the comic im working on so far (OLD)

[VBacount]

your really good. i just started doing comics check out my drawings on my channel

[MsKitty678]

you are really good i wish i could read it it looks really good.

[LCaitlynR]

thats a good Naruto XD

[3alexalexander]

man your voice was different how old where you on this one

[biohazardcomix]

we want to see your awsome drawings not your writing utencils

[mafyia7]

might not make it in the manga industry cuz there are thousands of mainstream action manga and for you to succeed, you need to be a lil more creative and unique.

[ArturoDeLaGuerra]

@mafyia7 Lol don't try and spout off tips like you know what you're talking about just because you read Bakuman. 

[mafyia7]

SOME WORDS of advice, too much narration in the beginning for a japanese style comic (manga) and you gotta work on the poses. try to draw the basic shape of a human first, and i like the first page but the second leaves a lot to be desired. dont put vol 1 on the cover cuz you havent published it yet. a volume needs to be a collection of chapters. and how does a teen have a gun?

[KawaiiAnimatedMMD]

YOUR BITING OFF OF NARUTO DUH

[Rocka36muafucka]

your eyes and legs are good but your action............lets just say you need work

[KittyArt123]

why do boys make action manga all the time?? im a girl and im making a horror manga....its a wip though XD

[ScorchArtist]

@Mywakkyworld lol thanks!

[ScorchArtist]

@MangaArtFanBoy thanks ill try man :)

[ScorchArtist]

@Theninjadeathhawk nah I use copic markers

[Mywakkyworld]

WTF Your so good at drawling

[Theninjadeathhawk]

did u use watercolor

[MangaArtFanBoy]

fill you're book up with drawings dont waste room, one day you are going to look back on you're drawings and realise how much you have grown keep it up buddy

[thecolourofsand]

drawing is good but the body proportions aren't, just work on that :)

[gohan377]

U r good!!!

[ScorchArtist]

@gohan377 thnx man

[LoonaticsRappers]

Is that kakashi?

[keasdaddy]

um sorry drawin is good but it seems that the holster is below the knee look odd...not sure if u meant that but read weird

[ScorchArtist]

@TheAxelProject thnx, and as far as tips go, I don't have much but for shding I always picture a light source and shade according to which diresction its goin in, I have a body tutorial on my channel, and hair is more of a person to person thing depends on the person because they have their own unique style

[TheAxelProject]

i love drawing manga, and have been drawing it for a while but uh i have a problem... i can only draw faces -.-". my faces look good, its just the body, clothes, shading and even the hair that i have trouble with. any tips?

[MangaArtFanBoy]

@TheAxelProject all you have to do is copy other drawings and real life images,that way you increase you're visual knowledge and increases you're skills

[nathalia9446]

yeah whatever.. lol

good job kid, keep drawing!! :)

[kingissie909]

you did it pritty well but make the faces more realistic like a real manga.

[boomcazoom]

i like how you put the lines under your characters eyes to symbolize that they are demons, i think that is very creative.

[ScorchArtist]

@boomcazoom cool thnx

[Tu51ndBl4d3]

do you color with copic markers?

[kickassmegapwngeguy]

wow like your moritaka drawing from bakuman

[IIArmyOfPieII]

Nice but your handwriting isn't that good

[980acejohnny]

i m working on my new and first comic book The Legendary fighters add my channel and i will show my comics all also i will discuss for anime and the most things i wanna talk about is naruto and more animes

[xLeafe]

Naruto inspir x3

[1234567890waffle]

YOU are talented!!! Wish I could draw like that!!!

The only bad thing, though, is the camera. There's so much shaking I can't tell what's going on!!!

[SuperDrawingQueen]

i like it but i don't like the fact that you said R*****d 2 times...its not a good word to say

[zombiefighter321]

baku-man!!!! i thought i was the only one who knew about that anime!!!

[Dopeswagger1]

dude you draw like me and think like me we should skype some idea's

[TheLegendsReborn]

You can draw my friend!

[fkennedy69]

this comic reminds me of fukuda's manga in bakuman

[ScorchArtist]

@KayAy1995 lol thnx

[jaxon19kira]

i know this is old but im still gonna give my advice for others out there like us making manga comics of there own... okay- dont use mechanical pencil. get aq good sharpener and pencil and use that... the other is just way to thin to make good anime.

