Fallout Equestria Project Horizons (part 1) (reading 1)

[JackJackFrag]

If you are going to do a reading like this, you need to do some editing and read with some kind of passion. Very hard to listen to.

[MorbidSlinky]

Geez, put some feeling in your voice. Your suppose to be telling a story that makes grown men cry or laugh histiricoly... Your words need weight!

[Anon3mous1]

I have similar problems with being dyslexic, so I sympathise. I also read fanfictions, and I love Project Horizons so I thought I could help you a bit:

1. No, not a clop fic exactly, but nsfw, especially in chapter 33 and...(28? I think)

2. You need to improve the audio a bit; get closer to the mic, speak next to the mic not into it, learn to use the noise removal filter in audacity (free)

3. Show some emotion! It's voice Acting!

here's one of mine (with some editing):

/watch?v=dn5RsM-jOss

[Seradaluna]

@Anon3mous1 I have been getting a little better you should see my other two vids also i have a cheep mic but I might get a new one hopefully also i have had audacity but it never really worked for me i might upload a new vid sooner or later depends on how i feel

[highelves01]

I Liked the reading and your voice is nice but you sound a little bored.

I have a few suggestions to make your reading better. (Please don't take offense.)

1.Try reading it over a few times before recording

2.Record multiple readings so you can pick the best parts

3. Try less fumbling with the camera

4.A little editing would be nice. (Distractions like your friend)

Its good for your first reading.

[Seradaluna]

@highelves01 Yea I am still getting use to it. Sorry for sounding bored I am tired and sick I'll get batter at it. I will also try out you suggestions. I might still fumble on the words being dyslectic makes it hard to read out loud for long periods of time. This will also be the only time my friend will be in the background sorry for that.