Independent Woman Part 1

[sensenjoe]

hey guys, is it possible to upload the second part too? I am very anxious in seeing the other half of the story XD

[MetaSensuality1983]

Great vid. Awesome.  Really interesting.

[davwenyi]

where's the 2nd part??!?!

[Evens1]

Nice work!

EV

[agindependent]

I like the natural feel of things. The simple point-and-shoot style of filming. I'll be constructive for my critic: Title/Credit text cannot be too fancy. Keep it simple. Cinematography: it's good to storyboard and understand rules such as the 180-rule as to not cause discomfort for audiences for each scene. Audio: When you edit, fade one audio over another to make sure that the tone doesn't change when a scene changes. Overall a good movie, will be waiting for part 2.

[GlennAxion]

thanks for the constructive criticism. I agree with all of the things you said except for the part you said u like the natural feeling of things. I think the we failed to keep the flow of the movie in 1 direction. good to see there's another helpful critic out here

[RhythmFreak]

i searched my brother's name "russell goh".

and i got this.

can't find any link though.

[GlennAxion]

one of the actors name is russel liew..