[KayAy1995]

@jaxon19kira I think that is more preference based, as long as it works for that artist, it shouldn't matter what tools they use

[YoungMangaka]

The people you draw...They have distorted heads, and their bodies aren't all that accurate.

[911evilgirl]

hi ummm any help me im making a manga what should be the title its about a girl who loses here memores and finds all of her friends that are boys

[Kamencl123456789]

Love God hate demons

[ScorchArtist]

@MultiGoruto yea but its old and discarded

[MultiGoruto]

did you create a storyboard for this previous/unfinished comic you used to do?

[kittyanime1234]

i want a g pen for christmas since im like broke right now :(

[isaacjrood]

Nice, like the drawings, hate the text. Ever think of scanning your drawings and adding text in later? Heh nice work tho!!

[ScorchArtist]

@lollidollymenoly doesn't seem like you know how to read, look at the title before commenting

[lollidollymenoly]

Woooow, I have all those art supplies, only I can do better

[KayAy1995]

@lollidollymenoly Really? why do people have to be jerks, why can't people shut their traps for once? yeah, maybe he needs more practice (for one, who doesn't,all anyone can do is improve and two, its obviously an old video) But maybe try something a little more positive? Like, great effort, you should practice more? Either way, you don't need to be a bitch (excuse my language)

[Spyromane1]

nice drawings dude,your very talented

[ShreekerTail]

were did u get the art supplies



[ScorchArtist]

@TheLoneSaiyanWarrior on some random website for lyk 5 bucks

[MrKatanaKid]

Talented fucking guy.

[TheLoneSaiyanWarrior]

Where did you get the G-Pen from dude!?

[CrimsonXdef]

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn kid can draw

[Jon3718]

WTF? not to be mean but if you're gonna make a video at least be into it man.

"these are...some nibs *drops like 3*

lol

[ScorchArtist]

@Jon3718 lol yea werrd

[troubleclef94]

Hahaha actually i'm a girl but i know what you mean.

sure :) I look forward to seeing it when it is finished.

[troubleclef94]

hey :) I'd like to make my own manga as well and I’ve put it off for a long time because I didn't have confidence in me work so I decided to research a little on techniques for drawing it. Just wanted to say, I commend you on your confidence to start making your manga and i only saw a quick flash of it in your video but the picture you drew of Naruto is really good! good luck on finishing your manga :) 

[ScorchArtist]

@troubleclef94 lols thnx man

[zZNiGhTmArExSniiPzZz]

no offense but for some drawings you have to use better proportions like at 1:47 his hands r 2 small

[spotifypwn]

cool :D

lol just started to draw manga today its fun but kinda hard /= :D

[ScorchArtist]

@armcaredude I used prisma color markers back then but now I use copics

[armcaredude]

what do u use to color them????

[foldaman]

his not korean or japanese plus better in anime

[jaylyn3]

the two pictures at 2:34 I saw those in a manga somewhere

[ScorchArtist]

@jaylyn3 those were original characters

[jaylyn3]

@ScorchArtist Sorry I meant 2:22 and 2:24 I think they were from Bakuman..The one with the guy drawing and the other with the guy in the red sweatsuit listening to music.

[deadpool769]

your really good i wish i can draw as good as you...

[ScorchArtist]

@deadpool769 lol no need to sulk, thnx anyway

[HKHK1214]

@ScorchArtist How old are :\ Im 10 Im making a gun comic first I was making a comic like but with better looking Character And a Epic Storyboard.Ill Try to put it on youtube.

[megabeatboxkid]

that is g man good job

[rpj918]

Hey nice drawimg of the guy from bakuman i saw that in shonen jump thats one of my favs xD

[ScorchArtist]

@rpj918 lol thnx

[MIKEHUNT7531]

where do you get the manga supplies the gpens and stuff i already know where to get copic markers

[ScorchArtist]

@MIKEHUNT7531 usually online and at random art stores

[jaylyn3]

how did you color in the silouhettes?

[kittenfetus666]

Whoa, nice drawing!

[xXnikmanXx]

woow cool eye

[rsanto09]

WHOA!! 2:21 sick Naruto drawing!!!

[ScorchArtist]

@rsanto09 thnx

[antoniomanley]

Well done! This has surpriseingly gave me some insperation thank you.