you can almost hear the tradition clack clacking along like a railroad car, huh? I definately like this... simple, classic... and from the heart. Right on.
The next Bob Dylan? Quite possibly. Were you listening to Don't Think Twice while writing this? "I'm on the dark side of the road," and "I'm not saying you treated me unkind," are both in that song.
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WOW you SUCK, learn how to play guitar/sing before you perform because your gonna make people's ears bleed.
KEVlNYOO 4 years ago
lol.. bet u cant play better than him.. say urself 1st b4 say other
steevnlaw 2 years ago
very deep good job
blameitonthelorraine 4 years ago
I like this,very nice.any comment i make,will not do it justice......so i will say thank you very much......fatherfool
fatherfool 4 years ago
Great job. Some might not like it that you wear your Dylan badge so clearly, but personally I think it's fine. Write on!!
johnisfun 5 years ago
good song your a awsome writer. i wont to write songs too but i need advice V.V can u pm me some?
gaararocks333 5 years ago
The ending verse is simply incredible....
So I'll just go on with my lonesome stroll
Don't worry about me, it's not that cold
Against the wind I've got my feather coat
But it's really the pain in here that chills my soul
WOW
KDANTEATER 5 years ago
you can almost hear the tradition clack clacking along like a railroad car, huh? I definately like this... simple, classic... and from the heart. Right on.
MystieB 5 years ago
The next Bob Dylan? Quite possibly. Were you listening to Don't Think Twice while writing this? "I'm on the dark side of the road," and "I'm not saying you treated me unkind," are both in that song.
KDANTEATER 5 years ago
u'r spot on! Was definitely listening to alot of "Dont think twice" when i wrote this one.
micoolcho 5 years ago
nice harmonica skills xx
ilshim 5 years ago
that was beautiful!
x.x where's ur audience?!
BUTAbutaXcha 5 years ago