First of all - tremendous synthesis of word and image. One comment: I watched it twice, second time without the sound and I think I liked parts of it better. Perhaps with more silent space between audio narration, the visual takes the lead, they could play off each other more effectively. Sometimes it felt like the animation was forced to keep up with the poetry. Again, thx for posting.
Genius.
traumas 5 years ago
First of all - tremendous synthesis of word and image. One comment: I watched it twice, second time without the sound and I think I liked parts of it better. Perhaps with more silent space between audio narration, the visual takes the lead, they could play off each other more effectively. Sometimes it felt like the animation was forced to keep up with the poetry. Again, thx for posting.
noahfrank 5 years ago
Well. This is definitely not the final version. It is a pencil test.
There are several things about it that I am fixing for the final, inked, timing and soundtrack perfect version.
brunonly2 5 years ago
Cool. I look forward to seeing any updates.
noahfrank 5 years ago
life is like an onion when you peel it you cry...
blindhands 5 years ago