it was good. one thing I didnt think flowed well was the ending how she just took the guy back. There was this huge fight and he comes back and opens his arms and shes like oh its ok...maybe have him work a little harder for it!
good job, try cutting to the music. its hard but it makes it 10x better! also, try to keep some scenes shorter. over all, its great! for example, at like 2:40 and around that time, car scene seems to be really long...
It's pretty good. Just be more dramatic, more slow mo during fights and make it all black and white or watever filter you were using . I realy liked it though
>Would love constructive criticism from a film-making point of view.
Invest in a Self-Leveling Dolly! You can build a pretty decent one out of a skateboard and spare PVC pipe for mega cheap. In its current state, the video looks like it was shot by an eight-year-old with cerebral palsy. Also, if you're going to do black&white, at least do it properly: You're going to need to use a professional video editor like Premiere, (or even Vegas, or Cinelerra ) to do proper grayscale and thresholding.
It was a good video. The only thing i saw was at the beginning. Why would her 'male" cousin have his arm over her shoulder when she opened the door? Maybe as a sense of protection? Good vid though!
pretty good bro, check out my music video for mad.
watch?v=Qoe6llY7IIk
IdahosFinest 1 year ago
THATS SOOO TRUE
why the hell do u just take him back so easilyy !?!?!
BTW. r u old enough to drive???
u look YUONG and wen u opened the door u looked really short..
but like overall it was nicee good job !
meesheh 2 years ago
lmmaaaoooo
NOLAROCKS92 2 years ago
it was good. one thing I didnt think flowed well was the ending how she just took the guy back. There was this huge fight and he comes back and opens his arms and shes like oh its ok...maybe have him work a little harder for it!
simpleman2810 2 years ago
good job, try cutting to the music. its hard but it makes it 10x better! also, try to keep some scenes shorter. over all, its great! for example, at like 2:40 and around that time, car scene seems to be really long...
anyhow, great job. inspires me to make one too =]
nipbruce 2 years ago
LOL the end when on facebook the facial expression is great lol
09bluebirdsfan 2 years ago
coollll
PrincXzAz 2 years ago
lol
agata055 2 years ago
this is fantastic!!! :)
bluebel95 2 years ago
ang ganda..
love it..
mecmecthegreatone 2 years ago
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!
nice job!!
seword 2 years ago
LoLoLoL!! hahaha :D
vinzsanity17 2 years ago
funny lolz.....
carlo0910 2 years ago
wow! i super love this video! good job!
cathy12denise 2 years ago
very nice yall, i must say,
that was great,
nice story line and all,
lookin forward to more vids...
PatBreezy8 2 years ago
Looool the facebook bit is funny
Curtisng15 2 years ago
good job
cbewry 2 years ago
It's pretty good. Just be more dramatic, more slow mo during fights and make it all black and white or watever filter you were using . I realy liked it though
thanu31 2 years ago
Lol quality work, man.
7characters 2 years ago
Good work :)
societyskepticism 2 years ago
good job i like it
V3rsion4 2 years ago
good job!:)
dwaCiastka 2 years ago
fucking artist lol good enough
abnormalkano 2 years ago
She is not yellin at U Dude Looks more like she is throwing U Out
MiniMe6776 2 years ago
i agree with u
bitch0248030 2 years ago
omshh!
that was awesommme! (:
nice jobs ! yea yuu liive in a nice neiborhood! haha
nice house! [: ....it kinds looks like my neiborhood..its in Utah tho...loll
justanordinarychick5 2 years ago
DAmn this video is TIGHTTTT
5 stars :P
xcltx09 2 years ago
this was really goood ! =]
durka20 2 years ago
im an actor my self and i liked the video very well done.
eggo006 2 years ago
low life.
frhgg 2 years ago
wow that is really perfeinoly done!
fashionbling98 2 years ago
woah now that one guy kinda went overboard on constructive critism lol...personally i thought your video was really good man nice work!!!
mannietoofresh 2 years ago
lol anyone else see how big the houses are? where you live bruh
SnowkingT 2 years ago
>Would love constructive criticism from a film-making point of view.
Invest in a Self-Leveling Dolly! You can build a pretty decent one out of a skateboard and spare PVC pipe for mega cheap. In its current state, the video looks like it was shot by an eight-year-old with cerebral palsy. Also, if you're going to do black&white, at least do it properly: You're going to need to use a professional video editor like Premiere, (or even Vegas, or Cinelerra ) to do proper grayscale and thresholding.
igneousphantom 2 years ago
I liked it. its very nice
ElSponge777 2 years ago
Oh yea, on the Facebook page scene, is that her real name, might want to edit it for safety purposes...
luckynnbc 2 years ago
haha nope, fake name =)
AllureoftheGame7 2 years ago
It was a good video. The only thing i saw was at the beginning. Why would her 'male" cousin have his arm over her shoulder when she opened the door? Maybe as a sense of protection? Good vid though!
luckynnbc 2 years ago
good job, a few more of them videos and i'm sure u'l beat ne-yo. keep it up ;)
rajiv20007 2 years ago
good video and car... we both have an altima... mine is the old one... love this song as well...
donbosi 2 years ago
wow..great video...
gwapakonohhehe 2 years ago
this is awsome good job
bigbattygarl 2 years ago
good vid bro
miloskujovic 2 years ago