Shattered

[dashpoet]

Here's hoping that tears of joy will soon wash your tears of sorrow away! Having said that, I think there is in poem in it... you first or me?! All best wishes, with cheers to creativity, Mark.

[RayneDrops4Ever]

LOL thanks! I knew some of you would see that much! I'm good I just had to, well..as my dear friend stormspinner so kindly stated, let it out. Cheers my friend!

[DJP49]

5 *s, Alyssa! You are SO talented!

[RayneDrops4Ever]

Thank you hun! I appreciate that so very much. I write from the heart, the good, bad, or ugly, but it is something that I think everyone can relate to at least once in their lives. :-P

[detkicker]

Very nice and a ending that makes me ponder and ponder, etc. Great job on this one. 5*

[RayneDrops4Ever]

Thank you. Yeah theres a lot not worded and left out intentionally. However, my closer friends on youtube like you can figure it out:-P

[stormspinner1]

Very well penned and recited, Rayne. 5/5 stars!

[RayneDrops4Ever]

Thanks sweety. Its always easier to write from that dark corner of your own heart. I miss you guys but I have some time now to post again.

[stormspinner1]

I know - sometimes you've just got to get it out. You have impeccable rhyming and meter. =] I usually write in free verse, sometimes, though, a rhyme will come to mind.

[ddrusa]

i miss your videos i like this one

[RayneDrops4Ever]

Thanks hun. I'm gonna post some more soon.