415 7 months ago
@Kliffton415 Yeah! i noticed the scream from the guy who had his guts blown out :)
zacjgibson09 6 months ago
This is fuckin collest thing ive ever seen in my entire shitty live...DOWNLOADIN AFTER EFFECTS COOL MATE!
DubSalat 7 months ago
I suggest you to make movie,
your color correction is awesome,
how did you do that?
uvaiskomath 7 months ago
where did you get the sound effects?
ilovethesimpsons8 7 months ago
Very good
TheRobsun141 7 months ago
Amazing but I have one question.. How do you do the bullets flying around not muzzle flashes but like the bullet streaks. Please reply I subbed btw ;)
pcookieproductions 7 months ago
Very nice, great job on all the sounds and muzzle flash along with shrapnel on the camera. Though I do believe that you have every thing there, now comes a storyline series. Keep it up
CinematicShortFilms 7 months ago
That was pretty good... except for the bullet casing coming out of the chamber... that needed a lot more work.
Tuvidabuena 7 months ago
War is not cool
ziccy7 7 months ago
Liked everything but the camera shake. I think you should have included more of the character's upper halves, and shown more of the faces. Also, the slow-mo shell ejection could use some work. Other than that, this looks great. I would strongly encourage you to keep up the good work!
PatFraser802 7 months ago
how'd you make this?... looks great
Panzer883 7 months ago
ten year old kids on war! " Gimme my cookies back"!!!!! this is the future of kid fight!! :O
topsycretomega 7 months ago
"O.O"
gonzalosegovia1 7 months ago 31
Holy Crap that was intense!
LaserProductionVids 7 months ago
he should motion track better
EffectiveFayul 7 months ago
Waaaay too much camera shake
SHARPSg180 7 months ago
justin bieber in battle lol
SagnolTheGangster007 7 months ago
0:27 kinda ruined he whole thing.
dabossleverett96 7 months ago
Way too much color correction.
zaronz 8 months ago
that was great but when he shot and the bullt flew from the gun that failed
AbstractzIx 8 months ago
@BattleCalifornia he got the sound from shaving Ryan's privates
clownslider 8 months ago
crap
spikez1985 8 months ago
great video, congratulations!
HenriFritos 8 months ago
Make it longer it was to good
TheMegafilmdude 8 months ago