Don't pay attention to all these haters. It's amazing how many people will criticize but won't show you anything better :) Your melody is pretty solid. The bassline needs some work though. I'm going to remix your remix bruddah. I'll let you know when its up ^^
Nice, samples arent very good, but melody and lead is awesome. check out mine and give me some feedback please. /watch?v=hlKe8YS6nGg&feature=channel_video_title
0:18 is just as sample ( im shure it is cuz i have it too it sounds exactly tesame, i also have the vocal) and its veeery bad used my grandma could do better srry m8 nice try but it sucks
@djkvb yeah im still learning all of this shit. so much to learn and i work 6 days a week, but im trying my damndest to learn how to make all my own noises. though the lead is custom haha
Great melody, but the drumline/bassilne is not really complimenting the progression; it's always a good idea to explore more than just the 1,2,3,4 standard beat. other than that it's a good song so far!
@xTheEmoOctopusx thanks for the feedback! yeah im still working on this one, making my own sounds and making it more diverse but thanks again always appreciate feedback!
Don't pay attention to all these haters. It's amazing how many people will criticize but won't show you anything better :) Your melody is pretty solid. The bassline needs some work though. I'm going to remix your remix bruddah. I'll let you know when its up ^^
hano0k 8 months ago
Nice, samples arent very good, but melody and lead is awesome. check out mine and give me some feedback please. /watch?v=hlKe8YS6nGg&feature=channel_video_title
BassFocuz 11 months ago
umm...the kick is just horrible ... sry to say but..wtf?
philz96 1 year ago 2
0:18 is just as sample ( im shure it is cuz i have it too it sounds exactly tesame, i also have the vocal) and its veeery bad used my grandma could do better srry m8 nice try but it sucks
joetjoeplol14 1 year ago
hmm... the kick fails, the melo would be nice
Darkslither 1 year ago
holy shit! What the hell starts at 0:18? Sounds fucking crap
Azzys007 1 year ago
@Azzys007 jeah it's not rly good :(
harddanceuploadz 11 months ago
@djkvb yeah im still learning all of this shit. so much to learn and i work 6 days a week, but im trying my damndest to learn how to make all my own noises. though the lead is custom haha
DjDankAssKush 1 year ago
Great melody, but the drumline/bassilne is not really complimenting the progression; it's always a good idea to explore more than just the 1,2,3,4 standard beat. other than that it's a good song so far!
xTheEmoOctopusx 1 year ago
@xTheEmoOctopusx thanks for the feedback! yeah im still working on this one, making my own sounds and making it more diverse but thanks again always appreciate feedback!
DjDankAssKush 1 year ago
I agree. the intro was good but every time you drop the beat it kinda ruins the mood with too much unwanted noise
LifeEnderX 1 year ago
idk, i think its a bit messy kick has way to much distortion and some of the notes are off-note.
i like what you tried to do with it tho,
but i dont think the original fits in.
try making it more of yourself rather then adding notes.
distordedmediaZ 2 years ago