I don't mean to be critical. I just wanted to let you know that when you're using quotes, the comma always goes inside the quotation. Example:
"As many as you want" He confirmed with a toothy grin.
Should read:
"As many as you want," he confirmed with a toothy grin.
Other than that, keep up the good work!
All the best!
Cheers.
MsLexias 1 month ago
what the fuck
123evaughan 10 months ago
what the F***ing Hell?!?
TheMaster6446 1 year ago
CUTE and llllluuuuuuuuvccccccccckkkkkkkkkyyyyyyyyyy!!
marga4051 1 year ago
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more plz more plz more plz lovethe story
zanzanchck 1 year ago
your very very very lucky.
mobascar 1 year ago
aww i want more! MAKE MORE! it just started 2 get good!
liljamaicanbri 1 year ago
its good....i mean great lolz
wow.. haha. awsome!
lol. i love Justin;s POV on the end. :p
Carlane3619 1 year ago
more plz
kitkatashley56 1 year ago
I don't mean to be critical. I just wanted to let you know that when you're using quotes, the comma always goes inside the quotation. Example:
"As many as you want" He confirmed with a toothy grin.
Should read:
"As many as you want," he confirmed with a toothy grin.
Other than that, keep up the good work!
All the best!
Cheers.
MsLexias 1 month ago
what the fuck
123evaughan 10 months ago
what the F***ing Hell?!?
TheMaster6446 1 year ago
CUTE and llllluuuuuuuuvccccccccckkkkkkkkkyyyyyyyyyy!!
marga4051 1 year ago
Comment removed
marga4051 1 year ago
more plz more plz more plz lovethe story
zanzanchck 1 year ago
your very very very lucky.
mobascar 1 year ago
aww i want more! MAKE MORE! it just started 2 get good!
liljamaicanbri 1 year ago
its good....i mean great lolz
liljamaicanbri 1 year ago
wow.. haha. awsome!
lol. i love Justin;s POV on the end. :p
Carlane3619 1 year ago
more plz
kitkatashley56 1 year ago