"A New Composition" - Short Film

[L0gicZer0]

More of these :D

[soljah37]

Isn't that teacher the voice who did your "telephone" video?

[eightn9neten]

i dont get it ? Someone please explain it to me. That guy found the notebook by accidentally picking it up when he dropped his books. ?

[Qk34life]

Mordecai!!!

[emjane909]

it just happen again! love the story :)

[kimhaebin]

holy moly, the acting in this was horrible... excluding Jenny.

[Paulfrankfriend]

thats creepy, like u live your life over and over again juggling within the book, and as time goes, u will have quite a few of the same journal and the same content lying around in your house? But nice one though!

[chrisbabygirl07]

dope!!

[sanvanable]

good story but the girl says all the lines the guy shud say...i mean gals dnt take initiative to begin a conversation....and carry on!!!1

[bitterwonders34]

justeeen... is time for deeneeeerr

[ewansebastian]

my third time watching it... i think i'm in love with jeni and its a pretty awesome story even with the awkwardness of james

[inclinedtopenlines]

LOL @ grabbing the persimmon.

[Climaxxiin]

@sarapacman99 timfergus0n << His channel thumbs up so everyone can see .

[DF1291]

Super liked it! Greatly well done.. and great story! Wonderful Job! Peace..

[frbasco]

bhphoto! 12:50

[maridude]

the butterfly effect ahah

[samuelenblom]

Loved the script and the whole conecpt! I think you guys made a good final product but I think you could have made the dialogue a little bit tighter, and mabe work some one the actors tone in their voice.

The light and footage where nice too!

About the editing I think it could work out for the better if you would let the reply come before the picture a little more often.

Good job!

[hispunkrockprincessX]

The most amazing place to be with your lover during the winter holiday, Christmas in the Park!! ='D

[HiandByeProductions]

@wheebatman that song is an original track composed just for this short by Adrian Per. I don't think he gave it a title.

[playapnoyx05]

"that was a close one Cleo" LOLOL

[sarapacman99]

Can anyone send me a link to Tim Ferguson's page? I can't find him anywhere!! Thanks!

[HiandByeProductions]

Song list are in the credits.

[MegaBattleJesus]

Seasons by Tim Ferguson

[tsy1992]

Song name?

[HiandByeProductions]

@tsy1992 Seasons by Tim Ferguson

[XXsydniewashereXX]

I'm dying to know the song that you played during their first date..

Song name please ? c;

[HiandByeProductions]

@XXsydniewashereXX Seasons by Tim Ferguson

[Climaxxiin]

Song list Please ? 

[HiandByeProductions]

@Climaxxiin Seasons by Tim Ferguson

[SIKKMX]

Jeni, I think you did a great job. I'm talking bout a really good job. It's just to bad you guys got the wrong guy for the role. Sorry didn't mean to hate on you dude but as you can see. Everyone is posting the same thing. You kinda awkward.

[xbbyjayyx3]

@5:31 I THOUGHT THAT I WAS COMING FROM MY HOUSE.. HELLA SCARED ME.

[ewansebastian]

awkward gallore!!!!!!

[michellesant0s]

I wonder what AJ think about this!

[Casey2222]

Yes, the guy was awkward, but don't let the acting overshadow the great story telling and overall composition. This is a film made on a small budget so don't expect to have amazing actors in it. Focus on what they produced with what they had. The results were awesome! As always, great color correction on the whole thing and I'm very happy in viewing this short film.

[10brillantes]

For those commenting that it looks cold for summer, you obviously haven't been to the Bay in the summer. Great story guys and thanks for sharing! Looks like you had a lot of fun making this one. :)

[OhSnapItsJustin]

So inception or time travel? haha I loved the story.

[FunkyNiueKID]

OMG YOU USED TIM'S SONG!!!! WOOOOOOOHOO!!!! sooo good.

Great video. <3

[fyio123456789]

I like the concept of the film, kinda like the butterfly effect... Jenny, u look beautiful :D

[wdangc]

that guy is a horrible actor, ruined the short

[SIKKMX]

@wdangc I 2nd that

[BabyBomDiggity]

loved the story line but the acting needs a little bit more work.

