You did great at 3:20, you hit that higher note solid, without hesitating, but it gets sharp about 2 seconds later. Just smooth it out. Sorry if I am being strict with my criticism, but I am just trying to help. This is good, but it will be even better if you correct those, and it will sound better. For the most part, it was good, the mistakes you made were very, VERY minor, except for when you went sharp at 3:23. :D
This is actually pretty good. There are some parts that you seem out of breath Eg. 2:02 Ish, you kind of cut that off. Don't know if thats why, but you should work on your stamina, that could really help with some of muse's songs. Also, around 2:08, where you go to that higher note, it goes sharp at the beginning, sounds like your hesitating there. Just be sure of yourself there. These could just be accidents, which happen. Sry if im being strict. also, 2:33 isn't that low, go an octave up
You did great at 3:20, you hit that higher note solid, without hesitating, but it gets sharp about 2 seconds later. Just smooth it out. Sorry if I am being strict with my criticism, but I am just trying to help. This is good, but it will be even better if you correct those, and it will sound better. For the most part, it was good, the mistakes you made were very, VERY minor, except for when you went sharp at 3:23. :D
hcvideoproductions 1 year ago
@hcvideoproductions thanks haha I will work on the mistakes and maybe post another vid if I get the time :)
AnonSingerMuse 1 year ago
This is actually pretty good. There are some parts that you seem out of breath Eg. 2:02 Ish, you kind of cut that off. Don't know if thats why, but you should work on your stamina, that could really help with some of muse's songs. Also, around 2:08, where you go to that higher note, it goes sharp at the beginning, sounds like your hesitating there. Just be sure of yourself there. These could just be accidents, which happen. Sry if im being strict. also, 2:33 isn't that low, go an octave up
hcvideoproductions 1 year ago