Howl Part II

[voluptamors]

The background sound adds such depth to the poem. The rhythm is flawless. Very well done!

[joet88]

@voluptamors

thx : )

I haven't looked at this in a while... my first creative college project!

[TheHSFT]

I see you're also a fan of abusing your native language. Just joshin' around with him, bro! Yo bro, buy a dictionary and look up other words...bro. Oh and...say no to drugs, bro, that shit will mess you up, bro. So does everything else, bro, but why ask for more trouble, bro?

[boilingbubbles]

I don't like how he reads it.

But other than that, the peom is intense.

[tom500k]

"What shpinx of cement ate up there brains & immagination". I started by doctoral dissemination with that line on the effect of capitalism on educational research.

[TheDummytestaccount]

I hope you used a spell & grammar check before you turned it in.

[tom500k]

I think your comment might have some bite were it not limited to grammar vs substance.

Also, glad you were not my my dissertation committee which focused on substance

[TheHSFT]

500K? Is that how much you owe for your lameass education?

[TheHSFT]

Someone with a dissertation should really know how to spell!

[joet88]

what's with the hate? We're all just a bunch of fun-lovin bros here, bro- no need to hate on a bro, bro. Let's all just be nice and say nice things about my video. bro.

[tothlaw]

This young film maker is worth watching