argh i cant watch the last part, it says its blocked by sony
TheCapdevillaTV 1 year ago
da steht: Dieses Video enthält ein Content von Sony Music Entertainment. Es ist in deinem Land nicht mehr verfügbar. I hope that you understand it, because i can't write it in english very well... =) sorry..
321LisaRichter123 1 year ago
nice story =) but i can't watch the last part =(
@321LisaRichter123 thank you?
Is it not loading?
lox3csimiami22 1 year ago
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0333Lili3330 1 year ago
its really good and it make it a good story with the violent so dont woory about that!!!!!!!!!!
Calleighhyy 2 years ago
Haha I thought so. XD
:)
thanks so much!
lox3csimiami22 2 years ago
That last line is so twisted (in a good creepy way)! He seriously has some abandonment issues.
I wish I could write anything half as good as this!
MercilessAphordite93 2 years ago
Yeah, that's Jake. He's a snake/monster. haha
thank you so much. I'm pretty sure that you're good at writing too. I didn't even know I had a talent for writing until 3 years ago.
Ahhhh!! I think im going to cry!!
Wow he trys so many ways of killing her!
lol :) I imagine it in my head and it give me tingles inside my legs picturing her blood gushing and jake torturing her :D aah!!
jainy215 2 years ago
Awwhh, lol, I'm sorry about all the violence.
I'm not a violent person, nor do I think violent, but I felt this story coming. :))
OMG!! I love this story so much!! And that ending was pure evil!! UPDATE SOON!!!
anistonfan 2 years ago
It is. Jake is an evil man. :))
the next chapter soon!!
Fantastic, simply fantastic, can't wait for the next one =D
TVLover1995 2 years ago
:) the next chapter soon!!
i looooooooooooove this eric should come to the rescue haaa =)
xyz1128csi 2 years ago
lol, stay tune for the next chapter/episode!!1 haha :)
omg im thrilled :D
niunka88 2 years ago
:DD
I'm glad you're liking them :)
they just keep getting better!! can't wait for the next one.
calleighDfan 2 years ago
thanks.
The next one should be up soon :)
I'm glad you're enjoying them.
argh i cant watch the last part, it says its blocked by sony
TheCapdevillaTV 1 year ago
da steht: Dieses Video enthält ein Content von Sony Music Entertainment. Es ist in deinem Land nicht mehr verfügbar. I hope that you understand it, because i can't write it in english very well... =) sorry..
321LisaRichter123 1 year ago
nice story =) but i can't watch the last part =(
321LisaRichter123 1 year ago
@321LisaRichter123 thank you?
Is it not loading?
lox3csimiami22 1 year ago
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0333Lili3330 1 year ago
its really good and it make it a good story with the violent so dont woory about that!!!!!!!!!!
Calleighhyy 2 years ago
Haha I thought so. XD
:)
thanks so much!
lox3csimiami22 2 years ago
That last line is so twisted (in a good creepy way)! He seriously has some abandonment issues.
I wish I could write anything half as good as this!
MercilessAphordite93 2 years ago
Yeah, that's Jake. He's a snake/monster. haha
thank you so much. I'm pretty sure that you're good at writing too. I didn't even know I had a talent for writing until 3 years ago.
lox3csimiami22 2 years ago
Ahhhh!! I think im going to cry!!
Wow he trys so many ways of killing her!
lol :) I imagine it in my head and it give me tingles inside my legs picturing her blood gushing and jake torturing her :D aah!!
jainy215 2 years ago
Awwhh, lol, I'm sorry about all the violence.
I'm not a violent person, nor do I think violent, but I felt this story coming. :))
lox3csimiami22 2 years ago
OMG!! I love this story so much!! And that ending was pure evil!! UPDATE SOON!!!
anistonfan 2 years ago
It is. Jake is an evil man. :))
the next chapter soon!!
lox3csimiami22 2 years ago
Fantastic, simply fantastic, can't wait for the next one =D
TVLover1995 2 years ago
:) the next chapter soon!!
lox3csimiami22 2 years ago
i looooooooooooove this eric should come to the rescue haaa =)
xyz1128csi 2 years ago
lol, stay tune for the next chapter/episode!!1 haha :)
lox3csimiami22 2 years ago
omg im thrilled :D
niunka88 2 years ago
:DD
I'm glad you're liking them :)
lox3csimiami22 2 years ago
they just keep getting better!! can't wait for the next one.
calleighDfan 2 years ago
thanks.
The next one should be up soon :)
I'm glad you're enjoying them.
lox3csimiami22 2 years ago