"Your body after all is like an ancient glacier,
That slips into the hot bath of my night."
Just now and then you strike a personal chord - well, here is my last relationship in a couplet.
EdmontonReader1989 3 months ago
wonderful
rpVerlaine 5 months ago
@tinySpectacle Thank you so much for the kind words! It's nice to know when a third party points out exactly the parts you, yourself, thought were best along with one's own inner critic.
EllyMcCormack 5 months ago
Like the profile shot delivery. And the poem is pretty damn good too (featured on my page).... :P
DavidRandallCurtis 5 months ago
This is FANTASTIC!
God Bless
celtichero9 5 months ago
@celtichero9 Thank you!
"Your body after all is like an ancient glacier,
That slips into the hot bath of my night."
Just now and then you strike a personal chord - well, here is my last relationship in a couplet.
EdmontonReader1989 3 months ago
wonderful
rpVerlaine 5 months ago
@tinySpectacle Thank you so much for the kind words! It's nice to know when a third party points out exactly the parts you, yourself, thought were best along with one's own inner critic.
EllyMcCormack 5 months ago
Like the profile shot delivery. And the poem is pretty damn good too (featured on my page).... :P
DavidRandallCurtis 5 months ago
This is FANTASTIC!
God Bless
celtichero9 5 months ago
@celtichero9 Thank you!
EllyMcCormack 5 months ago