Brentford School for Girls - Adult Child Dead Child (part1) - 02 April 2009

[totochick23]

I understand what you did with it and the devices you used; it's clear why you got an A* because it's very much ticking boxes, but you can be original without butchering the script. In fact, I'm going to go back on myself and say feel free to chop up the script, it's adding in so many of your own lines that just ruins the play. I'm not a professional, but I'm doing A Level and last year our class all got full marks. So I do understand the system, I'm just a fan of the subtlety of the play.

[LaurenSaysCupcakes]

This is an unusual interpretation of this piece...I doing an extract of it for my A Level exam and I love how it works as a one woman show, but I'm not keen on this, it seems a bit Berkoffian, which I think detracts from the emotion of the piece. Just my opinion though :)

[jorjramsay]

this is fantastic! we're doing the same play for our gcse x

[EDiiEbOO]

those 4 likes are obviously from the four girls...

[bobbieisgreen]

@EDiiEbOO OH HI EDEN. lolol

[EDiiEbOO]

@bobbieisgreen HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAAHAHHAHAHA­HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH.

[loveforeverinm]

you kidding me? a*? the look like gossip girl remixed please.

[Nudophobic]

The people commenting on this video probably havenever experienced any other type of drama other than the bullshit naturalistic crap they watch on TV, like eastenders and other shit.

This was good, at the marks were deserved. The actors get marked individually so it dpesn't actually matter if they don't get the lines they say together exactly at the same time. The acting was good. The movement was good. A job well done.

[888kharn]

@Nudophobic not all naturalistic drama is bullshite. EastEnders and other soaps are bullshite, yes, but it really comes down to story lines, characters and how it is all portrayed. being naturalistic or not doesn't make dramas bullshite

[RachieBumham]

PLEASEPLEASE, anyone know where I can get this script?! An A-Level grade depends on it XD Please reply if you have the tiniest idea. oxox

[EDiiEbOO]

@RachieBumham amazon...

[HeavyMetalist24]

This was really good, but you shouldn't put this on Youtube because i'm doing it for my Drama GCSE and now i can take all of your ideas and get my own A*! Thanks! Hahaha

[RachieBumham]

@HeavyMetalist24 Where'd you get the script frommm? oxox

[HeavyMetalist24]

@RachieBumham

I got mine from school..

[LynneOFarrell]

Did you do better then mrsheet ? Oops did I mispell that?

[mrsheentw]

this is fukin crap!!! how in earth did it get an A*, RIDICULOUS.

[deansmith7]

A*?

my god.

[SceneKidsGoNomm]

Heyy;; its the same person as KateAnn94,, we've changed ours againn. its really psyco :D

its mad :)

[xxgemskixx]

Hey, thanks for all the comments. This is our performance and we really enjoyed doing it for our GCSEs. We thought it would good to stray completely from the script because at the end of the day you're marked on individuality and originality :) We got an A* for this so let us know how you do and then we will see whose is "BETTER XD" :)

thanks again

Gemma & krish x

[SceneKidsGoNomm]

you didnt stray completely from the script; i have it in front of me,and almost all the lines are from it lol x

[unfuckingavailable]

ahha. i go to a girls school too in stroud. we're doing it too.

we've doing it so there's like the whole class on stage at the same time and they all do different thingsand like every one is benji and stuff and do different things. difficult to explain.

this is good tohugh

[hayleythompson123]

When we do ours we'll record it and put it on here

[KateAnn94]

LOL hayleyy aha LOL

[KateAnn94]

I'm doing this for our GCSE we love it : ) we've taken a different approchh to it tho x

[hayleythompson123]

Lol yeah we have, but i would like to say that saying we've taken a different approch to it, is an understatement, ours is so much different, and honestly BETTER XD