[YoooPatrick]

what songs are in this video?

[MoowenMangoLo]

Omg...the mom sounds like my mom. AHAHAH!

[erocksteiner]

This was a beautiful film and I think you guys nailed the indy romance genre. As far as the awkward protagonist goes, I thought that was the point. It made him an excellent counterpart to the talkative and totally not self-conscious Chloe. I've seen it in a lot of indy romance flicks and I think that's what makes this film faithful to the genre. Great soundtrack too. Props to Adrian Per.

[xXNatashaXx94]

this is like inception!!

Anyways, regardless of how awkward the guy was, it was still an amazing video. I give Jenny and James props for all their best efforts in making this video enjoyable to watch!

[Neeshskeee]

13:17-13:19 Most bizarre accident.

[scottsayasithsena]

pretty good, always love what you all do! Jenny did fantastic in her role. the only critique would be the acting of James (unless that's how you guys visioned it). It's been commented on a few times already, but i'm sure he did his best and enjoyed it, which is what matters. Adrian Per's music was great too.

It's funny, i wrote something similar a couple years ago and planned on shooting it this coming year. Minus the composition. Hope you all check it out and critique me when it's finished!

[MizShaiOnex18]

A story within a story...

[andywilliams5757]

I love the storyline very original

[youngdoggie]

jennys acting was good, the guys acting was indeed akward. he could use more facial expressions, hand motions and changing the tone of voice once in a while. sorry to say this, but the video was also kind of sloppy. some camera angle changes (ex: the first scene when jenny bumps into the guy, the almost kiss scene) were awkward or felt like there was something missing. overall i just felt like the editing was rushed, and it compromised the quality it could've had. the idea though, was great.

[gotem807]

Produced by, A BOSS.

[gotem807]

If I could borrow a line from that hit Black Eyed Peas song, it'd be: "Inception, you got a brother dreamin', dreamin'."

[warriorbrah07]

Jenny didn't suk but the guy did!

[PisangGilaaa]

hahhah amazing that guy with the ukelele in class.. !

[mayrilenejay]

Not bad at all. Lets just say his character is suppose to be awkward-like ;)

[CH121S]

hard to watch with the corny lines and bad acting. makes me cringe.

hopefully ill get through it to get the films concept.

[AJedProduction]

Nice short film, Jenny's acting was great but the guy's acting was realllllyyyyyyy bad :S totally awkward

[cookiexoverdose]

soooo awkward hah.

[happyazn247]

was worth 15 minutes

[lilaznballaz1022]

damn. great idea and cinematography, but casting can change everything

[michellesant0s]

Beautiful!

[Kr4y0nS]

mind blown.

[BeLeeve]

That guy went to my high school! Small world

[misschessewhesse]

AHAHAHAAHAHAHAH, it feels so frickin awkward! 

[Lemonade88]

yeah his awkwardness totally fits the feel for this short. he was great for it.

[daybidd3]

Christmas at the Park in San Jose!

[beawasherexox]

jenny :)

[thewickederaser]

His acting is not so good but the concept is amazing

[mogando25]

lol the top comments say the guy is awkward ... but I like it more like that.

[drewlflip]

That awkward moment when that guy talks lol

[princez3r0]

Man, you could touch the awkward when that guy talks. 

[DUHitsKAYLUH21]

Omg. I had that teacher in middle school..

[geraldmorales98]

@DUHitsKAYLUH21 i have him right now! LOL

[GRproductionEnt]

This is actually really good. It has room to be improved from, only the lead guy should really be changed..

[misternudies]

summer school? you guys seem to be cold in the summer

[angiec1007]

@misternudies it really is cold in the summer over here. haha

[neilwphotography]

acting was a little awkward even from jenny, but the overall story was really good. great job!

[deeice30]

Jenny Suk Swag! She can act.

[lilchinkygurl98]

This reminded me of inception... LOL

[smilekeerstee]

creative concept! (:

[jskillz909]

the guy so akward lol

[melvinsingss]

yay.

[ohBABiE03]

amber and ben? nice touch! amazing story, as always.