you should have created more suspense and tension for the viewers given that we, as the audience, knew what was going to happen and what was inevitable. not bad for 2 days work...perhaps a more prevalent danger issue such as texting or calling while driving or road rage. i dont know the prompt or what not so i cant say much about it but yeah.
It was supposed to be about any issue involving driving safety. Yeah I see what you're saying although it was hard to fit a message in 55 seconds. Not bad for a first try though :\
you should have created more suspense and tension for the viewers given that we, as the audience, knew what was going to happen and what was inevitable. not bad for 2 days work...perhaps a more prevalent danger issue such as texting or calling while driving or road rage. i dont know the prompt or what not so i cant say much about it but yeah.
7/10
PathosFilms 1 year ago
@PathosFilms
It was supposed to be about any issue involving driving safety. Yeah I see what you're saying although it was hard to fit a message in 55 seconds. Not bad for a first try though :\
TranSquaredProdizzle 1 year ago
@TranSquaredProdizzle if you were pro you could have done it in 55 seconds >:O
lol
PathosFilms 1 year ago
@PathosFilms -.-
TranSquaredProdizzle 1 year ago